Hi. Hehe. If you are wondering about the title, then you should read my other Cars fanfic. You’ll understand.
Anyway, I am writing a fanfic about the story of Cars from Sally’s point of veiw. It starts when she is leaving L.A, and will end, at, well, the end of the movie. I’ve only done three chapters, but I think so far this is my best.
i’d have to say that pixar themselves should have made that…it absolutely created the base for the story starting with Sally instead of McQueen. It really made the pieces fall together. Well done…will wait for more.
I like this…it’s intriguing to see the Cars story from Sally’s P.O.V (and she’s one of my favourite characters). And your fan-made characters of her ex and sister sound interesting too. I like how you hear her inner thoughts throughout the scenes from the movie (like in the courthouse), and the conversations (especially the ones with her sis) have a natural ‘flow’ and sound convincing.
Can’t wait for the next chapter! It’s also nice to meet another Cars fanfic writer, check mine out if you have the chance.
K, I did 5,6, and 7. I’m beginning to feel like it’s going to be to long, since I’m barely halfway into the movie. I think I may need to start making chapters longer.