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by gottalovepixar » Tue Oct 24, 2006 9:51 pm
Cars 2
Chaper 1 : Surprise Surprise and Chapter 2
Chapters 3&4
Chapters 5&6
Holiday Chapter 7 : A Holiday Helping HandChapter 8 : Trouble On Route 66Trouble On Route 66 Part II & Chapter 9 :Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes
Chapter 10 :Ideas and Chapter 11 :Shame , Shame , Angie ( first , really neat , paragraph chapter ! ;p
Chapter 12 :Saved by The SoldierChapter 13 :Trouble on Turn 3 , Parts I and II
Chapter 14 :Homesick and Chapter 15 :Never Say GoodbyeChapter 16:Dorm Buddies Chapter 17: Argument and Chapter 18 : Daredevil SpiritChapter 19 : She Loves It , She Loves it Not and Chapter 20: It's Good To Forgive and Chapter 21 : Perfect
Epilogue
[url=http://www.pixarplanet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=574&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=180]The
Screamin' Banshee [/url]
The Dare of
Love
Chapter 1
Chapter 2&3
Sally's
Nightmare
Chapters 1&2
Chapters 3&4
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Chapter 1
: Suprise , Surprise
It'sthe biggest race of the eason , the Daytona 500 . Many cars are cheeringfor
their favorite racer , a majority of them shouting " Mcqueen! " Others are sitting , waiting for the
race to start , buying tons of antenna balls and fuel .
After last season , with Chick Hicks winning the
cup and Lightning Mcqueen getting The Fabulous Hudson Hornet , also known as Doc Hudson , for his new crew chief
, not to mention him turning down Dinoco , everone was stoked to see what would happen this year . Questions
needed to be answered , the main one being " who the heck's gonna get dinoco ?? "
"
Welcome to the Daytona 500 , the first race of the piston cup season , " said Bob Cutlass to the crowd and
home viewers ," Everyone here is excited , but mostly because of the mysterious dinoco racecar !
"
" That's right Bob ! " Darrel Cartrip replied back , "Nobody but Dinoco and The
King know who it is . "
" Now remember Darrel , He's retired now , so it's Strip Weathers .
"
" Do you seriously think that people will stop calling him The King ? " Darrel rolled his
eyes a bit . He soon gasped , " I think it's the Dinoco racecar ! "
" What a lucky car
that guy is ! " exclaimed Bob , " Think about it , not only will they race with ease with Dinoco , they
get a bunch of-"
" Hey ! that's not a guy ! It's a girl ! "
" No way !
" Lightning replied from the pits , while everybody else just stared at the bright blue Plymouth Superbird
with a big smile on her face .
" That's right folks , " Bob's voice announced from the speaker
," for the first time in Piston Cup history , a female is a racecar ! "
" Hmm ,"
Lightning said to himself ," let's go see who this girl is ."
Sally overheard , and gave
Lightning a look that said " I know what you're thinking , I'm your girlfriend , if you forgot .
"
" Well , if you don't want the poparazzi to know were dating , i'll have to go say hi , I
mean , who wouldn't ? "
"Mm Hm " Sally rolled her eyes , " right
."
Lightning drove up to the racecar . She wasn't far from him , as he noticed she entered from the
closet entrance near him .
" Hey , " Lightning introduced himself , " I just to be the
first to say , welcome to the racing sport , and good luck for next week . " He knew the car had only come
to watch , as most rookies did on the first race .
Well , thank you very much , " the girl replied
, " I'm Angie . BUt I'm afraid you've already been beaten by somebody . "
" Oh really ,
by who ? "
" By my father , " Angie answered back with a smile .
" And who's
your father ? " Lightning asked , confused .
" Angie , " The King shouted from behind them
, " come over here !"
" 'kay daddy , be right there ! "
Lightning's grill
dropped open . He couldn't believe it . He sitll couldn't believe it when a fly flew right into his grill
.
Angie was The King's daughter
.
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So , what
do you think ?I just added the fly , thinking it would be funny
Chaper 1 : Surprise Surprise and Chapter 2
Chapters 3&4
Chapters 5&6
Holiday Chapter 7 : A Holiday Helping HandChapter 8 : Trouble On Route 66Trouble On Route 66 Part II & Chapter 9 :Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes
Chapter 10 :Ideas and Chapter 11 :Shame , Shame , Angie ( first , really neat , paragraph chapter ! ;p
Chapter 12 :Saved by The SoldierChapter 13 :Trouble on Turn 3 , Parts I and II
Chapter 14 :Homesick and Chapter 15 :Never Say GoodbyeChapter 16:Dorm Buddies Chapter 17: Argument and Chapter 18 : Daredevil SpiritChapter 19 : She Loves It , She Loves it Not and Chapter 20: It's Good To Forgive and Chapter 21 : Perfect
Epilogue
[url=http://www.pixarplanet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=574&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=180]The
Screamin' Banshee [/url]
The Dare of
Love
Chapter 1
Chapter 2&3
Sally's
Nightmare
Chapters 1&2
Chapters 3&4
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I , gottalovepixar , pledge to do the following :
- to make sure that any fanfiction that isn't pixar related will not be mentioned here .
- write at least one chapter of my fanfiction eack week , though it will not conflict with any rehearsals , homework , or any other academics
- revise chapters of Cars 2 every other weekend when the internet is not reachable ..
- Make sure any fanfiction is not cheesy of any kind , including mozerella , provilone , or plain old american cheese ..
- Make sure every fanfiction that is posted on pixar planet is rated T or lower . Any fanfiction rated higher will only have one link to it , while my signature will show if there is a new chapter up , inculding a link for the lazy people . All M rated fanfictions will be on fanfiction.net ONLY ..
- Have fun with my fanfictions , including small appearances by my pixar planet buds (with their permission of coures )
signed , sort of ...
gottalovepixar
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Chapter 1
: Suprise , Surprise
It'sthe biggest race of the eason , the Daytona 500 . Many cars are cheeringfor
their favorite racer , a majority of them shouting " Mcqueen! " Others are sitting , waiting for the
race to start , buying tons of antenna balls and fuel .
After last season , with Chick Hicks winning the
cup and Lightning Mcqueen getting The Fabulous Hudson Hornet , also known as Doc Hudson , for his new crew chief
, not to mention him turning down Dinoco , everone was stoked to see what would happen this year . Questions
needed to be answered , the main one being " who the heck's gonna get dinoco ?? "
"
Welcome to the Daytona 500 , the first race of the piston cup season , " said Bob Cutlass to the crowd and
home viewers ," Everyone here is excited , but mostly because of the mysterious dinoco racecar !
"
" That's right Bob ! " Darrel Cartrip replied back , "Nobody but Dinoco and The
King know who it is . "
" Now remember Darrel , He's retired now , so it's Strip Weathers .
"
" Do you seriously think that people will stop calling him The King ? " Darrel rolled his
eyes a bit . He soon gasped , " I think it's the Dinoco racecar ! "
" What a lucky car
that guy is ! " exclaimed Bob , " Think about it , not only will they race with ease with Dinoco , they
get a bunch of-"
" Hey ! that's not a guy ! It's a girl ! "
" No way !
" Lightning replied from the pits , while everybody else just stared at the bright blue Plymouth Superbird
with a big smile on her face .
" That's right folks , " Bob's voice announced from the speaker
," for the first time in Piston Cup history , a female is a racecar ! "
" Hmm ,"
Lightning said to himself ," let's go see who this girl is ."
Sally overheard , and gave
Lightning a look that said " I know what you're thinking , I'm your girlfriend , if you forgot .
"
" Well , if you don't want the poparazzi to know were dating , i'll have to go say hi , I
mean , who wouldn't ? "
"Mm Hm " Sally rolled her eyes , " right
."
Lightning drove up to the racecar . She wasn't far from him , as he noticed she entered from the
closet entrance near him .
" Hey , " Lightning introduced himself , " I just to be the
first to say , welcome to the racing sport , and good luck for next week . " He knew the car had only come
to watch , as most rookies did on the first race .
Well , thank you very much , " the girl replied
, " I'm Angie . BUt I'm afraid you've already been beaten by somebody . "
" Oh really ,
by who ? "
" By my father , " Angie answered back with a smile .
" And who's
your father ? " Lightning asked , confused .
" Angie , " The King shouted from behind them
, " come over here !"
" 'kay daddy , be right there ! "
Lightning's grill
dropped open . He couldn't believe it . He sitll couldn't believe it when a fly flew right into his grill
.
Angie was The King's daughter
.
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So , what
do you think ?I just added the fly , thinking it would be funny
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by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:24 am
Unfortunately ,my title got cut off . It was supposed
to say
Gottalovepixar presents "Cars 2 " writer and director : me
sorry about that
guys(and gurls !)
Edit : please tell me what you think , or i will think you all hate it . and then i'll
cry .
lol ! 
to say
Gottalovepixar presents "Cars 2 " writer and director : me
sorry about that
guys(and gurls !)
Edit : please tell me what you think , or i will think you all hate it . and then i'll
cry .


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by The Star Swordsman » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:43 am
Nice work
for your first chapter. Keep writing. I can tell this is going to be a great fic.
for your first chapter. Keep writing. I can tell this is going to be a great fic.
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by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 12:54 am
thank you . It gets more interesting , but i was afraid it would get too long , though i have
seen longer .
seen longer .
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by Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 4:06 am
gottalovepixar wrote:though i have seen
longer .
Yeah. Mine.

Nice job so far,
gottalovepixar. Your "script-written" fan fiction has caught my attention,
as I love that style of writing. Keep up the good work!


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by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:11 am
Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar wrote:though i have seen longer
.
Yeah. Mine.![]()
Your "script-written" fan fiction has caught my
attention, as I love that style of writing. Keep up the good work!
Of course I meant
yours . each one could be a chapter book !
When I was 8 everyone on Nick.com used to writes their fanfics
like that because it saved some room there was like a 200 or so word limit .
you would hate that , huh ?

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by Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:32 pm
gottalovepixar:
Haha -- yeah. I tend to write long novels; it's an old
hobby of mine. I rememer one instance when my English teacher gave me instructions to write a short story
consisting of 300 words or less. I ended up making my "short story" into an incredibly long novel --
way over the 300 word-count.
Wow -- a 200 word limit? I couldn't survive with that.
Haha -- yeah. I tend to write long novels; it's an old
hobby of mine. I rememer one instance when my English teacher gave me instructions to write a short story
consisting of 300 words or less. I ended up making my "short story" into an incredibly long novel --
way over the 300 word-count.

Wow -- a 200 word limit? I couldn't survive with that.


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by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 8:32 pm
Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar:
Haha --
yeah. I tend to write long novels; it's an old hobby of mine. I rememer one instance when my English teacher
gave me instructions to write a short story consisting of 300 words or less. I ended up making my "short
story" into an incredibly long novel -- way over the 300 word-count.
Wow -- a 200 word limit?
I couldn't survive with that.
I bet you got an A . what grade was that ( just in
case I have to do that ) ?
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by Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:38 pm
gottalovepixar: Yeah -- I got
an 'A' (97%) for the project...in ninth grade. Although, I have been homeschooled all my life, so my reports
might be a little different compared to yours.
an 'A' (97%) for the project...in ninth grade. Although, I have been homeschooled all my life, so my reports
might be a little different compared to yours.


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by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:09 pm
Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar: Yeah -- I got an 'A' (97%) for the
project...in ninth grade. Although, I have been homeschooled all my life, so my reports might be a little
different compared to yours.
To that I say Horay

stories and narrative accounts
( i've done it for 2 years , almost was 3 , but I got into that school before
they started to do that ) . That's another reason i write my fanfics like this , because if I don't i feel like
i'm in school . I guess you're story was too long to be a short story , or you made alot of grammar and
spelling mistakes , or it had too much poupage ( fluff ) .
Though , I might go to a boarding school next
year , so the story might have to be bigger !

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by Mitch » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:15 pm
I'll break this down into sections:
1) Well, thank you.
As a matter of fact, I hardly made any spelling mistakes at all. I only got 97% because the story was too long.
2) Ohh...don't worry. As long as you have confidence in
yourself...you'll probably do fine at boarding school, if you do go.
3)
Strangely enough, I don't think of writing/reading stories as work or a boring activity. I absolutely love it,
actually. Maybe if you look at it as something fun, you'll like it more.
However, I believe you made
this thread to post your fan fiction on, so we had better not get too off-topic. I will allow you to continue
your story without any more interference....hopefully.
1) Well, thank you.
As a matter of fact, I hardly made any spelling mistakes at all. I only got 97% because the story was too long.

2) Ohh...don't worry. As long as you have confidence in
yourself...you'll probably do fine at boarding school, if you do go.

3)
Strangely enough, I don't think of writing/reading stories as work or a boring activity. I absolutely love it,
actually. Maybe if you look at it as something fun, you'll like it more.
However, I believe you made
this thread to post your fan fiction on, so we had better not get too off-topic. I will allow you to continue
your story without any more interference....hopefully.


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Chapter 2
by gottalovepixar » Wed Oct 25, 2006 10:37 pm
Hmm ...
where should I start ? .......
Lightning quickly drove back to his pit crew , embarrased of what he had
just did . Not that he thought of it , it was a pretty ignorant thing to do .
" Ha ha ha .. "
Mater laughed , "that was fun-ney . You go up to her thinking she's all pretty , then it turns out to be
The King's daughter , you must feel pretty stupid now , huh ?"
" That's what he gets for'
trying to make sure the poparrazi don't find out we're dating ' , Sally said
" Boy ," Doc
insulted , " that is the dumbest thing I have ever heard for an excuse ! "
" I was just
trying to get some info on my new competition . "
" She's not competion until next week
!" Sally rolled her eyes , " You're just afraid she's gonna be better than you
!"
"Please , she's just a rookie , and a girl for that matter " , Lightning muttered . But
Sally had heard him .
" Just because she's a girl , " Sally defended her gender , "
doesn't mean she's afraid to get a little dink in her paint job .I bet she's as good as The King himself
!"
" Whatever , " Lightning ignored his girlfriend , " now if you excuse me , I have a
race to win ! "
The race was just like every other race , nothing suprising in any of it . Chick had
, of course , gotten second place with Lightning in front of him , winning the Daytona 500 .
It was about
an hour after the race and everybody was packing up , when The King and Angie approached Doc .
Angie was
quite delighted to meet the Hudson Hornet . " I can't believe it ," she said in awe , " I'm
actually meeting the fabulous hudson hornet , which is kind of weird , since you were my daddy's inspiration
and I always thought of him in the beginning of racing . "
Doc chuckled at her comment while The
King gave her a small , parental glare , " Wow , a true racer with some extra spice , she must have a
trainer by now . "
" Nope , not yet . Quite suprised she doesn't even a crew chief yet , you
would think everybody would rush up to be it . "
" Well , that's what happens to most of the
girls , " Doc explained , " they think they're not as tough as the others . I can be her crew chief if
you want .. I could train her too . "
" Really ? " Angie grinned that famous
"Weathers" grin .
" I don't know , we live pretty far from Radiator Springs , " The
King said , making his daughter's hope drop a bit .
"She can stay at the Cozy Cone , " Sally
suggested , " It's not like it's losing me money , everyone goes up to the Wheel Well .
"
" Come on Daddy , Puh-lease ! " Angie added a puppy-dog pout for extra effect .
The King sighed , " Alright , i guess so , But if your mother starts cryin' it's not my fault .
"
" You're kidding , right ? " One of Lightning's eyebrows was arched .
where should I start ? .......
Lightning quickly drove back to his pit crew , embarrased of what he had
just did . Not that he thought of it , it was a pretty ignorant thing to do .
" Ha ha ha .. "
Mater laughed , "that was fun-ney . You go up to her thinking she's all pretty , then it turns out to be
The King's daughter , you must feel pretty stupid now , huh ?"
" That's what he gets for'
trying to make sure the poparrazi don't find out we're dating ' , Sally said
" Boy ," Doc
insulted , " that is the dumbest thing I have ever heard for an excuse ! "
" I was just
trying to get some info on my new competition . "
" She's not competion until next week
!" Sally rolled her eyes , " You're just afraid she's gonna be better than you
!"
"Please , she's just a rookie , and a girl for that matter " , Lightning muttered . But
Sally had heard him .
" Just because she's a girl , " Sally defended her gender , "
doesn't mean she's afraid to get a little dink in her paint job .I bet she's as good as The King himself
!"
" Whatever , " Lightning ignored his girlfriend , " now if you excuse me , I have a
race to win ! "
The race was just like every other race , nothing suprising in any of it . Chick had
, of course , gotten second place with Lightning in front of him , winning the Daytona 500 .
It was about
an hour after the race and everybody was packing up , when The King and Angie approached Doc .
Angie was
quite delighted to meet the Hudson Hornet . " I can't believe it ," she said in awe , " I'm
actually meeting the fabulous hudson hornet , which is kind of weird , since you were my daddy's inspiration
and I always thought of him in the beginning of racing . "
Doc chuckled at her comment while The
King gave her a small , parental glare , " Wow , a true racer with some extra spice , she must have a
trainer by now . "
" Nope , not yet . Quite suprised she doesn't even a crew chief yet , you
would think everybody would rush up to be it . "
" Well , that's what happens to most of the
girls , " Doc explained , " they think they're not as tough as the others . I can be her crew chief if
you want .. I could train her too . "
" Really ? " Angie grinned that famous
"Weathers" grin .
" I don't know , we live pretty far from Radiator Springs , " The
King said , making his daughter's hope drop a bit .
"She can stay at the Cozy Cone , " Sally
suggested , " It's not like it's losing me money , everyone goes up to the Wheel Well .
"
" Come on Daddy , Puh-lease ! " Angie added a puppy-dog pout for extra effect .
The King sighed , " Alright , i guess so , But if your mother starts cryin' it's not my fault .
"
" You're kidding , right ? " One of Lightning's eyebrows was arched .
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by gottalovepixar » Thu Oct 26, 2006 12:59 am
Mitch wrote:Nice job,
gottalovepixar. Your story is coming along nicely.
Do you mind if I make a
slight suggestion?
Let me guess , write down the race
?
if that's it , i had no idea how I should have done it , i'm not very good with action .
if
that's not it , go ahead . i don't mind a bit .
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by Mitch » Thu Oct 26, 2006 1:07 am
gottalovepixar - Heheh -- no, it's not the race.
I was just wondering if you could make your script a little more legible to read. If this is a problem
for you, though, then please ignore my comment at all costs. It's just that I find it easier to scan/read a
clean-cut post than a...umm..."slightly messy" one.
I hope I didn't hurt your feelings
there.

I was just wondering if you could make your script a little more legible to read. If this is a problem
for you, though, then please ignore my comment at all costs. It's just that I find it easier to scan/read a
clean-cut post than a...umm..."slightly messy" one.
I hope I didn't hurt your feelings
there.

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