I’ll go with nut case. XD
Wow, Jessie… I never knew that I could possibly hate Bubba more than I already do, but after reading chapter 9, I’m going to have to take back that statement! In fact, I would be hard-pressed to find a word good enough to describe my loathing towards him (although I thought abhor was a pretty good one last time.)
Bubba is actually a really well crafted character, especially considering that there is universal hatred towards him! I mean, usually you always have those one or two people rooting for the villains. And as much as I hate to admit, he most certainly is a major driving force in the story.
Anyway, awesome chapter, things are really heating up! It was pretty dark, but hey, you did warn me! I can’t wait for the next one, I check this thread every time I get onto PP! Definitely my favorite fanfic of anything out there!
I still do hate Bubba, though. 
I’m just waiting for karma to do its work! Sweet revenge!
Note: Alright this is one of my smaller chapters. But I hope you still like it. 
I rushed it because you guys wanted it so bad. 
It was supposed to be way longer than this, but I put the rest of the chapter as chapter 11 and now all I have to do is finish chapter 11 which shouldn’t take long at all. I explained a bit about Bubba. If you don’t understand it, good, you’re not supposed to yet. On the other hand, if you do at least get the concept of what I told you about him in this chapter, then that’s fine too. If you didn’t, then like I said before, that’s fine. I wasn’t expecting you to. Don’t beat yourself up about it.
~Chapter 10~
After an hour of travel, Lightning finally reached where Chick lives. Lightning went up to the door and started to bang on it with his tire. A female car’s crying noises were heard inside. “DON’T YOU EVER SAY THAT TO ME AGAIN!”, yelled Chick from inside the house. “GET THE DOOR!” Lightning just had a furious expression on his face. The garage door open up slowly. it was opened just enough so that a hood could fit through. A female car’s hood poked through the crack. “Wh-Who is it?”, asked the female Toyota Corolla. Lightning grabbed the bottom of the garage door and pushed it up. The door flung open. Lightning looked at the female car. She had a light blue paint job and was small. She had tears in here eyes from Chick yelling at her. The Toyota backed up slowly. “WHERE’S CHICK?”, yelled Lightning. The Toyota started to shake. “Don’t hurt me! I’m just his maid! He’s b-back there…”, she stuttered. She pointed with her tire. Lightning sped in the direction she was pointing in. Lightning arrived at Chick’s baby’s room. Chick was parked in front of his baby. Lightning parked himself at the door and watched instead of just barging in…yet. Chick was turned away from the door so he didn’t see Lightning there. Chick lifted his tire and slammed it across his son’s face. His son started crying loudly. “NEVER HIT ANOTHER KID AGAIN!”, yelled Chick. He slapped Mike harder. Lightning revved. “Leave him alone.”, Lightning said, sternly. Chick turned around fast. “McQueen?”, said Chick, in shock. “What are you doing here?” “Give me my fiancee back.”, said Lightning.
“What are you talking about, McQueen?”
“You know what I’m talking about!”
“No I don’t!”
Lightning sped into Chick hard. “OW! What the heck was that for?”, asked Chick.
“I WANT SALLY BACK.”
Lightning punched Chick in the mouth. Chick put his tire up to his own mouth and grabbed it. He closed his eyes tight. Mike backed up into a corner and started screaming. The female Toyota came into the room. “What’s going on!?”, she asked.
The both didn’t answer her. Lightning grabbed Chick’s axles with his tires. “Why did you tell your kid to hit mine? Huh? WHY?”, asked Lightning, frantically. He punched Chick again. “I DIDN’T!”, Chick yelled. Lightning punched his left eye. Chick flinched and couldn’t hold his eye because Lightning was holding his axles down. He just squirmed around. Lightning looked over at Chick’s son, Mike, and saw Jane’s white paint on his green paint. When Lightning saw a part of his baby’s body on Chick’s baby he just got angrier. “WHAT DID YOU DO WITH SALLY?”, Lightning asked. “I went to your home to steal your Piston Cups! I didn’t know Mike hit your daughter! He did it himself! I didn’t take Sally! I swear! She wasn’t home when I went to your home!!!”, answered Chick. Lightning backed away. “Wh-What?”, asked Lightning. “Wasn’t home?” “Yeah.”, said Chick. “Lightning, I know I hate you, but I wouldn’t go as far as hurting your child in any way or stealing your girl. Besides, my girlfriend is always here.”
“Oh yeah? Where’s your girlfriend now?”
Chick pointed to the Toyota Corolla. Lightning looked at her and said, “I thought you said you were the maid.” “Well, I am.”, she said. “I was his maid before we started dating.” “Why were you crying when I came in?”, asked Lightning. The Toyota just looked down. Her mouth was dry. She peaked over at Chick. “That’s none of your business.”, said Chick. “Jane doesn’t have to tell you anything.” Lightning’s eyes widened. “J-Jane?”, he whispered. “Yeah?”, said Chick. “Why are you whispering?”
Lightning swallowed hard and mumbled, “That’s my daughter’s name…”
Chick’s usual annoyed expression turned into one filled with compassion. “Oh…I’m sorry.”, said Chick. “I should have watched Mike better…” “I should be getting back to Radiator Springs anyway…”, said Lightning. Jane drove to the door and opened it for him. “Here you go, Mr. McQueen.”, said Jane. Lightning just nodded and drove out of their home.
One hour later…
Lightning noticed the Radiator Springs’ welcome sign and in the distance saw the ‘RS’ printed on the Radiator Cap rock formation. Lightning drove over to Flo’s Café and parked in one of the bays. All of the cars in town were there. Lightning was parked between Mack and Mater. Everyone was silent. There wasn’t even any music playing on the radio. Lightning observed some more. All of the cars were looking down at their food and nothing else, and barely blinked. “Um…hello?”, said Lightning. Mater looked up but no one else did. He gave Lightning a quick glance and turned away fast. “Mater?”, asked Lightning. Mater didn’t answer. He just kept his eyes away from Lightning. He took a sip of oil. Lightning looked over at Flo who was parked with Mia and Tia waiting for a customer to call on them. “Flo? Mia? Tia?”, called Lightning. “No one came over to me yet.” Flo, Mia, and Tia just stayed in their positions, looking down at their hoods, not answering anyone. Lightning giggled and said, “I get it! You’re all playing the silent game. I’ll play too then.” Lightning stayed quiet for a few minutes. He looked around some more and noticed there wasn’t really a big reaction from anyone. “Guys? Are you okay?”
No answer.
“Doc?”
Doc didn’t answer.
Lightning rolled his eyes. “Well…good news! Chick didn’t take Sally!” The townsfolk cringed at the word ‘Sally’. Luigi, Ramone, Flo, Guido, Mia, Tia, Lizzie, Mack, Red, Sarge, and Fillmore backed out of their bays and drove to their stores in silence. Doc looked up at Lightning and drove over to him, slowly. Mater now knew it was okay to look at Lightning. “What did I say?”, asked Lightning. Doc cleared his throat. “You said Sally…”, said Doc. “Well my goodness I didn’t know everyone else would be that upset about her missing. I miss her like crazy too but I know we’ll find her. I mean, how far could she have gone?”, said Lightning. “Purdy far…”, Mater mumbled. “Huh?”, asked Lightning. Doc teared up and said, “Lightning…” “Yes?”, asked Lightning. Mater closed his eyes tight and tears ran from his eyes. He turned away. Lightning started to get nervous. “What’s going on…?”, he asked. “Lightning…”, repeated Doc. Doc sniffled. “It’s about S-Sally…” “Is she…?”, asked Lightning.
“No…”
“Oh thank the manufacturer…”
“We think it’s a no…but we know who took her and that’s why we’re all scared…”
“Who?”
“Well Sheriff looked at his records…he murders cars.”
“WHO???”
“Bubba.”
Mater gulped. Lightning started to shake. “I’ll kill him!”, he yelled. Lightning sped out of Flo’s and down toward Tailfin Pass. The townsfolk just stared in shock…and hope.
Well didnt see that coming great job!
Which part?
and Thank you!
bubba being a killier…
sorry double post 
I have no words to describe that chapter except these: that motherf***** BUBBA!!!
Ditto! 
Killer Bubba the Booooooooooob must die. Next chapter will be so intense I’ll explode…
Side Note: Wow, this story is pretty popular! Over 1000 views! Congrats Jessie! 
good thing its not 666… lol 
That was a great chapter, Jessie! The story’s certainly getting more intense… I can’t wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! 
Let’s just say, revenge.
Hey, Jessie, your story’s has been added to the fan fiction index! Not only that, but I believe it’s one of the most popular!
Yes, all fanfictions that have not been added since the last update of the index were added to the list today. I figured this was one of the most popular Cars fanfictions as of late, so I added it to the Most Popular list under Cars fanfiction.
Happy writing! Let me know if I can do anything else for your story in the index.
little chef
I’m so flattered!!!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!
Haha, no problem, hun!
little chef
OMG You’re the BEST!!!
Sorry I’m just like super excited!!!
I feel so happy for you jessie! You really do deserve it!
Congrats!
Also, I think it’s cool that we both have fan fictions we’re working on 
Thank you Robbie!
Maybe you can win best Finding Nemo FanFic of 2010 and I can win best Cars fanfic of 2010.
Isn’t there a contest about each fanfic or fanart?