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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Feb 23, 2007 2:13 pm

Hi peoples !

Yesterday , I

noticed how badly I used to write , and how confuzzling it could sometimes get , so I am now rewriting chapters 1

through 9 , which would be all my script written chapters . Boy , are they messy . Although the chapters will

stay around the same , some quotes will change and better descriptions will be put in . So , if you didn't

understand a certain chapter , I suggest you go back once i clean it up a bit .

Guess I'll be spring

cleaning early ! Well , at least it's not like I'm cleanng Doc's garage . :wink:

Chapters redone :



Chapter 1 , which is now called Chapter 1 : Surprise Surprise
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:13 am

Wow , my views are

through the roof ! I didn't know you guys like my writing that much !

So ... next chapter ! yay ! It's

always best for me to write about couples when im in one of those mushy moods . :wink:

Chapter

Two

Lightning was gently snoring in the cozy cone lobby . He was behind the desk , and looked more calm

and peaceful than he had usually been . When Sally found him there , she couldn't help but laugh a little ,

remembering the times she had dozed off in the very same spot , and he would find her there .

"

Stickers , " Sally said softly , " Stickers - "

" What - ah

!
" Lightning was shocked to find Sally smiling at him , the sun shining bright in his eyes ,

causing him to wince . " Oh , hey Sally " , he muffled a yawn , " when did you get back ?

"

" Oh , about five minutes ago . What brings you to my usual spot for 9:00AM to 2:00PM ? "

She questioned .

" Some late night customers woke me up at , like , 3 in the morning for a room . I

must've dozed off after I handed them the keys . " Lightning streched , letting a loud yawn pass his grill

. " That is not a comfortable place to sleep . "

" I should know , having to sleep there

for enless nights hoping a customer would come . We're still set for tonight right ? "

" Of

course , " He answered back , " I rescheduled my paint job earlier than planned so it would have time

to dry . I'll probably go back to sleep for a few hours after that , " Lightning remembered , "

what's the time ? "

" About nine-thirty , " Sally glanced up at the clock .

"

Aw shoot ! I'm supposed to be at Ramone's right now ! I'll see you later Sally , " he drove off , after

giving her a small peck on the cheeck .

Sally watched him drive off quickly . She gave a quick sigh , it

wasn't that often when lightning would kiss her . She didn't mind though , it made her cherish the kisses more

, even if they were as quick as he was . She remembered their first kiss :

" Okay Sally

," Lightning Mcqueen had said last Christmas , " why did you send me a note telling me you wanted to

meet me here ? "

" What do you mean , you sent me a note saying you wanted to meet me here .

"

The two of them chatted on and on , until Mater had snuck up on them with a miseltoe on his tow

cable . Sally was so surprised when she saw it .

" Merry Christmas Lightning , " Angie said to

him as she drove by ." Well , you two know the rules of miseltoe , if two are under , they must engage in a

kiss ! Don't you just love the holidays ? "


Sally remebered the kiss perfectly too .

It was soothing and romantic . Not only that , but it was one of the only kisses Sally had that gave her good

chills just thinking about it .

Wow , Sally thought , we

really are in love , more than I suspected too . That's it ! Tonight I'm going to tell him I love him , and if

he's shocked ... then this relationship has big issues .
She spent the rest of the day thinking

about Lightning and their next date .


" Okay , I think after the tenth time you got the drill ,

so just hold your breath and this should be over in five minutes ."

Lightning nodded as he shut his

eyes and did as he was told . Racing seasn had ended , so he decided to go back to his regular radiator springs

style , as in without the giant rust-eze sticker on his hood and #95 .

" So ," Ramone stared as

he was done finishing up the area where lightning's grill was , " Flo tells me you got an anniversary date

with Sally tonight . "

" Yeah , " lightning replied , " I can't believe we've

already been dating for a year . "

" Hey , time flies when you're havin' fun , man ! And once

your with that special someone , by the time you know it , you'll be married , have kids - " he stopped

when he noticed Lightning's eyes get wide , " Okay , so I'm speeding a little too fast up the road of the

future , but dude , everyone in this town knows you two belong together ! It was love at first sight - oh wait ,

no it wasn't . Sally used to despise you , " he laughed as he remebered , " Crazy how things can

change , i remember when you were hitting on here , i was thinking , hey , this dude's gonna get a

restaining order from her
, I guess I was wrong though . "

" Yeah , it's a good

thing you were too , " Lightning replied back with a smile .

" So , where you two headed ?

"

" I'm thinking just a quick cruise , with the help of Lizzie's radio again , and then we

might take a quick drive to the Wheel Well , " Lightning said . He hadn't really planned yet , he was just

happy Sally and him could have some time to themselves again .

" Sounds like yu two are gonna have a

nice night , " Ramone said , " Well , you're all done . Just let it dry for a few hours before you go

driving again , and I mean driving , like 55mph driving , because dude , if you mess this one again , I might

actually have to charge you ! "


While Lightning was getting his paint job done , Sally was

chatting with the girls at Flo's while sipping her regular .They were once again chatting about her and

Lightning , as if the madness would ever stop !

" Okay , " Sally started , " can we

please stop talking about my love issues ? "

" Oh , honey we're

sorry if we're annoying you , but everyone knows you two are meant to be , " Flo said , " even if it

didn't look like it from the start . "

" True , " Sally replied , " Heh , I remember

our first drive . That was the total beginning of the sparks . "

" Ooh ! " , Chai and Angie

seemed over excited .

" Can you tell us about it Sally ? " asked Chai .

" Yeah , I

don't remember this one . "

Sally sighed , " Alright , Alright . "



Sally and Lightning drove along the road silently .

" So , where we going ? "

" I

don't know . "

Lightning went a bit fast , sally did it back in return . Lightning did it again ,

and the he suddenly saw a blue streak flash by .

" Woah , yes ! "

The drove along ,

turning smoothly at each turn . Sally decided a bit to flirt , so she splahed water in lightning's face . He

shook .

" Haha ! "

She did it again , but she missed him . Lightning soon got covered in

mud by the same puddle , then he got covered in leaves .

" Hahaha ! "

Then they went

through a tunnel as Sally sped ahead . When Lightning got out of the tunnel , he noticed the scenery , it was

beautiful . Then he saw Sally in front of the waterfall . She smiled softly as she saw him staring at her .



He smiled back , his grill full of bugs . She chuckled softly , and he did back , not noticing the bugs .

Soon he felt them with his toungue , and spit them out as if he was disgusted .


" Not

the most romantic drive , " Sally said , " but it was still nice and sweet . Besides , I love a man

that can make me laugh . " She smiled a Lightning while he drove back to the garage slowly , careful not to

mess up his paintjob . She soon started daydreaming again .

" Which is why you're gonna tell him you

love him tonight , right ? " Angie said with a smirk .

" I already decided that this morning ,

Angie . It's been put back for too long . "

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It's so romantic ! Eee ,

just about one or two more parts left in this fanfic .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:17 pm

OK , guys , I just got the best idea for a fanfiction

ever ! thanks to a fanfiction on fanfiction.net called I Do Now , i was freaking out about how nervous I was .

This gave me an idea for a good fanfiction ( which you'll just have to wait and find out what it's about later

) that i totally fixed up during last night and this morning in my head . It's wicked awesome , although at the

moment it has one swear ( the d-word it you want to know , not so bad , but i really don't want to get in

trouble because of it , although it doesn't sound right without it , believe me , i've tried ) and is really

nerve-racking . But I love those fanfics , and anything like that , so i'm gonna post it when this is done .



At the moment , It's Not Easy Being Seafoam looks like it's not gonna happen . I can't find a good

conflict .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:15 am

Okay , I promised Pixel Candy I would have this up by

7:30 my time so I can start my new fanfic ( that she got a sneak peek of , sorry peoples ! ) so here's the last

chapter of that fanfic that still hasn't been named yet ! lol

It was sundown and Lightning had told Sally

to meet him at Flo's . Sally had just checked out the last family of cars ( u might have to keep this in mind

for the next fanfic , so i won't hacve to answer any questions ) , when she headed to Flo's . Lightning was

there in his new , and dry , paintjob and smiled at her as she parked near him .

" So what's up for

tonight ? " she asked .

" You'll see , " he teased her . " Hey , isn't starting to

get dark out ? "

Gee , Sally thought sarcastically , but in a nice way

,I wonder what he's gonna do ?

Just then , all of the neon lights turned on

. It was more beautiful of how they turned on then them just being on . They never went on at the same exact time

, so it looked like a little light show . In the background , "Sh-boom" was playing , and Sally's

memories if the night just like this came back from the back of her mind . They never got to cruise that time

though , as Doc had called the poparazzi since he still didn't like Lightning yet .

" Well , "

Lightning said , " I never did get that cruise . "

They started cruising , as did Angie and

Bolts once they got the hang of the beat . Everyone else also joined them , and soon as the song was almost over

, Lightning motioned Sally to follow him .

" Come on , let's go for a drive . "

And

they did , tgoing through the same exact turns they had before , except it was darker and Sally's headlights

showed the way . Of course , she still went ahead a bit , and was on the waterfall before Lightning was .



She looks even better than she did before , thought Lightning .

I guess it's because I know more about her . last time I only saw the outside , now i'm also

seeing the interior . (A/N : interior=inside)


She , of course , saw him staring and smiled

. Lightning smiled back , knowing that if there were bugs in his teeth this time , there would be no way she

could see them .

They reached The Wheel Well , resting at the same spot they had longer than one year ago

, and just looked out at the stars .

" Nice night , " Lightning said softly .

"

Yeah , " Sally agreed , " not a cloud in the sky . "

She moved a bit closer to him , his

cool metal against hers , cooling her down in the 79 degree night .

Sally sighed peacefully , " I

love you . " She hadn't noticed it came out until it did . She planned to say it later , not now .

I guess the world's got other plans , she thought .

" I love you too

, " was Lightning's reply . Then he chuckled a bit .

" What's so funny ? " , Sally asked

, confused .

" Nothing , its just , we've been dating for a year , and that's the first time

we've told eacother that . "

He just notices this now , Sally thought

.

" Yeah , I kind of noticed that last night . All the girls were like ' oh my god , what are you

waiting for ? Christmas ? ' " she had said that last part in an annoying girlish voice .

" Oh

, I forgot here , " Lightning said as he gave Sally a package . " Happy Anniversary . " She opened

the gift , and she smiled when she saw it . It was a picture of her and Lightning on their first date , parked

under the neon lights cuddling .

" How did you get this ? " she was confused . Nobody has taken

a picture , that she knew of anyway .

" Eh , I snatched it from the press , amazing that they got

that picture before we noticed . "

" We are closing the blinds from now on in our garage ,

" Sally said . Lightning laughed . They moved a bit closer ... closer .... closer ... and their lips touched

. They kissed again .. and again ... and then it turned into a make-out fest .

A whistle was heard in the

background . They stopped kissing .

" Angie ! " Sally yelled , " you promised you wouldn't

spy ! "

Angie laughed . " Well , I lied ! " she shouted while driving away .



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Aww , how sweet ! Okay , although my past

two fanfics have been short , I can promise you that the next one will be long . I previewed the first chapter

over here , it's about 3/4 as long as Mitch's chapters ( excluding the latest one ) ! I'm also warning you

that your engine may overheat . Just ask PixelCandy . On second thought , don't . I gave her two sections of the

first chapter and I don't want her ruining it for you !
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:17 am

Holy Chrysler , I had to take a break from writing my

newest fanfiction because it's so nerve racking , i'm trying to literally calm myself down . I'm not kidding .

The last line I wrote was really hard to write . Man , do I feel bad for J.K. Rowling .

*takes a deep

breath* Okay , I'm gonna go continue .. for you guys .. okay for me too because this is like the best fanfic

i've ever written so far , and i'm not even halfway done writing it yet . :( ( doesn't the dude look like

he's breathing fast like I am at the moment )
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:56 am

Ok, so I've been

playing catch up this past week and i'm all caught up now. The Screaming Banshee was amusing and this last

unamed one was so cute! I'm really eager to see what you got coming up since you're so excited about it

:)
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:44 am

Lennonluvr9 : Believe me , for this one you might be trembling from the suspense so

much you might not be able to predict trouble ( the trouble of which you predict that makes me feel so special

because you predicted trouble first on my fanfiction ) ! I think about the fanfiction all night , and I keep

waking up early , so I think about it more .

I think I might put up the first chapter today , I'm so

excited ! It's my best work yet ! :D

But I'm warning you all now , if you

have a weak engine , you should try to skip as much as possible of it , this thing has me shaking like it's

really happening ! And no , it's not one of my lame ghost stories :wink:



Oh , and I don't know if any of you noticed , but in chapter 2 of my

latest fanfic the first flashback is from my holiday special chapter of Cars 2 , A Holiday Helping Hand .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:00 pm

Okay , to anybody who read the last chapter of the new fanfic that I just

finished , I suggest you read it again because I noticed I left something out . :wink:

Oh , and another

thing about the fanfic , it turns out it's gonna be about five chapters , and you're not getting more of it

until I see at least three replies about it . This fanfic is too good to waste people !

And I finished

writing it out too , it came out really good .

Hey- I just noticed , I'm a piston cup champion ! yay

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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:28 pm

I

couldn't wait any longer ! It's just too good to be hidden from the world . it's still unamed , but i'm

thinking about it and I have an idea for the name . Okay , the first very long chapter i've written in a while !



Once again , it's not good for the weak engine . i'm warning you now so don't say i didn't

.

oh , and the story goes from a buch of different cars views , so your gonna have to pay attention ,

since it might get a little confusing . :wink:

Chapter 1

I sit in the office , waiting . They've

been in there for two hours , so what's taking them so long ? I knew something wrong was going to happen , but I

didn't know it would be this . I watch other cars leave , relieved their loved ones are okay . Flo's next to me

, saying everything will be okay , that Stickers is always strong , and there was no difference to this than the

last time he crashed about 2 months ago . I try to stay calm , but the tears just flow . I see Doc come in the

room.

" How's Stickers ? " I ask , " Is he okay ? "

Doc only looks down at the

ground . He looks upset . Angie's next to him . I can see she's crying . Angie drives off , out of the

hospital , still crying .

I start to worry . " Please tell me he's alright ! "

"

I'm sorry , Sally , " He says to me , " he's gone . "

" No ! " I yell , "

It can't be true , not Lightning , not my Stickers ! Noo !!

"

--------------------------------

I woke up screaming ,sweating and panting like crazy .



" What's wrong ? " asked Stickers . He saw the tears , he knew I had been having the same

nightmare every night . " It's okay , " he tried to calm me , " I'm here , I'm not dead . It's

okay Sally , calm down now . "

I tried to calm down . The sweating stopped , but I was still panting

. It got harder to breathe .

" Sally , " he worried , " you don't look so good . You

want me to go wake Doc ? "

" No , " I manage to gasp out , " I'm fine .

"

Five minutes passed and I was still breathing heavily , trying to get more air into my system

.

" That's It , " Stickers said , " I don't care if he wakes up grumpy you look terrible

. "

I tried to follow him , but it was hard to drive . He helped me a bit , letting me lean on him if

I needed to take a rest . We got halfway across the street , and then everything went black

.

--------------------------------------

" Sally , Sally wake up ! " I shouted . I

didn't care if I woke up the whole town . " Doc ! Doc ! "

Everyone drove out of their garage .

When Angie and Flo saw Sally passed out in the road they gasped . Doc came outside half asleep , but then when

he saw her , he looked even more awake than I was .

" Angie , Mater ! " he yelled , " I'm

gonna need some help . Mater , tow her into my clinic and Angie , you're gonna assit me here . " Doc

noticed me next to Sally looking awestruck and confused by what was going on . " She's gonna be okay kid ,

she's in good hands . " Him and Angie drove into his clinic , ready for action as if they were soldiers .

Everyone else headed to Flo's , nobody was able to sleep with all of this going on .

" Come on

Lightning , " Flo said from behind me , " you need to take your mind of her while they're in there .

They'll be done before you know it . "

---------------------

" Okay , " Doc took a

deep breath , " let's see what's wrong . "

I stayed next to him , waiting for my next command

. After all , I couldn't do much since I didn't have my degree yet and Doc has only taught me so much .



" See anything yet ? " I asked while he looked under Sally's hood . A little gruesome , I know

, but that's a doctor's job .

" I sure do , " he answered back , " look . " I do as

I'm told , but I don't see anything wrong . Doc notices my confusion and starts to explain . " See that

part right there ? "

" Yeah , that's the gliden chamber . " ( A/N : doesn't exist in a

real car , it would be like a human pacemaker [not the one they put in when u need a new one] )

"

Well , you see , it's been moved to the right a bit , so it's not doin' it's job correctly . I'd have to get

better details from Lightning about what - "

I cut Doc off ," She had a nightmare again .

"

" How do you know that ? " Doc asked suspiciously .

" I heard her scream in

the night , and I could tell Lightning was caliming her down , at least he tried anyway . I saw him try to guide

her to your place , so I was guessing they'd be alright , " I sighed sadly , " I guess I was wrong .

"

" It's not your fault Angie , " he assured me , " it's nobody's fault .

"

Doc had always been like a father to me , almost more than my own father was . When I had crashed

in my first season , he had fixed me up good . Doc knew I was scared , and promised me I would be okay . One time

, my father couldn't stay overnight , so Doc volunteered to stay . He had to stay anyway , he was my doctor ,

but I could tell he wasn't only trying to make me feel better physically .

" I should get this

fixed , " he said softly , " you don't need to help anymore , you can go back to bed . I can see

you're tired . "

See what I mean ?

" Thanks Doc , " I replied tiredly , "

though it will be hard to sleep now , with everyone being worried and all . Goodnight . "

"

goodnight . "

--------------------------------------------------

An hour after being at my

cafe , I noticed Angie leaving Doc's clinic .

" Is Sally okay ? " Lightning quickly asked .

Sally was lucky to have a good boyfriend like that , even if he used to be obnoxious . He was always looking out

for her , and telling her how much he loved her . We could all tell they would stay together after he helped her

re-open the Wheel Well .

" She's gonna be fine , it's really hard to explain the injury . Doc's

finishing her up right now , " Angie replied tiredly . I could tell why Doc let her go , she was extremly

tired , and almost dozing off while she gave the details .

" You better go to bed honey , " I

said to her , " If anything bad happens , I promise I'll wake you . "

" Thanks Flo ,

" she almost whispered it . " Goodnight everyone . "

We all told her goodnight in return .

I noticed Lightning was still a bit quiet . Well , more quiet than the rest of us , anyway. I went to go see what

was wrong .

" Is everything okay , Lightning ? " I asked him .

" Besides Sally ..

yeah everything's okay . "

" You want to talk about it ? I mean , what happened ? " I

asked . Sally was my best friend , I always felt as if I needed to look out for her .. for everyone actually .



" She woke up in the middle of the night , " he replied softly , " she had that dream

again . "

" That's the sixth time this week , " I shook my hood .

" I know ,

I feel as if it's my fault .. after all , she becomes scared and upset because in the dream I die , " he

nudged his fuel can a bit with his tire .

" Don't blame yourself Lightning , " I said , "

it's not anybody's fault at all . "

Just then Doc drove up to the cafe .

" Come on ,

Lightning , I need to talk to you . "

" She's okay , right ? " Lightning asked nervously .



" Yeah , she's okay , just follow me . "

We all sighed , happy that Sally was

alright.

-----------------------------------------------

" We need those dreams to stop ,

" Doc warned , " just let her relax for a few hours before she goes to sleep . No t.v. , and especially

no motel paperwork about two hours before bed . "

" What if we don't ? " I asked , afraid

of the consequences .

" I'm afraid she'll just get worse , " Doc looked at Sally , fast

asleep , " I want her to stay here for the night though , just in case it happens again . "



" Maybe I should stay with her , " I said concerned , " If she wakes up and I'm not there

, she might become even less calm . "

Just as Doc was going to agree with me ( for the first time

ever , I might add ) , Sally woke up with a groan .

" Wha-What happened ? " she asked confused

, " where am I ? "

" You're at Doc's clinic , Sally , " I replied , " you

passed out . "

" I passed out ? " , she repeated , " for how long ?

"

" Long enough for me to fix the problem , " Doc answered for me , " I want you to

stay here tonight though , just in case it happens again . "

" What if what happens again ?

"

" If you have another nightmare again , " I noticed her upset face , " it's okay ,

i'll stay with you , then if you do have the dream again , it won't be like I did - ..... you know . "



She nodded to say she understood .

" Get some rest , " said Doc , " both of you .

" He left the room , and Sally and I soon fell asleep . I checked the clock before I did , it was 3:00 AM .



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Okay , take a breather , she's fine now ( no that's not a line ,

although it should be ! ) . So was it has suspenseful as I aid it would be , or was it just not for you since you

could skip and see what's going on ? see that reply button , it's begging you to click it ! so plz do !

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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:28 pm

I couldn't wait any longer ! It's

just too good to be hidden from the world . it's still unamed , but i'm thinking about it and I have an idea

for the name . Okay , the first very long chapter i've written in a while !

Once again , it's not good

for the weak engine . i'm warning you now so don't say i didn't .

oh , and the story goes from a buch

of different cars views , so your gonna have to pay attention , since it might get a little confusing . :wink:



Chapter 1

I sit in the office , waiting . They've been in there for two hours , so what's taking

them so long ? I knew something wrong was going to happen , but I didn't know it would be this . I watch other

cars leave , relieved their loved ones are okay . Flo's next to me , saying everything will be okay , that

Stickers is always strong , and there was no difference to this than the last time he crashed about 2 months ago

. I try to stay calm , but the tears just flow . I see Doc come in the room.

" How's Stickers ?

" I ask , " Is he okay ? "

Doc only looks down at the ground . He looks upset . Angie's

next to him . I can see she's crying . Angie drives off , out of the hospital , still crying .

I start

to worry . " Please tell me he's alright ! "

" I'm sorry , Sally , " He says to me ,

" he's gone . "

" No ! " I yell , " It can't be true , not Lightning , not my

Stickers ! Noo !! "

--------------------------------

I woke up screaming ,sweating and panting

like crazy .

" What's wrong ? " asked Stickers . He saw the tears , he knew I had been having

the same nightmare every night . " It's okay , " he tried to calm me , " I'm here , I'm not

dead . It's okay Sally , calm down now . "

I tried to calm down . The sweating stopped , but I was

still panting . It got harder to breathe .

" Sally , " he worried , " you don't look so

good . You want me to go wake Doc ? "

" No , " I manage to gasp out , " I'm fine .

"

Five minutes passed and I was still breathing heavily , trying to get more air into my system

.

" That's It , " Stickers said , " I don't care if he wakes up grumpy you look terrible

. "

I tried to follow him , but it was hard to drive . He helped me a bit , letting me lean on him if

I needed to take a rest . We got halfway across the street , and then everything went black

.

--------------------------------------

" Sally , Sally wake up ! " I shouted . I

didn't care if I woke up the whole town . " Doc ! Doc ! "

Everyone drove out of their garage .

When Angie and Flo saw Sally passed out in the road they gasped . Doc came outside half asleep , but then when

he saw her , he looked even more awake than I was .

" Angie , Mater ! " he yelled , " I'm

gonna need some help . Mater , tow her into my clinic and Angie , you're gonna assit me here . " Doc

noticed me next to Sally looking awestruck and confused by what was going on . " She's gonna be okay kid ,

she's in good hands . " Him and Angie drove into his clinic , ready for action as if they were soldiers .

Everyone else headed to Flo's , nobody was able to sleep with all of this going on .

" Come on

Lightning , " Flo said from behind me , " you need to take your mind of her while they're in there .

They'll be done before you know it . "

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" Okay , " Doc took a

deep breath , " let's see what's wrong . "

I stayed next to him , waiting for my next command

. After all , I couldn't do much since I didn't have my degree yet and Doc has only taught me so much .



" See anything yet ? " I asked while he looked under Sally's hood . A little gruesome , I know

, but that's a doctor's job .

" I sure do , " he answered back , " look . " I do as

I'm told , but I don't see anything wrong . Doc notices my confusion and starts to explain . " See that

part right there ? "

" Yeah , that's the gliden chamber . " ( A/N : doesn't exist in a

real car , it would be like a human pacemaker [not the one they put in when u need a new one] )

"

Well , you see , it's been moved to the right a bit , so it's not doin' it's job correctly . I'd have to get

better details from Lightning about what - "

I cut Doc off ," She had a nightmare again .

"

" How do you know that ? " Doc asked suspiciously .

" I heard her scream in

the night , and I could tell Lightning was caliming her down , at least he tried anyway . I saw him try to guide

her to your place , so I was guessing they'd be alright , " I sighed sadly , " I guess I was wrong .

"

" It's not your fault Angie , " he assured me , " it's nobody's fault .

"

Doc had always been like a father to me , almost more than my own father was . When I had crashed

in my first season , he had fixed me up good . Doc knew I was scared , and promised me I would be okay . One time

, my father couldn't stay overnight , so Doc volunteered to stay . He had to stay anyway , he was my doctor ,

but I could tell he wasn't only trying to make me feel better physically .

" I should get this

fixed , " he said softly , " you don't need to help anymore , you can go back to bed . I can see

you're tired . "

See what I mean ?

" Thanks Doc , " I replied tiredly , "

though it will be hard to sleep now , with everyone being worried and all . Goodnight . "

"

goodnight . "

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An hour after being at my

cafe , I noticed Angie leaving Doc's clinic .

" Is Sally okay ? " Lightning quickly asked .

Sally was lucky to have a good boyfriend like that , even if he used to be obnoxious . He was always looking out

for her , and telling her how much he loved her . We could all tell they would stay together after he helped her

re-open the Wheel Well .

" She's gonna be fine , it's really hard to explain the injury . Doc's

finishing her up right now , " Angie replied tiredly . I could tell why Doc let her go , she was extremly

tired , and almost dozing off while she gave the details .

" You better go to bed honey , " I

said to her , " If anything bad happens , I promise I'll wake you . "

" Thanks Flo ,

" she almost whispered it . " Goodnight everyone . "

We all told her goodnight in return .

I noticed Lightning was still a bit quiet . Well , more quiet than the rest of us , anyway. I went to go see what

was wrong .

" Is everything okay , Lightning ? " I asked him .

" Besides Sally ..

yeah everything's okay . "

" You want to talk about it ? I mean , what happened ? " I

asked . Sally was my best friend , I always felt as if I needed to look out for her .. for everyone actually .



" She woke up in the middle of the night , " he replied softly , " she had that dream

again . "

" That's the sixth time this week , " I shook my hood .

" I know ,

I feel as if it's my fault .. after all , she becomes scared and upset because in the dream I die , " he

nudged his fuel can a bit with his tire .

" Don't blame yourself Lightning , " I said , "

it's not anybody's fault at all . "

Just then Doc drove up to the cafe .

" Come on ,

Lightning , I need to talk to you . "

" She's okay , right ? " Lightning asked nervously .



" Yeah , she's okay , just follow me . "

We all sighed , happy that Sally was

alright.

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" We need those dreams to stop ,

" Doc warned , " just let her relax for a few hours before she goes to sleep . No t.v. , and especially

no motel paperwork about two hours before bed . "

" What if we don't ? " I asked , afraid

of the consequences .

" I'm afraid she'll just get worse , " Doc looked at Sally , fast

asleep , " I want her to stay here for the night though , just in case it happens again . "



" Maybe I should stay with her , " I said concerned , " If she wakes up and I'm not there

, she might become even less calm . "

Just as Doc was going to agree with me ( for the first time

ever , I might add ) , Sally woke up with a groan .

" Wha-What happened ? " she asked confused

, " where am I ? "

" You're at Doc's clinic , Sally , " I replied , " you

passed out . "

" I passed out ? " , she repeated , " for how long ?

"

" Long enough for me to fix the problem , " Doc answered for me , " I want you to

stay here tonight though , just in case it happens again . "

" What if what happens again ?

"

" If you have another nightmare again , " I noticed her upset face , " it's okay ,

i'll stay with you , then if you do have the dream again , it won't be like I did - ..... you know . "



She nodded to say she understood .

" Get some rest , " said Doc , " both of you .

" He left the room , and Sally and I soon fell asleep . I checked the clock before I did , it was 3:00 AM .



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Okay , take a breather , she's fine now ( no that's not a line ,

although it should be ! ) . So was it has suspenseful as I aid it would be , or was it just not for you since you

could skip and see what's going on ? see that reply button , it's begging you to click it ! so plz do !

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Postby lennonluvr9 » Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:54 am

"Just

click it" glp pleaded and so i did, ready to give my reply. Oh man, now i'm narrating my own life! Anywho,

that was cool! I liked switching off from different point of views. (is there gonna be a Doc point of view

coming? :P ) And it was suspenseful! There's more where that came from i'm sure. I wanna know what's gonna

happen to sally! And not to spoil anything but [spoil]I hope those dreams of Sally's dont come

true in any way![/spoil]
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Postby gottalovepixar » Tue Feb 27, 2007 1:25 am

lennonluvr9 : NO Doc view was

planned , but I might add one now . I couldn't think of how he would react to anything in the story . Besides ,

I'd be afraid to mess it up . The views I have are Lightning , Sally , Angie , Flo(1) , and

[spoil]Bolts (1)[/spoil].
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Postby gottalovepixar » Mon Mar 05, 2007 9:41 pm

Now the long awaited ( okay , a week , but that's long for me ! ) :

Chapter 2

( warning : 1 swear ! )

Doc soon let me out the next morning , he explained to me exactly what happen ,

with the help of Stickers , and that I really need to take a break from the cozy cone and the wheel well . I was

still aloud to drive , just not too fast or else I might tire myself out a little too much .

" A

drive is fine , " Doc assured me , " in fact it might help you gain your strength back .

"

" Thanks Doc , " I said before heading off to Flo's with Stickers .



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" Hey , look who's up and well ! " Ramone

shouted from his usual spot at the cafe .

" Hi everyone , " I greeted them .

"

Mornin' Sally ! " was the greeting I got back from everybody .

" You don' did have us quite

sceered there Miss Sally ! " Mater said .

" Sorry about that , " I replied shyly .



" There's no need to be sorry , " Chai had her notebook next to her fuel can , and was

probably writing up another story for the town newspaper . " It's not like it was your fault . " I

could tell everybody had heard that a lot lately , especially by the looks on Flo , Angie and Stickers' faces .



I stayed there for a while , ordered my regular , and I noticed it was just a bit more quiet than usual

,although I guessed it was worse late last night . It was nice that they all cared about me , but I couldn't

help but feel sorry about keeping them up , all worrying about me . Even Mia and Tia looked like they had a tough

night , and they hate my parts . (A/N : guts=parts )

Stickers must have noticed I was down a bit , because

only twenty minutes after we had arrived he asked , " Do you wanna go for a drive ? "

"

Yeah , " I replied , " I need to get all this mess out of my head for a while . "

"

Are you sure you want to go ? We can do something else .... "

" No , no , I'm fine , I'll just

take it easy like Doc told me to , " I assured him . I could tell Stickers wanted some time for us to be

alone for a while .


We drove in silence for most of the drive . Stickers was thinking , I could tell

by the look on his face . After being so close to somebody for a while , it's easy to notice how they feel about

certain things . I usually went ahead and teased him about how I could easily go faster than him , but I really

didn't have the strength to . I stood by his side , us both going only 50 mph , while we usually went about 90 .



We arrived at the Wheel Well soon enough , and I noticed it was empty . I took a sigh of relief , knowing

that it hadn't been like this for weeks , and it would be easier for Stickers and I to keep the place together

like it was now . If it was a full house , we'd both be stressed out . I tried not to think about last night , I

just thought of other things , like the training races Stickers would be going to that started in about a week or

so .

I could tell Stickers was trying to not mention what had happen either , although I knew he wanted

to say something . I leaned on him , trying to relax . I sighed .

" I love you , " I

whispered to him . My eyes where closed , it was nice to rest once in a while , and that drive was pretty tiring

.

" I love you too , " he replied back . He could tell I was tired , so we just stayed there

for a while .. him looking at the view , me looking at nothing at all . I opened my eyes , and looked at him . He

smiled at me , I smiled back .

" I was really worried last night , " he said . We usually could

just talk , but .. I don't know , we were both just tired I guess .

Unfortunately , he picked the wrong

subject , " I really don't want to talk about that right now , " I sounded a bit annoyed , I regret

the attitude now .

" I know , I just thought I'd say it quickly so I wouldn't have something

weighing on my mind . "

" Not to mention break the silence , " I said with a small grin .



" Heh , yeah that too , " he confessed . We looked out at the road a bit more , and finally my

strength was up enough to go back . " You ready to go ? " Stickers asked me .

" Yeah

," I answered back ," I'm ready . "

We drove home in silence .



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" I'm sorry , Sally , he's gone .

"

" No ! It can't be true , not Lightning , not my Stickers ! "




I woke up startled by the nightmare again . It wasn't as bad as the night before , as

I quickly calmed down .

" You okay ? " I heard Lightning whisper half asleep .

"

Yeah , I'm fine , I calmed myself down quickly , " I replied moving close to him . He fell back asleep ,

snoring quietly . Soon , I did too .

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" Morning ,

Lightning ! " I heard Flo say from her place .

" Morning ! " I replied back . I had woken

up a bit earlier than Sally this morning , although it was usually the total opposite , unless I had practice

anyway .

" How did she sleep ? " asked Flo , a little less happy than her greeting was .



I sighed , " She had the nightmare again , " I could see Flo looked unhappy as she heard the answer .

" but she did calm down a lot faster than she usually does . "

" Oh , " she answered

back , " that's good then . "

I drove to a spot at the gas station , right next ot Angie , as

Flo passed me my morning fuel . Being as smart as I am , I always get something with more caffiene in the morning

than my usual .

Angie looked at me , as if examining me . In fact , she was examining me . " What's

wrong , Lightning ?" she asked curiously . Even though I had known her for less than a year , we had gotten

close , almost as if we were related . She looked up to me , since she was younger than me . After all , she was

in her freshman year in college . Angie could always tell when something was wrong . It was one of her special

talents , if you could call it that .

" Just .. worried , " I replied , " and a bit tired

, too . "

" I heard her up again last night , " Angie admitted to me . Her cone was the

closet to the garage Sally and I live in , so I was only surprised a bit that she had heard her , " You two

did what Doc said , right ? "

" Yeah , she read a 'Cars' (A/N : "People" ) magazine

. Nothing nerve-racking or anything , it was kind of quiet . " I wasn't lying either , it's not like she

could do paperwork , nobody was visiting Radiator Springs at all . The only keys we didn't have were #4 and #6 ,

Angie and Chai's cones .

" Now I'm kind of glad I have school so I couldn't go with Bolts for his

training , " she said .Bolts had been gone for two weeks training in Florida . She was a bit upset , but she

knew she would soon see him in the training races . " Just think , I probably would've just taken the plane

back to ..... " she stopped when she noticed the look on my face . " She'll be fine Lightning , You

and Doc are takin' good care her . "

--------------------------------------------

Fifteen

minutes after talking to Lightning , I stepped on the Dinoco helicopter with Chai to go to school . I was worried

, but not so much about Sally , I was more worried about Lightning . He was so depresed about what happen , and

he had been quiet lately , not his usual laughing , always arguing with Doc self . I needed time to think , and I

knew Chai could tell , she just looked out the window , searching for the tactors and Frank .

I wasn't

myself either , I have to admit . I was usually as loud as Lightning , but with all of this going on , I was kind

of depressed myself , especially when I heard Sally wake up again in the middle of the night .

"

Chrysler , Sally , I thought , Your scaring us all to death

. " I hate that word , death , I never liked it , and liked it

less when I had almost experienced it , on both sides too . Times like this made me want to cry , but I didn't

since I knew I had been crying a bit too much since I arrived in Radiator Springs .



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" What's the matter Weathers ? " asked Roshell

snobbingly . We had the same first block . " Upset that your boyfriend's gone . He'll be back , but

probably almost dead since he sucks at racing ! " Her friends laughed , and I just couldn't take it .



" May I be excused ? " I asked while driving quickly to outside , needing fresh air .



-------------------------------------

I parked my self under a tree , calming myself down .



" She doesn't even know what's going on , " I mumbled out loud , " why can't she just

mind her own business . " I held back the tears , I was not going to cry , I wasn't .

" Angie

? " I heard a voice behind me . It was Chai , who probably came to see if I was alright , " Listen ,

Angie , she doesn't know what she's talking about , she's just a snob who needs a reality check . "



" I know , I know , " I said as she parked next to me , " I usually just cope with it ..

but ... I haven't really been the same lately .

"

----------------------------------------------------

" Stickers , Stickers !

"

five more minutes , I thought Sally was only trying to wake me up

because it was morning .

" Damn it .. Lightning , wake up ! " I heard her breathing heavily ,

" it's happening again . " My eyes suddenly opened quicker than lightning would strike the ground from

the sound of her hyperventalating .

This time she didn't even make it out of the garage . I knew Angie

had been watching outside her window , because I soon as Sally passed out , and I stopped moving foward , she

rushed out of her cone .

" Get Doc ! " I yelled at her , " Now !

"
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Postby CarFreak » Mon Mar 05, 2007 9:56 pm

When will these nightmares end?

I noticed 1 cuss word well. :wink:
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Postby gottalovepixar » Mon Mar 05, 2007 10:42 pm

Heh , I forgot about

another word that isn't a swaer but to my parents is just as bad . :wink:
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