A Time to Grow: A Finding Nemo Fan Comic!! (Tenth set up!)

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#21

((Youā€™re welcome for that. :slight_smile: ))

ā€œWhy am I trying to find cattle?..Oh, look, shrimp!ā€

Haha! You capture Doryā€™s personality so well!

#22

Yeah you do :slight_smile: That was cool. Again, I was wondering what would take the place of the song sequenceā€¦

#23

Okay, well unless I hear complaints against it, and because Iā€™m impatient ( :smiley: ), Iā€™ve decided to post this thing one page at a time.

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#24

I personally like waiting for the longer pages, but reading it in short pages with short intervals isnā€™t going to kill me. :wink: Itā€™s your story - if you enjoy doing it that way, be my guest! Iā€™ll just stand by and wait for you to get me OFF of this cliffhanger :exclamation: :stuck_out_tongue:

#25

OH NOES, cliffhangers arenā€™t good, I should know. 8D I honestly am already not sure of the one-page thing myself, something about it feels weird. :confused: And I honestly already have the next 40+ pages of this comic done, Iā€™m just putting it in intervals so it feels a bit like a fanfic and so I have time to figure out what Iā€™m doing for the proverbial remainder of the comic. Iā€™m currently all the way to the ā€œstampedeā€ scene but Iā€™ve hit slight writerā€™s block that Iā€™m slowly getting past.

The good thing is that summer is almost here for me and Iā€™m getting back into the kick of editing this comic, so I should have adequate time then. :wink: So that means I might post one or two more pages later today, or at least enough to get you off that cliffhanger. :smiley:

#26

Muchos gracias! :smiley:

#27

De nada! :smiley: Three more pages up, hopefully not too cliffhanger-ish this time. :wink:

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#28

Aweome, CGI. :open_mouth:

#29

Ahhh, much better! I am at peace, and not hanging off the edge of a cliff! :smiley:

Funnyness! :sunglasses:

ā€œJust try not to-ā€ ā€œAH-CHOO!ā€ ā€œ-sneeze.ā€ :laughing:

#30

Oooh, very good there CGI!

#31

I liked how you rendered the characters into the scenes and that was a fantastic job, but to be ture I found the story a bit dull, may be there ainā€™t many jokes or something, or the lack of sound which is making say this. I hope the story gets better as the story progresses.

#32

Hopefully, it will - it can be pretty darn hard to stage action the right way in photoshop and Iā€™m trying not to keep the script too close to the TLK script to keep it from being too redundant. :laughing: Like I said before, itā€™s an experimental project.

Anyhoo, the next 4 pages are up!

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#33

Dude, really, really nice.

#34

Cool. Weā€™re getting up to a dramatic scene, I can sense it :slight_smile:

#35

lennonluvr9 is right - the next scene is bound to be full of drama.

#36

Not sure what you mean by ā€œdramaticā€, but like a said before, I wasnā€™t quite able to stage an actually chase or anything, so hopefully these next few pages wonā€™t be a let-down. On a side note, I may be re-doing (or at least adjusting) the next pages.

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Teed off clownfish - 2 points
Bernie and Baz - Crabcakes.

:smiley:

#37

I mean I know something dramatic happens near this point in Lion King and so Iā€™m expecting there to be some drama soon. Like even in the upcoming pages when I assume Marlin is ā€œgoing to teach his son a lessonā€

#38

Oh, yeah, donā€™t worry, thatā€™s there. :wink:

#39

Go Marlin, go marlin, itā€™s your birthday, itā€™s your birthday!! :sunglasses: :laughing:

Loved it. :smiley:

#40

Next five pages. :smiley:

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