Well, thats just it, they are still just kids, going on very dangerous missions. They will never have the training and experience needed to survive in some situations. This could result in even more dangerous situations then already present. So a age restriction seemed pretty well in place to me
@ A113 I didn’t even notice that, sorry
Thing about most spelling errors is that English isn’t my native language, so it is to be expected that errors will be made at some point. Ill keep an eye out for THOUGHTS thanks.
Anyway it’s ok to have different veiws about it. It makes our visions of the Incredibles universe unique and makes it more fun to read about it in fanfics. If everyone would think the same there would be no need for fanfics ey?
Well, I just finished reading your latest chapter. I have gotta tell you that it is getting more intresting and exciting! We get to see action I hope. And poor Dash for not going with his family. Oh well, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Well, still, it was a very intresting chapter. At least we know what the Supers will do. I can’t wait to see the plan inatiated into action. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I just read your latest chapter. You really got me glued to my computer with this. So, I was reading and I saw the whole picture playing in my head like a movie. Really amazing action scenes. i can’t wait for the next page.
Speaking of which, I loved the ending. It really was a great nail-biting, cliff-hanging ending. Really, really nicely writen.
Sorry for the delay in new pages, but family problems have risen this week so I got my mind on foocussing on other stuff for a while. As soon as all goes better the story will go on.
Well Vekoma, I am glad to see you back on Pixar Planet and updating again. As for your most recent chapter, i really loved it. It was quite exciting at furst and I loved how you switched from the parents back to the kids. Really nicely written. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Sorry for the lack of updates but at the moment I don’t really have a lot of feeling for writing.
A while ago some bad things happened in the family and im still having some serious moodswings and issues now and then that just makes a hell out of my life at the moment. I hope to have a update ready soon though.
I have not ‘talked’ to you before (because I’m a greenhorn on Pixar Planet), but I find your fanfic interesting. Your school for superheroes kinda reminds me of Z.oom or the Mutant Academy. I’d like to see your spin on it. And I really hope your problems work out okay. I’d love to see the rest of your story. I’ll write a more detailed review at a later date. See ya around!
The Drive-In Theatre
New page up!
I hope to pick up some pace again soon now I am feeling a lot better lately.
(I also started with my art again albeit a bit slowly, it’s been a while since I made something.)
Its glad to read from this story again Vekoma. Really nice chapter. The farther I read, the more intense it got. i really loved the ending. I wonder [spoil]what the shadowy creature really is.[/spoil] I guess I won’t know until the next update. Keep up the great work.
PS: I think you spelled someone’s name wrong. Frozone’s real name is spelled Lucius.
thanks.
Don’t worry; He’ll help you through it.