Ahhh, much better! I am at peace, and not hanging off the edge of a cliff! 
Funnyness! 
“Just try not to-” “AH-CHOO!” “-sneeze.” 
Oooh, very good there CGI!
I liked how you rendered the characters into the scenes and that was a fantastic job, but to be ture I found the story a bit dull, may be there ain’t many jokes or something, or the lack of sound which is making say this. I hope the story gets better as the story progresses.
Hopefully, it will - it can be pretty darn hard to stage action the right way in photoshop and I’m trying not to keep the script too close to the TLK script to keep it from being too redundant. Like I said before, it’s an experimental project.
Anyhoo, the next 4 pages are up!
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Dude, really, really nice.
Cool. We’re getting up to a dramatic scene, I can sense it 
lennonluvr9 is right - the next scene is bound to be full of drama.
Not sure what you mean by “dramatic”, but like a said before, I wasn’t quite able to stage an actually chase or anything, so hopefully these next few pages won’t be a let-down. On a side note, I may be re-doing (or at least adjusting) the next pages.
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Teed off clownfish - 2 points
Bernie and Baz - Crabcakes.
I mean I know something dramatic happens near this point in Lion King and so I’m expecting there to be some drama soon. Like even in the upcoming pages when I assume Marlin is “going to teach his son a lesson”
Oh, yeah, don’t worry, that’s there. 
Go Marlin, go marlin, it’s your birthday, it’s your birthday!!
Loved it.
Next five pages.
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“Brando” - haha, leave it to Dory to make light of a dark situation.
Gee, it’s like watching “Lion King” in my mind - I can just hear that music now… Well done.
Heh-heh, hopefully that’s a good thing?
ohhh Nemo, you’ve been a naughty boy! Ha!
No - it’s a very good thing.
Yay!!
Five more pages. I am happy to say that I’m FINALLY getting past some writer’s block on this thing. I know you’re thinking “What writer’s block? It’s an adaptation!” Well, let’s just say I had to take an entirely new approach to the wildebeest stampede…
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I just have to say that I think page 53 is my favorite page to come out of this comic so far. <3
Awww! That was so cute at the end! And kinda sad.
AMAZING! I still wish that there was a song sequence, but WELL DONE! Is it the end?
Nemo fits Simba’s part really well. Why wasn’t Pearl in it? And I can’t imagine Gil trying to kill Nemo, but it was very creative. Dory didn’t even need to “act”, she just went on being herself. I loved it.
Again, EXCELLENT JOB!
hey, I’m not finished reading yet, i’m still working on it (on page 24)
but , it is really really really amaizing! I’m loving every second of it!
It actually reminds me of the lion king! alot!
like marlin is mufasa and nemo is simba. gill is like scar and dory…hmmm well…idk what dory is.
I can’t wait to finish because I love this!
If this was a fanfiction on Fanfiction.net I would add it to my favorites!
Edit: Dory is like Zazu