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Postby Mitch » Sat Jan 27, 2007 10:48 pm

I love it! Nice job,

gottalovepixar. ;)
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Postby CarFreak » Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:17 am

hmmm. i see Angie coypied sally. Any way nice chapt. GLP.
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:14 pm

Actually , hers is supposed to

be in a different style and smaller too . And when she said she didn't mean to copy , she meant Chai since Chai

is also in that color range . To me , seafoam green and mint green are really the same color . Which is my

favorite color . :wink:
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Postby CarFreak » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:16 pm

Ohhh.
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:20 pm

Can you believe only about four more chapters to go ? I

don't want to see it end ! :cry: But guess what fans , it might not !Well , the main story will , but I might

just add some little mini fanfics for fun . When Cars 2 is over , this will now be Radiator Springs adventures ,

including The Screamin' Banshee , with Angie , of course . :wink:

O.k .

next chapter .


Chapter 19 - She loves It , She Loves It Not

" Alright , this is the last

race so we have to make sure we have everything , " Doc warned to the Radiator Springs gang ,

"fuel?"

"Check, " shouted Flo from afar .

" tires ? "

"

Check , " said Luigi .

" Extra trailers for everyone , "

"Checkerrooni ,

" said Mack , with three other trucks behind him . All of them had two double-wide trailers attached . Mack

had one for Lightning and Sally , and another for Chai and Angie to share . The next truck had one trailer for

Ramone and Flo , and Another for Doc and Sheriff to share (there's had two floors) . The last two trailers were

for Mater and Lizzie and then the other trailer for Sarge and Filmore , that arrangement was so they would all

have something to joke about . The last truck had a trailer for Red and one for Luigi and Guido and , since they

were so small , the supplies.

" O.k. I think we're ready to go , " said Doc with a smug smile

, which soon left his face , " wait a minute , where's Angie ?"

Everyone soon started searching

for her . They checked her cone , the Wheel Well , everywhere . Well , almost everywhere .

Angie sighed

as she looked around . Willy's Butte always looked nice next to a sunset . Nobody was looking , so why not ? She

counted down in her head .

Racers , start your engines !

rrr,
her

engine started . And she raced against the air .

Angie raced around the track , a smile on her face . She

laughed as she remembered the story Lightning told her about when he first saw Doc drive , and she was probably

doing the same exact thing .

Angie soon finished , and took a big breath of southern air .



"You miss racing ?"

Angie jumped and turned around , and saw Doc .

"Oh ,

" she sighed with relief , " it's just you . Kind of , I guess . "

" You can't just

guess . Do you miss it or do you not ? "

" It's just .. complicated o.k ? I mean , I like it ,

but I want to be a doctor more , " Angie was confused , " I mean , if anybody would understand , I

would think it would be you . "

" What's that supposed to mean , " asked Doc with wide

eyes .

" Well , just look at you ! " she exclaimed , " you have three jobs , and you

should know how hard it is . I definetly wouldn't be able to do it , even if the school was close enough for me

to travel around . "

" It's getting late , " Doc changed the subject , " we should

get on the road . Just , think about what you really want , okay?"

" I will . "



" Good . Well , come on , I know you can drive faster than that ! " Doc teased .

"

Please , I could beat you to Flo's any day . "

" Then your on , " said Doc , driving away

quickly while laughing .

" Hey ! That's cheating ! You cheater ! " Angie yelled after him ,

laughing along .

If only Daddy could understand like Doc
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Postby CarFreak » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:26 pm

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Postby LightingandSally » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:28 pm

Totally. :)
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I <3 Lightning and Sally!

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Postby CarFreak » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:36 pm

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Postby gottalovepixar » Mon Jan 29, 2007 7:42 pm

Mitch wrote:gottalovepixar - Heheh

-- no, it's not the race. ;)

I was just wondering if you could make your script a little more legible to

read. If this is a problem for you, though, then please ignore my comment at all costs. It's just that I find it

easier to scan/read a clean-cut post than a...umm..."slightly messy" one.

I hope I didn't hurt

your feelings there.


I know this is from a long time ago , but I just read my old

chapters , and I totally messed up on one of Sally's sentences . Wow , it was hard to read before . At least

I've improved . right?
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Postby gottalovepixar » Tue Jan 30, 2007 11:20 pm

I much as I really don't want to put this , since after

this there's only about one more chapter and the epilouge next , here's chapter 20 .

Chapter 20 : It's

Good To Forgive

"Racers ! Start Your Engines!"

Pocono , Sweet

Pocono,
thought Angie as she watched the racers start . Pocono was one of her favorite racetracks

. With only three turns and a tunnel , It was 2nd runner up for most likely to have raging tempers , which of

course , was held by "short track , short tempers" Bristol track . She didn't mind though , te tunnel

was the best part to drive through , and you could always stick you tounge out at the car next to you without

them even knowing . Too bad she wasn't racing , and was at the pits with everybody else .

At first she

didn't want to go to the pits , since she knew somebody would recognize her .

"With that paint job ,

people will only think you and Chai are just new to the team , " Doc assured her . After all , he still

wasn't too fond of that pinstripe tattoo , even though Angie thought it was the best decision she had made that

whole racing season .

So Chai and Angie watched them go around and around . They would occasionally shout

" Go Lightning! " or " pass that sucker " , sometimes even a " Chick Stinks !! :evil:

" while he was in the pits , then he would lose his focus trying to figure out who said it . The joke never

died .

Of course , Angie still occasionally stared at another young racecar , none other than her ex- ,

Bolts . She still couldn't like him after he did wha he did , right ? Although she knew why , even though nobody

knew she did . Angie knew all along Bolts needed the money for his family , she remembered a car looking for a

job as a butler at The King's house before the racing season started , and she remembered a while after she saw

him at her first race , that it was him . After all the car did say his name was "Bolts" , and the car

sounded just like him . Unfortunately , he didn't have as much experience as the other job hunters , so right

away he was turned down with a heartfelt apology .

100 laps went by , then 150 , then they were right

down to 3 laps left . Lightning was in the lead , and he couldn't believe it , after 2 years of hard work , he

was close to winning his first pistoon cup . Of course he didn't think about it , he only thought about making

sure Chick didn't pass him , one he did , it would be all over , so he dashed to the left , to the right again ,

and then to the left . 1/2 lap left , and Bolts tried to pass Chick .

" Oh no you don't , "

said Chick angrily , and slammed Bolts into the wall .

Bolts swerved off the track and into the grass .

Everyone gasped , they knew Chick was rotten , but not that much . Angie didn't know what to do , Lightning

tried to stop and help , but he was going a bit too fast , and past the finish line first . That didn't matter

though , and although he hated Bolts guts for hurting Angie those few months ago , Bolts was still betrayed by

his partner , and if anyone was going to help , he might as well .

He wasn't the only one . Angie rushed

to the scene , awestruck and astounded . She understood now , she understood fully . Bolts never wanted to hurt

her before , he was just one of Chick's pawn , and she was too .

" Is that who I think it is...

"

" It sure is , " replied Darrel to his partner , Bob , " that's Angie Weathers ,

rushing up to her ex-boyfriend . "

" I doubt he'll be her ex for long , " Bob said back .



" Bolts , " Angie said with her eyes almost watering . Wow she had cried alot these past months

probably more than her life , " are you o.k ? What am I saying , of course you're not o.k , you're a wrek

. "

" Gee , " said Bolts sarcastically, and with a small sense of pain in his voice ,

" that made me feel better . What are you doing here , shouldn't you be learning ? "

" I

got two weeks off because of the race . "

Bolts looked surprised , " and you just rushed to my

side because .... "

" Would you just stop being sarcastic for once and listen ! " Angie

told him . Bolts' sarcastic attitude towads almost everything was the only thing she didn't like about him ,

" I came because I wanted to say ... to say... I forgive you . "

" Forgive me ? How can

you forgive something like what I did ? I almost killed you . "

" Yeah , but i know it wasn't

your fault , " Angie replied , " we were just both of Chick's pawns to get him to win another stupid

trophy that doesn't mean anything . "

Lightning was just standing there , listening . Finally , he

noticed he wasn't needed , and just drove to the pits .

" Congratulations Mcqueen , " Doc said

as Lightning parked himself in the usual spot at the pits .

" For what ? " Lightning looked

confused .

" You won , idiot , " Doc answered .

"Hey- wait a minute . I won ? I

won ! I got the piston cup ! wohoo ! " Lightning jumped for joy , and when he was done with that he kissed

Sally on the lips , which unfortunately , was captured by every camera , including the poparazzi's . But Sally

didn't really care .

" Wow , " she replied , " can we win next year ? I like how he

celebrates . "

Everyone laughed at the comment , and Lightning when up to the stage to recieve the

cheers and trophy , which was still important , no matter what Doc said . Luckily , nobody booed or threw tires ,

like people did last year .


Bolts was fixed quickly (" Watch him have problems by the time he's

forty " Doc told Lightning ) , and the celebration for Lightning's win had officially begun . Everyone

important to him was there , inculding one person Angie really didn't feel like seeing .

" I think

there's one more person you need to forgive , " Doc whispered to Angie as he pointed to the King , "

and maybe apologize for what you did too . "

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Well , I couldn't let

her be mad at Bolts forever . Besides , there needed as a couple for The Screamin' Banshee .

Hmm ,

that's a good cliffhanger I put at the end , huh ? :wink:

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Postby CarFreak » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:56 pm

bad chick! bad! (punches the ugly racecar with a

mustache) Alright!lightning won a piston cup! Yay! :D
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:08 pm

apparently , nobody wants the story to end so they

aren't replying . :wink:

i'll post a new chapter later ( if i can get an internet connection where

i'm going )
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sat Feb 03, 2007 3:26 am

The Final Chapter !!! Well , not including the Epilogue anyway .

Chapter 21 -

Perfect

" Do I have to ? " whined Angie to Doc . She really didn't want to talk to her father

, who was talking to Tex about something . " See ? He's busy , I'll talk to him later , like , in 10 years

or so . "

Doc gave her one of his looks . Worst of all , he added a sigh . Although Angie was good

at getting out of things , Doc was better . He had more experience .

" Fine , " Angie pouted .

" I'll be back , " she said to Bolts , who was by her side and pretending not to listen in ,

"hopefully . "


" Daddy? "

The King turned around ( once again , and maybe

for the last time :cry: , don't ask me how ! ) , " Angie ? Let me guess , you want to apoligize for what

you did ? "

" Two things , " she replied , " one , you're messing up the story and

I'm supposed to say that , and two , I'm not the only one who needs to say sorry . "

" Okay ,

so I didn't really respect your dreams , but I had dreams too . But , " The King sighed , " I guess

I'm going to have to understand that you're dreams are more important than mine . "

Angie glanced

outside . She saw her old hellicopter outside smile at her . " Or , you can respect them both . I'll be

right back . "


" Hey Tex ! " Angie shouted . " Can I ask you something ?

"

" Let me guess , " said Tex , " you want me to take you back for next season , right

? "

" Okay , seriously , you guys have to stop doing that . So , will you ? " she gave him

the oh-so-powerful puppy dog pout .

" How can I say no to a face like that ? " Tex smiled .



" Thanks Tex ! And this time , I won't quit ! "


" Back so soon ? " asked

Doc when he saw Angie race up to him .

" Doc , will you be my crew chief and trainer again ? "

questioned Angie quickly .

" Well , even though that was asked quicker than I thought you would ,

o.k. then . How are you going to get to school ? "

" It's called a hellicopter . " said

Angie with a smile .

" But I'll only do it on one condition . " Doc said .

"

What's that . "

" Well , " answered Doc , " when you graduate , I might just have an

opening for a job at my office . "

" Deal !! " exclaimed Angie .

" Well it

looks like I'll be tuck with Jessica , " frowned Chai , " I'll miss you . "

" What

do you mean ? " Angie replied , " You're staying in Radiator Springs . "

" And after

college ? "

" We could always use a newspaper . "

" What the heck , "

Chai smirked , " why not ? "

It seemed like a perfect ending .



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So happy ! Just the epilogue left now .
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Sat Feb 03, 2007 4:00 pm

Awww, is the party over? I had to do a little catching up again. I love how Lightning didnt even realize

he'd won! And Doc's line "you won, idiot" is so classic! I glad he finally got a piston cup! And i'm

also glad Angie patched things up with King and went back to racing! I was hoping she would.
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sat Feb 03, 2007 4:09 pm

Not yet , lennonluvr9 . We have an epilouge you know ,

because we still have some questions to answer , such as ...

[spoil] What's Lightning gonna do

with the extra winnings money ?
Will Bolts and Angie stay together , with permission of Doc and The King .


Will Bolts keep racing ?
What about Jessica ?
And will everything ever stay normal ?!

[/spoil]

oh , and don't forget , when this is done i'll be renaming this thread "

Radiator Springs Adventures " since I have some good little-fanfics in mind featuring our favorite teenage

plymoth superbird ( Angie : which would be moi ) and her friends . Not to mention the classic radiator springs

gang , and maybe even the delinquent road hazards ( Boost , Wingo , Snot Rod , Dj )
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