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After The Storm

Postby SallyMcQueen » Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:31 am

Hi guys! :) This is my first published fanfiction for Cars. It's going to be a very short story, only a handful of chapters and it's basically a connection story that shows what happened after Lightning left R. Springs till the big race; on both sides, Lightning and the R. Springs gang. I know that this chapter is probably boring considering that it's a canon retelling but I hope it at least interests some of you. Oh, and I'd like to send a huge, gigantic, never-ending thank you and shout out to my amazing friend MissCarrera.

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From one of the gas pumps at Flo's, Sally watched helplessly as Lightning's trailer closed and his driver began to drive away, the huge crowd following right behind them. She heavily sighed as she reversed and turned the other way to go to the Cozy Cone when she saw a sleek, turquoise car that she recognized from TV slowly drive up to Doc, who she didn't notice there before.

"Hey, are you Doc Hudson?" The car asked politely.

Doc answered with in his usual gruff tone of voice, "Yeah."

"Thanks for the call." The car smiled and drove away, her cameraman in tow. Sally's eyes widened as she pieced it together. No wonder they had known where Lightning was because Doc let them know.

Doc looked to see Sally staring at him with wide eyes and mouth slightly agape. "You called them?"

He shrugged and tried to reason with her, "It's best for everyone, Sally."

Sally wasn't going to take it, she couldn't believe that someone like Doc would be so selfish. "Best for everyone…or best for you?" Not bothering to stay around for an answer, she drove off into the street and stopped at the side of the road by the motel watching the red trailer, surrounded by spotlights from helicopters disappear into the dark, dessert night. Sally closed her eyes, she didn't want to watch him leave this town, leave them…leave her.

The other residents, now joined by Doc, moved in close together and with all unfixed gazes had mirroring emotions of somber. "I didn' get to say goodbye to 'im." Mater said sadly, the fact that his best buddy was gone hitting him hard. Sally had had enough and drove into the motel lobby, stopping to take one last look, seeing that the road into town was back to what it usually was- empty. It's like he was never here. With one look at the perfect, newly paved road, she realized it was a trademark; proof that he was here. She would never be able to drive on it again without thinking about Lightning. The first tear began to fall as she turned off the neon sign that already brought back nostalgia of the pure bliss that occurred not even an hour ago.

The others watched as Sally heartbrokenly crawled back into her place of work. They all took that as their cue to go home, and without a word, drove to their separate destinations for the night. All except Doc. He watched, one by one, as the neon lights he hasn't seen in almost thirty years say their goodbyes as well. Left in the dark, the old-time racer gazed at the blinking yellow stoplight and couldn't help but wonder if he had made a huge mistake.

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Well, I guess that's it for this one. :lol: Thanks for reading and reviews and all are appreciated. :mrgreen:
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:47 pm

What?! No one commented on here! :cry: Well, you got some FFN reviews (including one from moi) so you know I would love for you to continue this. :mrgreen:
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Re: After The Storm

Postby SallyMcQueen » Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:31 am

Ahh, well you know.. :| Teehee, thanks. :mrgreen: <3
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:37 am

It's a much smaller crowd on here though. And it's just the start of the story so they may not comment until later. But yeah, I'll be waiting. :D P.S. Love the new sig & avatar set!
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Re: After The Storm

Postby ObsessedWithPixar » Fri May 18, 2012 3:28 am

This has been thus far an incredible story! Even though the first chapter was just a rewrite of the scene from the movie, I was near crying, SallyMcQueen. You conveyed their emotions so solidly... so completely perfectly... excuse me, I think I need to let it out... it's so beautiful! :cry:
OK, I think I'm all right now... I guess it's just because Pixar makes me get emotional...
I anticipate the next chapter really badly, but I will be patient; as the Cleaner guy in TS2 said, "You can't rush art!" :)
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Re: After The Storm

Postby SallyMcQueen » Sat May 19, 2012 5:41 am

Wow! :D Haha, thank you OWP! That's really nice to hear, err, see. :lol: <3
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Re: After The Storm

Postby Ballboi » Sat May 19, 2012 9:04 am

I loved it! That scene was one of my favorites from the original film.
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Sat May 19, 2012 7:45 pm

Yes, you're right, can't rush it, but I'm still looking forward to it. :wink:
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Re: After The Storm

Postby SallyMcQueen » Sun May 20, 2012 2:55 am

Thanks, Jordan! Yes, honestly, I think that scene is one of the best in Pixar history. :)

Rebecca: :lol: As the school year starts to end, I get more and more time but then I get lazy. 8D Plus, I'm kind of using all my creative juices for something else right now. :)
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Tue May 22, 2012 12:07 am

I know what you mean. It actually takes a lot of effort to sit down and get to the final project of even just a chapter. < That sounded really sarcastic but I'm being literal! I'm a lazy person too, and if I'm not in the mood then I won't get much done and I'll just waste time making something I don't like in the end anyways. But you put your creative juices into whatever you like! :D
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Postby SallyMcQueen » Wed May 23, 2012 2:48 am

It does. The hardest part is starting, the rest is somewhat easier. But I'm glad you understand exactly . :wink:
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Thu May 24, 2012 12:15 am

Yup! I know what you mean! :-D)
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Re: After The Storm

Postby SallyMcQueen » Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:05 pm

Hello guys! Sorry for the delayed update. I hope you guys are still readers of mine on here. Chapter 2. :)
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Mack’s bright headlights pierced through the dark night as he trudged along, his engine being the only easily noticeable noise. The press had followed the bright red trailer for miles but the road was now deserted, also void of any streetlights, as he safely crossed over the railroad tracks.

Mack was relieved and worried at the same time; happy to have found Lightning alive but concerned for his boss. When arriving at the small town with the hordes of reporters, he expected the racecar to practically jump into his trailer with eagerness to leave. He was surprised to find that it seemed like, although happy to see Mack, Lightning didn’t want to leave…at all. And he couldn’t help himself overhearing Lightning’s conversation with the blue Porsche. What had happened in the past few days? He had never heard Lightning speak to someone that way before and it almost hurt him to interrupt but Harv had put his job on the line.

After nearly half-an-hour of nothing but quiet, Mack dared to ask “Hey kid, you okay?”. It was first responded with silence, then a drained sigh and a resounding click, indicating that Lightning had turned the radio off. Mack sighed, shaking his large hood. He figured it was best for him to let the rookie be and just focus on his job as he sped up pulling onto the onramp for the Interstate.

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“We‘re going to contact every news media station, make sure they put out the right story. You don’t want a whole bunch of lies coming up from this fiasco. I got calls from everyone, Oprah to Jay, all wanting an interview with you. You‘re-” Lightning sat in his trailer, low on his shocks and in spirit, hearing Harv talking to him. But he wasn’t listening. He didn’t care. Honestly, he was tired of hearing only about himself.

“….Oh, and make sure Mack steps on it. You got to get at least get some practice on the track before the big race. Everyone‘s going to be watching you, star. You got to-” Lightning was surprised at himself for the race had become completely forgotten to him. Not hearing Lightning answer didn’t seem to stop Harv.

“….The important thing is that you’re alive and we got you out of that hick town. This will all blow over and it’ll be like it never happened…. McQueen?”

Lightning remained quiet, not finding the energy or the care to reply.

Harv sighed. “Listen, don’t beat yourself up, kid. You don’t have time to. Focus on that race, baby, and you got a blinding bright future ahead of you.” Lightning heard Harv hang up then.

“And it’ll be like it never happened…”

That’s not what I want, Lightning thought. I don’t know what I want. He thought he already had everything he wanted; the fame, the money, the trophies. But now he’s learned that even with all of that, he really had nothing. Nothing until he detoured into town that hot, summer night that seemed so long ago already.

Being in the dark, quiet trailer, Lightning’s thoughts wandered off to the town’s residents; the first real friends he’s had in too long, cars he felt like actually cared about him. And there was no better friend than Mater. McQueen never thought that he would ever call a rusty tow truck as a friend, especially because of the way he avoided his overzealous sponsor owners. Mater was loyal and adventurous and although slightly irritating and silly, he had to admit that he couldn’t remember the last time he ad as much fun as he seemed to have with Mater, besides getting chased by a combine harvester and almost becoming scrap metal in a tractor field. He felt bad as he realized that he never even got to say bye to Mater. Then, he realized that it was probably for the best. Knowing Mater, he would of probably blubbed like a baby.

He never got to say bye to Doc either, which he was sure didn’t matter. It’s not like Doc cared whether he was gone or not. He hadn’t seen the Hudson Hornet since the day before and Lightning knew all he wanted was him out of his town, anyway. Lightning’s eyes squinted and his lip pouted as he thought of how unfair Doc was to him. But then he thought of how unfair he was to Doc and his face softened. Suddenly, he was back in that dusty, rundown garage surrounded by artifacts of Doc’s secret and forgotten past.

“When’s the last time you cared about someone except yourself, hotrod?”

It was such a complicated question with such a simple answer. Never. Or at least, not since "McQueen" became a household name. He only wished he had the chance to show Doc, that he was wrong, that he had changed, and that he did care about everyone in that town. It seemed like his engine skipped a cycle when he half-admitted that there was one he cared more deeply about.

Sally was just so… real. She was smart, kind, poised but if that tattoo proved anything, she also had a wild side. And Lightning could never forget beautiful. The way her turquoise eyes lit up and how wide she smiled when she saw the town aglow was permanently etched in his brain, just like the tears pooling in those same eyes and her final words would be too. And the way her fender felt against his! Like it belonged there, he could almost hear her engine purring. He’s not sure how far that night would of gone with her but he knows he would have been happy just being with her.

Sally was right (which he‘s sure she almost always is). It was much more than just a road. And for the first couple days, he was too blind to see that. McQueen glanced up at all of his own memorabilia that did nothing but remind him of the car he… was. It actually made him angry and looking at all the shrines to himself with pointed eyes, he wished he had enough anger to throw all those stupid things away. But there was a good thing. If it wasn’t for losing Mack on the Interstate that night, he would still be that car.

Lightning only felt worse as every mile took him farther and farther from the little town that started as ‘hell’ and ended as ‘home’.
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This was just a look inside Lightning's mind initially after leaving R. Springs. Check out the new cover for this story at the top! It's awesome, right? That's because it was made by no other than our own, MissCarrera. Shout-out to her and her work, thank you! <3 Reviews and all are appreciated. :D
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Re: After The Storm

Postby ObsessedWithPixar » Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:29 pm

This chapter was amazing, SallyMcQueen! I almost don't know how to get out the right words to describe it except that this story is, like I said before, beautiful. I can see this scene so well fitting into the film. Great job!
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Re: After The Storm

Postby MissCarrera » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:18 pm

*claps hands together* See how the banner looks so much better on here? :D

*claps hands together and stomps feet* I love this story so much!! :mrgreen: I already left my review on FFN so I won't bother repeating it on here. But yeah, can't wait for more from you! :)

And again, thanks for the shout-out! It was no trouble at all! :P
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