Mitch- Wow, what lovely
poetry! I can see all the details in my head just as you describe them- amazing work! 
TSS- I love how catchy and sharp your poem is, and the last line’s great.
The Star Swordsman - Not bad! Your poems are always fun. 
lennonluvr9, Maggie, and
lizardgirl - Aww – gee whiz. Thank you all very much!
Thanks Mitch. Yours is pretty good too.
The Star Swordsman - You’re welcome. And thank you!
And you are welcome too.
[spoil]Bomb Voyage!
I woke I was in Paris
It was beautiful to me
THe smell of food
a lovely mood
I felt wild and free!
I looked all around.
No one was down.
The day was fair,
I feel the air,
Like i was lifted off of the ground.
I didn’t want to hurt you.
I want to please you.
No more bombs,
no more Wrongs,
I shall entertain you.
Children pass me by
They see me in disgiuse,
Mime over here,
Mime over there,
Telling the story with motions and my eyes.
Oh I don’t want to leave,
But I wake up from my dream,
I look outside,
I try to hide,
Running again from the Incredibles team.[/spoil]
edited by PixarVixen ~~=oP
Great poem TSS!
Thanks. I was thinking this.
[spoil]We saw Bomb Voyage in Ratatouille.[/spoil]
It makes you wonder what happened after TI. How did he get there? Did he give up his life of crime? I just thought of one lame way of a answer.
Edited. Please refrain from openly displaying spoiler content in your posts. – Mitch
Very nice poem, The Star Swordsman!
THanks Mitch.
You are most welcome!
Well, should you put spoiler tas on the whole poem, because it kinda gives a clue of you know who Mitch.
Nice poem, TSS. 
Pretty nice poem, TSS!
Thanks you guys. I was bored and I thought I should bring this topic back to life again.
I think I’ll set to work and make a Incredibles poem.
And you didn’t becaaaause…? 
No worries. I took care of your poem, but please think next time, dude.
~~=oP
[b][Poem deleted at the request of
PV][/b]
Wow, thanks for sharing, The Star Swordsman. Very neat.
Well, I just found it on a DA profile
who is just as obsessed with Violet. I love this poem myself.