lizardgirl- Thanks.

I've always wondered about my coloring. It always seems to come out grainy. That's what I like about black and white-- it tends to come out smoother. But in this picture it kind of helped with the texture of the clothes.
TAMATER- That's OK if you don't like the second one. Like I said, constructive criticism is welcomed. I'm glad you at least liked the first one.

Thanks for commenting.
The Star Swordsman- Thanks again.

And if you ever make another Viony vid, you can use it if you want. And I have two other really good ones of them that you'd REALLY like. I'll try to upload them as soon as I can.
Mitch- Thank you so much. Shading is probably my favorite thing to do with a drawing. I also love contrast. Like you said, it makes the picture more interesting to look at.
Alright, guys, here's your first update.
This one is a rendering of what I think Violet would look like at 16 years old.
This drawing is based on
Dash's idea of Violet wearing a trench coat and fedora over her super suit. There are two versions of this, and I'd like to know which one you guys like better...
...version 1...
... or version 2.
P.S. Is that a fedora? If not, could someone, please, show me a picture of one?