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Postby gottalovepixar » Tue Oct 24, 2006 9:51 pm

Cars 2

Chaper 1 : Surprise Surprise and Chapter 2
Chapters 3&4
Chapters 5&6
Holiday Chapter 7 : A Holiday Helping HandChapter 8 : Trouble On Route 66Trouble On Route 66 Part II & Chapter 9 :Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes
Chapter 10 :Ideas and Chapter 11 :Shame , Shame , Angie ( first , really neat , paragraph chapter ! ;p
Chapter 12 :Saved by The SoldierChapter 13 :Trouble on Turn 3 , Parts I and II
Chapter 14 :Homesick and Chapter 15 :Never Say GoodbyeChapter 16:Dorm Buddies Chapter 17: Argument and Chapter 18 : Daredevil SpiritChapter 19 : She Loves It , She Loves it Not and Chapter 20: It's Good To Forgive and Chapter 21 : Perfect
Epilogue


[url=http://www.pixarplanet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=574&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=180]The

Screamin' Banshee [/url]

The Dare of

Love

Chapter 1
Chapter 2&3

Sally's

Nightmare

Chapters 1&2
Chapters 3&4
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My Pixar fanfiction pledge

I , gottalovepixar , pledge to do the following :

- to make sure that any fanfiction that isn't pixar related will not be mentioned here .

- write at least one chapter of my fanfiction eack week , though it will not conflict with any rehearsals , homework , or any other academics

- revise chapters of Cars 2 every other weekend when the internet is not reachable ..

- Make sure any fanfiction is not cheesy of any kind , including mozerella , provilone , or plain old american cheese ..

- Make sure every fanfiction that is posted on pixar planet is rated T or lower . Any fanfiction rated higher will only have one link to it , while my signature will show if there is a new chapter up , inculding a link for the lazy people . All M rated fanfictions will be on fanfiction.net ONLY ..

- Have fun with my fanfictions , including small appearances by my pixar planet buds (with their permission of coures )

signed , sort of ...

gottalovepixar

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Chapter 1

: Suprise , Surprise

It'sthe biggest race of the eason , the Daytona 500 . Many cars are cheeringfor

their favorite racer , a majority of them shouting " Mcqueen! " Others are sitting , waiting for the

race to start , buying tons of antenna balls and fuel .

After last season , with Chick Hicks winning the

cup and Lightning Mcqueen getting The Fabulous Hudson Hornet , also known as Doc Hudson , for his new crew chief

, not to mention him turning down Dinoco , everone was stoked to see what would happen this year . Questions

needed to be answered , the main one being " who the heck's gonna get dinoco ?? "


"

Welcome to the Daytona 500 , the first race of the piston cup season , " said Bob Cutlass to the crowd and

home viewers ," Everyone here is excited , but mostly because of the mysterious dinoco racecar !

"

" That's right Bob ! " Darrel Cartrip replied back , "Nobody but Dinoco and The

King know who it is . "

" Now remember Darrel , He's retired now , so it's Strip Weathers .

"

" Do you seriously think that people will stop calling him The King ? " Darrel rolled his

eyes a bit . He soon gasped , " I think it's the Dinoco racecar ! "

" What a lucky car

that guy is ! " exclaimed Bob , " Think about it , not only will they race with ease with Dinoco , they

get a bunch of-"

" Hey ! that's not a guy ! It's a girl ! "


" No way !

" Lightning replied from the pits , while everybody else just stared at the bright blue Plymouth Superbird

with a big smile on her face .

" That's right folks , " Bob's voice announced from the speaker

," for the first time in Piston Cup history , a female is a racecar ! "

" Hmm ,"

Lightning said to himself ," let's go see who this girl is ."

Sally overheard , and gave

Lightning a look that said " I know what you're thinking , I'm your girlfriend , if you forgot .

"

" Well , if you don't want the poparazzi to know were dating , i'll have to go say hi , I

mean , who wouldn't ? "

"Mm Hm " Sally rolled her eyes , " right

."

Lightning drove up to the racecar . She wasn't far from him , as he noticed she entered from the

closet entrance near him .

" Hey , " Lightning introduced himself , " I just to be the

first to say , welcome to the racing sport , and good luck for next week . " He knew the car had only come

to watch , as most rookies did on the first race .

Well , thank you very much , " the girl replied

, " I'm Angie . BUt I'm afraid you've already been beaten by somebody . "

" Oh really ,

by who ? "

" By my father , " Angie answered back with a smile .

" And who's

your father ? " Lightning asked , confused .

" Angie , " The King shouted from behind them

, " come over here !"

" 'kay daddy , be right there ! "

Lightning's grill

dropped open . He couldn't believe it . He sitll couldn't believe it when a fly flew right into his grill

.

Angie was The King's daughter

.

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So , what

do you think ?I just added the fly , thinking it would be funny
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:24 am

Unfortunately ,my title got cut off . It was supposed

to say

Gottalovepixar presents "Cars 2 " writer and director : me

sorry about that

guys(and gurls !)

Edit : please tell me what you think , or i will think you all hate it . and then i'll

cry . :`-( lol ! :lol:
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:43 am

Nice work

for your first chapter. Keep writing. I can tell this is going to be a great fic.
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:54 am

thank you . It gets more interesting , but i was afraid it would get too long , though i have

seen longer .
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Postby Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 4:06 am

gottalovepixar wrote:though i have seen

longer .


Yeah. Mine. :P

Nice job so far,

gottalovepixar. Your "script-written" fan fiction has caught my attention,

as I love that style of writing. Keep up the good work! ;)
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:11 am

Mitch wrote:
gottalovepixar wrote:though i have seen longer

.


Yeah. Mine. :P
Your "script-written" fan fiction has caught my

attention, as I love that style of writing. Keep up the good work! ;)


Of course I meant

yours . each one could be a chapter book !

When I was 8 everyone on Nick.com used to writes their fanfics

like that because it saved some room there was like a 200 or so word limit .

you would hate that , huh ?

:lol:
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Postby Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:32 pm

gottalovepixar:

Haha -- yeah. I tend to write long novels; it's an old

hobby of mine. I rememer one instance when my English teacher gave me instructions to write a short story

consisting of 300 words or less. I ended up making my "short story" into an incredibly long novel --

way over the 300 word-count. :roll:

Wow -- a 200 word limit? I couldn't survive with that. :P
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 8:32 pm

Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar:

Haha --

yeah. I tend to write long novels; it's an old hobby of mine. I rememer one instance when my English teacher

gave me instructions to write a short story consisting of 300 words or less. I ended up making my "short

story" into an incredibly long novel -- way over the 300 word-count. :roll:

Wow -- a 200 word limit?

I couldn't survive with that. :P


I bet you got an A . what grade was that ( just in

case I have to do that ) ?
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Postby Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:38 pm

gottalovepixar: Yeah -- I got

an 'A' (97%) for the project...in ninth grade. Although, I have been homeschooled all my life, so my reports

might be a little different compared to yours. ;)
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:09 pm

Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar: Yeah -- I got an 'A' (97%) for the

project...in ninth grade. Although, I have been homeschooled all my life, so my reports might be a little

different compared to yours. ;)


To that I say Horay :) , for i'm sick of short

stories and narrative accounts
( i've done it for 2 years , almost was 3 , but I got into that school before

they started to do that ) . That's another reason i write my fanfics like this , because if I don't i feel like

i'm in school . I guess you're story was too long to be a short story , or you made alot of grammar and

spelling mistakes , or it had too much poupage ( fluff ) .

Though , I might go to a boarding school next

year , so the story might have to be bigger ! :(
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Postby Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:15 pm

I'll break this down into sections:

1) Well, thank you.

As a matter of fact, I hardly made any spelling mistakes at all. I only got 97% because the story was too long.

:P

2) Ohh...don't worry. As long as you have confidence in

yourself...you'll probably do fine at boarding school, if you do go. ;)

3)

Strangely enough, I don't think of writing/reading stories as work or a boring activity. I absolutely love it,

actually. Maybe if you look at it as something fun, you'll like it more.

However, I believe you made

this thread to post your fan fiction on, so we had better not get too off-topic. I will allow you to continue

your story without any more interference....hopefully. ;)
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Chapter 2

Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:37 pm

Hmm ...

where should I start ? .......

Lightning quickly drove back to his pit crew , embarrased of what he had

just did . Not that he thought of it , it was a pretty ignorant thing to do .

" Ha ha ha .. "

Mater laughed , "that was fun-ney . You go up to her thinking she's all pretty , then it turns out to be

The King's daughter , you must feel pretty stupid now , huh ?"

" That's what he gets for'

trying to make sure the poparrazi don't find out we're dating ' , Sally said

" Boy ," Doc

insulted , " that is the dumbest thing I have ever heard for an excuse ! "

" I was just

trying to get some info on my new competition . "

" She's not competion until next week

!" Sally rolled her eyes , " You're just afraid she's gonna be better than you

!"

"Please , she's just a rookie , and a girl for that matter " , Lightning muttered . But

Sally had heard him .

" Just because she's a girl , " Sally defended her gender , "

doesn't mean she's afraid to get a little dink in her paint job .I bet she's as good as The King himself

!"

" Whatever , " Lightning ignored his girlfriend , " now if you excuse me , I have a

race to win ! "

The race was just like every other race , nothing suprising in any of it . Chick had

, of course , gotten second place with Lightning in front of him , winning the Daytona 500 .

It was about

an hour after the race and everybody was packing up , when The King and Angie approached Doc .

Angie was

quite delighted to meet the Hudson Hornet . " I can't believe it ," she said in awe , " I'm

actually meeting the fabulous hudson hornet , which is kind of weird , since you were my daddy's inspiration

and I always thought of him in the beginning of racing . "

Doc chuckled at her comment while The

King gave her a small , parental glare , " Wow , a true racer with some extra spice , she must have a

trainer by now . "

" Nope , not yet . Quite suprised she doesn't even a crew chief yet , you

would think everybody would rush up to be it . "

" Well , that's what happens to most of the

girls , " Doc explained , " they think they're not as tough as the others . I can be her crew chief if

you want .. I could train her too . "

" Really ? " Angie grinned that famous

"Weathers" grin .

" I don't know , we live pretty far from Radiator Springs , " The

King said , making his daughter's hope drop a bit .

"She can stay at the Cozy Cone , " Sally

suggested , " It's not like it's losing me money , everyone goes up to the Wheel Well .

"

" Come on Daddy , Puh-lease ! " Angie added a puppy-dog pout for extra effect .



The King sighed , " Alright , i guess so , But if your mother starts cryin' it's not my fault .

"


" You're kidding , right ? " One of Lightning's eyebrows was arched .
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Postby Mitch » Thu Oct 26, 2006 12:47 am

Nice job,

gottalovepixar. Your story is coming along nicely.

Do you mind if I make a

slight suggestion?
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Postby gottalovepixar » Thu Oct 26, 2006 12:59 am

Mitch wrote:Nice job,

gottalovepixar. Your story is coming along nicely.

Do you mind if I make a

slight suggestion?



Let me guess , write down the race

?

if that's it , i had no idea how I should have done it , i'm not very good with action .

if

that's not it , go ahead . i don't mind a bit .
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Postby Mitch » Thu Oct 26, 2006 1:07 am

gottalovepixar - Heheh -- no, it's not the race.

;)

I was just wondering if you could make your script a little more legible to read. If this is a problem

for you, though, then please ignore my comment at all costs. It's just that I find it easier to scan/read a

clean-cut post than a...umm..."slightly messy" one.

I hope I didn't hurt your feelings

there.
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