The Garage Sale (The Selling of Bo Peep)

My take on when Bo Peep was sold.

[url]http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6066700/1/The_bGarage_b_bSale_b[/url]

Warning! Sadness!

Awww… That was really good! Great job!

Wow, really powerful.

“Woody collapsed onto the sill. She was gone. She was really gone.”

Nice work.

I like it. I prefer quick one-shots over long stories, unless it’s something I’m really into, and this was the perfect length for me. I like your take on where Bo went, I’d rather she was sold than got broken :open_mouth:

Same with me. I like one-shots, and I’d even like to see this more drawn out. But, as you said, the changes were so sudden, so it suits the story to be short. Nice job!

That was pretty good. :slight_smile: I liked it.

I wrote a story kind of like this, but it was different, and nowhere near as good!

I knew a story like this would be written eventually, and great job! The dialogue was very similar, and I could tell you put alot of effort into it. Nice job again, and thanks.

I know I’m very late, but this was very good.

That was very well-written, yet sad at the same time. Good job. :smiley:

Aww, that was very sad, and very real. :frowning: Great job!!