Just a little WALL-E one-shot I wrote. Please critique.
Thanks!
That was BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, I adored it. You have a lovely attention to detail, and it was just so well written, andand…well, just plain adorable! ^^ It also made me cry, which is something I rarely do when it comes to fanfics, so you’ve already accomplished something amazing right there.
…Yeah, I loved this fic, can’t you tell? xD
Thank you so much! You don’t know how much it means to me when I hear comments like that!
ahhhhh…that was absolutely fantastic. A great masterpiece that Pixar themselves should look at…serioulsly
a totally heartwarming tale of two lovers finding the real meaning of life in the simplist ways…
Woa! That’s quite the compliment! Thank you so much! That actually made my week!
No seriously that was perfect…literally. It made my day just as much.
I’m crying!!! that was gorgeous! you completly captured Eve’s personality! A lot of people would just have her freak out and make her do the same reaction she had with the plant, but you went way deep into it!!! i love it i love i love it!!! best fanfic ever!!!
Perfect. Absolutely Perfect. THAT’S WHAT THEY SHOULD HAD ENDED WITH!