((You’re welcome for that. ))
“Why am I trying to find cattle?..Oh, look, shrimp!”
Haha! You capture Dory’s personality so well!
((You’re welcome for that. ))
“Why am I trying to find cattle?..Oh, look, shrimp!”
Haha! You capture Dory’s personality so well!
Yeah you do That was cool. Again, I was wondering what would take the place of the song sequence…
Okay, well unless I hear complaints against it, and because I’m impatient ( ), I’ve decided to post this thing one page at a time.
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I personally like waiting for the longer pages, but reading it in short pages with short intervals isn’t going to kill me. It’s your story - if you enjoy doing it that way, be my guest! I’ll just stand by and wait for you to get me OFF of this cliffhanger
OH NOES, cliffhangers aren’t good, I should know. I honestly am already not sure of the one-page thing myself, something about it feels weird. And I honestly already have the next 40+ pages of this comic done, I’m just putting it in intervals so it feels a bit like a fanfic and so I have time to figure out what I’m doing for the proverbial remainder of the comic. I’m currently all the way to the “stampede” scene but I’ve hit slight writer’s block that I’m slowly getting past.
The good thing is that summer is almost here for me and I’m getting back into the kick of editing this comic, so I should have adequate time then. So that means I might post one or two more pages later today, or at least enough to get you off that cliffhanger.
Muchos gracias!
De nada! Three more pages up, hopefully not too cliffhanger-ish this time.
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Aweome, CGI.
Ahhh, much better! I am at peace, and not hanging off the edge of a cliff!
Funnyness!
“Just try not to-” “AH-CHOO!” “-sneeze.”
Oooh, very good there CGI!
I liked how you rendered the characters into the scenes and that was a fantastic job, but to be ture I found the story a bit dull, may be there ain’t many jokes or something, or the lack of sound which is making say this. I hope the story gets better as the story progresses.
Hopefully, it will - it can be pretty darn hard to stage action the right way in photoshop and I’m trying not to keep the script too close to the TLK script to keep it from being too redundant. Like I said before, it’s an experimental project.
Anyhoo, the next 4 pages are up!
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Dude, really, really nice.
Cool. We’re getting up to a dramatic scene, I can sense it
lennonluvr9 is right - the next scene is bound to be full of drama.
Not sure what you mean by “dramatic”, but like a said before, I wasn’t quite able to stage an actually chase or anything, so hopefully these next few pages won’t be a let-down. On a side note, I may be re-doing (or at least adjusting) the next pages.
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Teed off clownfish - 2 points
Bernie and Baz - Crabcakes.
I mean I know something dramatic happens near this point in Lion King and so I’m expecting there to be some drama soon. Like even in the upcoming pages when I assume Marlin is “going to teach his son a lesson”
Oh, yeah, don’t worry, that’s there.
Go Marlin, go marlin, it’s your birthday, it’s your birthday!!
Loved it.
Next five pages.
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