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Postby NikChik11 » Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:21 am

Hiya! Just wanna give one of my stories some advertisement. I like this one the best, and it's the most popular one. XD (most all my stories suck) Except this one! Woo!

Tell me what ya'll think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596333/1/Hold_On
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Sat Nov 10, 2007 9:47 pm

Well, I really enjoyed reading it. I really loved the plot. It was really intresting.
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Postby NikChik11 » Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:12 am

Aw thanks TSS. ^_____^


I honestly HATE the beggining. :roll: I might re-write it laer on. :)
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:37 am

You hate the begining? I absolutely loved the begining. That is waht caught me on to the story.
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Postby NikChik11 » Mon Nov 12, 2007 2:49 pm

Oh.... really? I thought I used a bit to much dialogue. But if you say so! XD
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Mon Nov 12, 2007 10:50 pm

You're welcome NikChik! :wink:
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Postby NikChik11 » Mon Nov 12, 2007 11:59 pm

Lol, thanks! :wink:
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Postby danwisbey85 » Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:13 am

Liking this!!! :D
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Postby NikChik11 » Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:45 pm

danwisbey85 wrote:Liking this!!! :D




Aw, thank you! #^-^#
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:03 pm

I had been reading this but I didnt know it was updated till now. That ended on a bit of a cliffhanger, i'm interested to know what happens next!
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Postby NikChik11 » Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:00 pm

Aw, awesome! Might I ask which chapter you were on? The one with the cliffhanger? (I have so many I can't tell which one you're talking about! XD)
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Fri Nov 16, 2007 1:08 am

Whatever the last one was...Chapter 13.
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Postby NikChik11 » Fri Nov 16, 2007 3:38 am

Ok, awesome. XD I'll let cha know when chapter 14 pops up. :wink:
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:46 pm

Well I saw ch 14 popped up so I read it. :) Aww, how cute [spoil]that Lightning finally told Sally he loves her[/spoil]
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Postby NikChik11 » Fri Dec 07, 2007 3:31 am

Oh, woops! I was supposed to tell ya'll wasn't I? xD

Well........ Chapter 14 is up! :lol: And thank you LL9! :D
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