Well everyone, after months of waiting, I now present to you a new story. This is part one of a trilogy. I hope you guys enjoy. I worked really hard planning and writing this story.
The Incredibles: A New Threat
by The Star Swordsman
Rated PG-13 (Action Volence, Intense Fights)
Genre: Action/Adventure/Family
Summary: Part one of an Incredibles Trilogy. New enemies have arrived, to
threaten Metroville. What is their master plan? Can The Incredibles save the
day from this new menace? Join everyone’s favorite family of Supers on this
new adventure. Join everyone’s favorite family of Supers on this new adventure filled with action, mystery, romance, and fun.
Disclaimer: I do not own the Incredibles. The Incredibles belong solely to Brad Bird & Pixar/Disney. I own this story and everything written in it. I do have my own original characters, which belong to me. I write this story because I am an obsessed Incredibles fan and writing fanfics are a great way of expressing what you love. I also wrote this for my own pleasurable entertainment. I am willing to let any person use my ideas if they ask for my permission and credit me. In addition, any people at Pixar or owners of the Incredibles are encouraged to use any or all of my ideas, characters, etc in future Incredibles Adventures. Make sure to ask me and credit me first.
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New Enemies
On an island, located at least seventy-five miles off of California, a man rides a boat on to the sandy beach. The man gets off of the boat and steps on to the white sand.
“I’m here.” He says to himself as he begins his venture into the depths of the jungle.
This man was about thirty-years-old. He had a blond, crew cut hair and blue eyes. He had on a light blue colored shirt, dark blue jeans with rips at the knees, an unzipped black jacket, and an old baseball cap.
The man explored through the dense jungle for about an hour, with no breaks for water or recuperation. Finally, he came to his destination. In the heart of the jungle, located on the remote island, was an incredibly large fortress-like structure. Its walls measured up to about thirty-five feet high, made of strong, impenetrable metal. The man went through the large doors and inside the structure. The base looked really old. The walls look rusted, the odor was foul, and the lights were dim. Some light flickered on and off, signaling their last moments before they died out.
The man looked around, and then saw a robot on wheels approaching him.
“Master is waiting for you. Please follow me.” It said in a robotic tone.
The man nodded. He followed the robot down many hallways. The man had a sense of where he was being lead to, but did not ask. After about ten minutes of walking, the robot and the man arrived at a door. The robot knocked on the door three times before it automatically opened by itself, revealing a large empty room with a table and three chairs in the center.
Sitting at the table were two men. One was a muscular man, about seven feet tall, and bald. He wore a black outfit with dark green lines running up and down the side of the body, arms and legs. His name was The Commander. He was also a Super. He possessed two powers. First, he had super strength. He was strong enough to lift a car, a bus, a locomotive, and a plane all with one hand at the same time. His other power is invulnerability. His skin is so strong that no bullet or any amount of force can penetrate or damage it.
The other man was not a Super, but a cyborg. Half of his body is constructed of metal. With his metal body, his overall strength was increased tenfold. He had a built in laser blaster, rocket booster, and other weapons. While half of his body is metal, the other half wore a black super-suit-like outfit. His name was Morticon.
“Ah, I am glad you accepted my invitation Metamorph.” said Morticon in a menacing voice.
The man smiled as he joined the other three men. Metamorph had the power to transform into anyone or anything he desires. In addition to appearance, he obtains the abilities of who or what he transforms into. For example, if he was to morph into Mr. Incredible, not only will he look like him, but will gain his strength as well.
“Our plan is nearly complete, but I realized something was missing.” Morticon said. “The Commander and I have planned this for many years, but we knew something was missing. You will play an essential role in our plot.”
“Anything to make those Supers pay for locking me up in the NSA Prison.” Growled Metamorph. He walked up to the two men and sat down. “Lets get down to business shall we? What is our plan?”
“Patience my friend.” Said the Commander. “Before we start our Master Plan, we need to take care of the small things.”
Morticon added, “That is correct. Now pay attention you two. Our first plan of attack is to strike the NSA Museum of Science and Technology. Those Supers will be so occupied with so much, by the time they figure out what is going on, it will already be too late.”
The three of them laughed as the sun started to set over the horizon.
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Comments and reviews of all kinds are accepted. I accept praises, comments, criticisms, and flames.
No, I get what you mean… that guy musta be 
Not to mention you make corrections pretty fast too! 
. I wonder what you’ll do with them this time. I loved their relationship in your last fanfic. I hope it will be just as good or better in this one