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My latest work

PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:57 pm
by St_Jons
http://vimeo.com/8470048

This is my latest piece of work for my course, I'm not 100% happy with it, for example the ending drags out a bit. The brief wasa 30second piece of motion graphics. There was meant to be contrasting opposites in there but I kind of got carried away with making pretty colours fly about haha

anyway let me know what you guys think

PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:55 pm
by MONS†ER
I put it in full screen and it looks amazing!
The music is great too.

PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:42 pm
by St_Jons
Cheers, I really appreciate that.
The music is called electro-phon, unfortunatly I i did not compose it

PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:02 pm
by Hannahmation
Neat! There's nothing wrong with making pretty colors fly around every now and then! :) My favorite part is around the 18 second mark.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:50 pm
by St_Jons
I'm now rendering out some new stuff to make the beginning more interesting. Also in the next couple of weeks I should have more work to put up here if you guys are interested

PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:43 pm
by St_Jons
http://www.vimeo.com/8693599 Heres the new version.

I hope those of you who watch it agree that it is an improvement. A lot of stuff has changed and my computer certainly struggled with rendering some of these scenes. I'd really appreciate any feedback you guys wish to give me.

Cheers

PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:22 am
by Hannahmation
I like your updated version! A fun improvement from your first version. I like what you did with the spheres at the beginning. And the whole thing seems to flow more smoothly. Nicely done!

PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:56 am
by St_Jons
Thanks hannahmation, lets hope my tutor feels the same way and vies me a good grade :wink:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:35 pm
by lennonluvr9
I liked it :) The pretty colors flying around are what I liked best about it