Fanfictions are a great way to
express your fandom. I dedicate this to my favorite movie of all time. Post fanfics or recomend any Incredibles
fics here.
Here is my first story.
“Violet Valor”
Violet, AKA: Invisigirl, must team
up with a super hero named Valor to save Tony from an evil, ruthless villian.
Rated: PG-13 (for violence
and langauge)
The Incredibles vs. The Eviles I
Violet’s super and favorite cousin is adopted to the family.
Together, the Incredibles will have to save the world from another family of super villains who bends on taking
over the world.
Rated T:
I read both of your fics (and
still have yet to review them). I really love reading both of your stories. I believe the guys at Pixar should
consider using your ideas for a future Incredibles sequel.
Have you guys read Dash’s fanfics? I swear they are so good. Maybe better than Mine. BTW
Dash, when are you going to post your sequel to “Reviving the Glory Days”?
I am dying to read some. Are you allowed to post stories here? I don’t mean links,
like the actual chapter?
I am quite intrested. Please some post. I promise you will get my
review each chapter.
I wonder what the story would be if Brad Bird made an Incredibles sequel. Here is a story of what might happen
if one is made.
The Incredibles: Syndrome’s Return
Synopsis: Syndrome
returns and that means bad new for the family of Supers. Plus, Violet gets an opportunity of a life time to be
normal, but how will it affect her family?
[b]Chapter
1[/b]
[u][b]Glory Days
Restored[/b][/u]
Three weeks has past since the defeat of the Underminer. Before
that, the Super Hero Relocation Program had been abolished. This resulted in Super Heroes going back to their old
jobs. Still, even with the return of Super Heroes, crimes are still being committed, mainly in
Metroville.
Metroville is a peaceful city. It has its restaurants, movie theaters, schools, a stadium for
all sports, shopping malls, parks and recreation centers, a library, and other stuff you might find in any other
city. The most distinguishing thing about this city is that it is home to some of the most well known, glorious,
famous super heroes in the world. But other than that, Metroville is a pretty normal place. . . well, almost
normal. . .
?Alright everybody! This is a stick up!? yelled one robber in the Metroville Grand City
Bank.
One of three robbers went over to the safe vault. He tapped his pistol on the large steel door.
?Alright, someone open this up.? he commanded. Nobody moved a muscle. ?I SAID SOMEONE OPEN THIS UP!?
The
robber aimed his handgun high into the air and fired a deafening shot. Many panicked and screamed for their
lives. The robber fired another shot in the air. The commotion ceased. The third robber aimed a shotgun at a
banker.
?You, get up!? he roared as he brought the horrified banker to her feet.
She slowly made
her way towards the large vault. She was about to open it when she froze. Chills were running down her spine. The
impatient robbers all aimed their firearms at the terrified banker. She carefully opened the safe. Finally, the
locks of the steel vault had been opened. The three robbers all collected money from the vault, loaded it into a
large sack, and into their getaway van. Altogether, it took them four trips to load their loot into the
van.
?Come on boys. Let?s get outta here before the cops come.? said one robber.
The three thieves
got into the van. The engine roared, signaling the car had been started. The driver stepped on the gas but
surprisingly, the car didn?t move an inch.
?What is wrong with this hunk of junk!? interrogated an
irritated robber.
The driver looked on his side mirror. What he saw completely shocked him. A big,
muscular man in a red super suit with a lower case ?i? planted on his chest was grasping on to the getaway
vehicle tightly.
?Mr. Incredible! Run for your lives!?
The three robbers jumped out of the vehicle.
Mr. Incredible, (aka: Bob Parr), who possessed the gift of super strength, hurled the van into the sky. It
disappeared into space. The three robbers all aimed their guns at Mr. Incredible. They were about to shoot when a
long, elongated arm wrapped around the delinquents legs and brought them to the floor. They looked up and saw
that the long arm had belonged to a heroine who was also wearing a red super suit with black gloves and boots,
the same as Mr. Incredible. She was known as Elastigirl (aka: Helen Parr), Mr. Incredible?s wife. She joined her
husband and both assumed a fighting stance. Realizing that they can?t beat both Supers, the three thieves decided
to split up.
?Honey, I?ll go after that one.? he pointed at a eluding robber. ?You get the other
one.?
?Roger that.? Elastigirl replied. ?But who will get the third guy??
The third robber ran as
fast as he could. He didn?t get very far, because another Super froze him right on the spot.
?Dude, you
need to chill out.? replied the Super known as Frozone.
Meanwhile, Mr. Incredible continued to chase down
the robber. After a running a couple meters, the robber thought he could escape by running though an alley way.
As he turned the corner and went through the thin alley, he found out that it lead to a dead end. He slowly
turned around and came face to face with Mr. Incredible. The next thing the robber did was either heroic or
stupid. (I?ll let you, the reader decide.) Anyways, the robber brought his arm back and delivered a punch to the
Super. Mr. Incredible caught his hand. With one quarter of an effort, he began to squeeze the delinquent?s
hand.
?OKAY, OKAY! I GIVE UP!? the robber agonized.
Mr. Incredible grinned at the robber and
carried him to a police car nearby.
At the same time, Elastigirl combated against the last remaining
robber. Things started out with the thief shooting at the heroine. Elastigirl dodges all of the bullets with
grace and nimbleness. After he ran out of bullets, he quickly reached into his pocket for some more ammo. This
gave Elastigirl an opportunity to strike. She sprung up into the air. At the peak of her jump, she delivered a
long, solid kick across the robber?s face, knocking him out. Elastigirl landed on her feet and went up to the
dazed robber. She hoisted the thief on to her shoulders. And carried him in to a patrol car. Policemen came and
congratulated the three supers.
?Thank you Supers. Good work.? thanked an officer.
?We?re just
doing our job.? replied Elastigirl.
Suddenly, a voice from Mr. Incredible?s communicator spoke. ?Mr.
Incredible, Elastigirl, it?s Rick from the NSA. Report to headquarters immediately.?
?Roger that Rick.?
acknowledged Mr. Incredible. He turned to his friend Frozone. ?Zone, I need you to take care of Jack-Jack for a
few more minutes.?
?Are you kidding me?? Frozone interrupted. ?That creature already destroyed my house
the last time you told me to take care of him a little later than usual!?
?Sorry Zone, but it?ll take a
couple minutes. Bye!?
Mr. Incredible could smell that a argument was about ensue if he stayed any longer.
Both he and his wife jumped into the Incredibile and raced to the National Supers Agency?s headquarters.
From the looks of this first chapter, It’s looking really good. I like the way you
describe Metroville and everything that happened after the Underminer incident. Great
chapter.
sweet .
I guess I can post the second chapter. Thanks for your reviews
guys.
Chapter 2
[u]
[b]The Junior
Heroes[/b][/u]
Meanwhile, on the suburban side of Metroville, a middle aged woman
arrived at the driveway of her beloved. She got out of her car and went to her trunk. After popping it open, she
began to unload her grocery bags. She carried the two bags to her front door step. When she opened the door to
her house, expecting to be greeted by her husband and children, she froze. She dropped her bags to the floor. She
found her home completely in ruins. She saw furniture overturned, glass all over the floor. . . and her children
and husband tied up on the couch. The mother immediately rushed over to her family.
?Honey, kids, what
happened?? she frightfully inquired.
No one answered. The dad and kids were all terrified, they couldn?t
move or speak. The mother had just reached into her purse and grabbed her cell phone. She was about to dial the
police when she heard a voice from behind.
?Do not call the cops lady, or else you?re gonna get
it.?
Two burglar emerged from the kitchen. One had a butcher?s knife in his hand. He brandished it at the
terrified mother. By now, she was frozen as a statue. The burglars inched closer to her, but she couldn?t move.
She glanced at the armed burglar, then at the cell phone, then back at the two burglars. She was about to call
the police when a third burglar locked her in a full nelson hold. The mother immediately screamed for help. The
kids, sitting on the couch, were scared to death. They watched helplessly as tears fell from their eyes. The
burglar with the butcher?s knife slowly approached the mother. He raised his arm, ready to deliver the killing
blow.
Suddenly, a reddish blur sped through the house and tripped every burglar to the floor. The reddish
blur stopped in front of the doorway.
?Horray! It?s Speedster!? celebrated the children.
Speedster,
(alias: Dashiell ?Dash? Parr) was the son of the famous Supers: Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl. Obviously,
according to his name, his super power is super speed, acceleration, and reflexes. He had blonde hair and was
wearing a red super suit with the same detail as Mr and Mrs. Incredible.
The three burglars scrambled to
their feet. They all rushed in towards the young Super. Speedster smiled and dashed out of the way. All of the
sudden, the door slammed right into their face. The burglars were knocked off of their feet. They were dazed for
a while. They got to their feet. Then a barrage of blows were delivered to the oblivious burglars. After
stumbling around, a large, round, purple orb had the burglars trapped. After being suspended in the air, the
violet orb that had them encapsulated vanished, resulting in them dropping to the ground.
?Invisigirl is
here!? cried a burglar. ?Run for your lives!?
The three burglars reached the door. Unfortunately, once
they opened it, they were greeted with a wooden pole to their backs. The wooden pole was levitating in midair.
Suddenly, the invisible figure wielding the pole became visible.
It was none other than the fourteen year
old Super named Invisigirl, (alias: Violet Parr). She was Speedster?s older sister, and a daughter to Mr.
Incredible and Elastigirl. She possessed the ability of invisibility and force fields. Invisigirl was wearing a
red super suit with black gloves and thigh-high boots. On her chest detailed an ?i?. Invisigirl had long, dark,
black hair that was pulled back by an orange headband.
?You?re all going to jail. And if Speedster ran
fast enough, the police should arrive right about. . .? Police sirens could be heard outside. ?. . . now.?
concluded Invisigirl.
?OPEN THE DOOR! THIS IS THE POLICE!? yelled a man from outside. The burglars had no
choice but to give up.
Several minutes later, after the criminals were apprehended, an officer went up to
the two young Supers.
?Thank you Incredikids. Once again, you both saved more innocent lives.? the officer
thanked.
?It?s all in a day?s work.? smiled Speedster. After he glanced at his sister. ?Isn?t that right
sis??
Invisigirl did not answer. She was talking to her mother, Elastigirl through her
communicator.
?Okay. . . sure. . . alright. We?ll be right there in five minutes. Speedster and I will
take the short cut. . . okay. . . bye.?
?What was that?? asked Speedster.
?It’s mom. She wants us
to go to the NSA headquarters immediately.?
?What is it about? Did we do anything wrong? Are you in
trouble? Did you do something. . . OW!?
Invisigirl gave her a well deserved slap to the back of the
head.
?Listen little twerp. Here are the answers to all of your questions. First, no I?m not in trouble.
I?m a good girl. I?m surprised to see you haven?t gotten into trouble with the NSA yet. Second, nothing is wrong.
Mom just wants us to meet her in the NSA headquarters. All she said is that it was very important.?
?Well
then, what are we waiting for? Let?s go!?
Invisigirl and Speedster instantly sprinted towards their new
home. Since their old one got blown up by falling debris, the family of supers had to move to move to another
house. It was not that far away from their old one. It was just five miles away from their old house and only ten
miles away from Violet?s middle school. The family?s new house was a two story house. It has a family room, a
living room, a dinning room, a kitchen, a laundry room, three bedrooms (one for each member of the family), two
and a half bathrooms, and a playroom for Jack-Jack. The family also has one giant screen TV, many comfortable
sofas, a coffee table, a fireplace, wooden floors, an oven, a microwave, and a swimming pool in the
backyard.
Anyways, the two young heroes arrived at their house and dashed through the door. They came to
the fireplace. Invisigirl reached inside and tapped the wall three times. All of the sudden, the fireplace rose
from the ground. As it rose up, two steel doors became visible. The doors opened up, revealing an elevator.
Invisigirl and Speedster all entered the elevator and pressed a button. The elevator doors closed and the
fireplace sank back into it?s neutral position.
The elevator took the two Supers down a couple miles below
the surface. Afterwards, the elevator doors opened up, revealing the National Supers Agency?s Headquarters. Once
they stepped inside, they were greeted by many workers and fellow Super. After saying hi and signing a couple
autographs, Invisigirl and Speedster made their way to the front desk, where a lady in a suit was working on some
paper work.
?Ah, Invisigirl and Speedster. And how are the NSA?s best young Supers doing?? she
greeted.
?Everything is so sweet!? Speedster replied a little hyper, being the ten year old energy ball he
is. ?There were these bad guys, and they were breaking in someone?s house, then I came in and was like ?POW? and
BAM? and I was like ?TAKE THAT YOU. . .? and then, Invisigirl, she was doing okay, but I. . .?
?Speedster.
. .? glared Invisigirl. The ten year old Super stuck his tongue out at Invisigirl. She rolled her eyes. ?So, I
understand the NSA wanted to see us??
?Yes, your mother and father is on the top floor with
Rick.?
Invisigirl replied. ?Thank you so much. Come on twerp. Our parents are waiting for us.?
The
two super siblings rode the elevator up to Rick?s office on the top floor. Once the elevator doors opened,
Invisigirl and Speedster saw their parents standing in front of a desk where Rick Dicker was sitting at.
A
lot has changed Rick since the Syndrome incident. Shortly afterwards, Rick Dicker received a huge promotion. Now
he is the Chief Executive of the National Supers Agency.
Rick cleared his throat then said, ?Incredibles,
I summoned all of you here for a very special assignment