An Incredible Christmas

Well, you guys wanted it, and here it is. My Incredibles Christmas Fic!

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An Incredible Christmas

Synopsis:

Join The Incredibles as they celebrate the “12 Days Of Christmas.”

[b]The First Day

of Christmas[/b]

?Oh come on!? complained Dash.

It was early morning and Dash was wide

awake. He was staring at the calendar in the kitchen. It was the 14th of December. Suddenly, his sister came

downstairs. She was groggy and in her pajamas.

?Thanks a lot twerp.? said Violet, a little drowsily. ?I am

supposed to sleep on my vacation.?

Before the two siblings could argue, Helen entered. ?What is going on

here? It?s seven o?clock.?

?Dash woke me up!? explained Vi, pointing at her little brother. Both stared at

Dash.

?But mom, it?s the thirteenth of December! Can?t you see that Christmas is only a couple days

away??

?Twelve days to be exact.? said a voice.

Bob Parr emerged into the kitchen. He too was wide

awake like Dash. The two males just gave a joyful look at the two females.

?And why is this

important??

?I?m glad you asked Violet. You all know that Christmas is one of our most favorite holidays

right?? Bob asked. Everyone nodded. ?Well, I am thinking of trying something new this year. I?m sure you all get

pretty antsy each day. So I?m thinking instead of waiting until Christmas to have fun, we can celebrate a little

each day. And on Christmas, we shall have a gigantic party! Now what do you say to that??

Dash proclaimed,

?That is a great idea!?

Helen and Violet shook off their drowsiness. They liked this idea too. Helen and

Violet nodded with excitement in their eyes.

?Very well, then. We better get busy. [b]This is

going to be the greatest holiday ever!!![/b]"

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Violet

went to her room and took a quick shower before slipping on a lilac jacket and jeans. Dash zipped in and out of

his room in a flash. Bob and Helen also went into their room and changed clothes.

?Everyone, on our first

day of Christmas, we shall be decorating our Christmas tree. Now I?m going to get a tree! Want to come, kids??

called Bob.

Dash immediately sprinted down the stairs. Violet came seconds later. Both were anxious in

picking the perfect tree. Bob, Violet and Dash all got into the car and drove off, while Helen took care of

Jack-Jack. Bob drove the car out of the city.

?Hey dad, I thought we were going to get a tree.? said Dash

a little puzzled.

?We are, son? He laughed. "But we aren?t getting in from the city. We are going to

find the perfect tree in the forest.?

An hour later, they arrived at a large forest area. Violet, Dash and

Bob got out of the car and entered the forest. They started to search for their tree. Dash sprinted up to

one.

?How about this one??

After a long look, Bob came to a conclusion. ?Nope, too

short.?

Dash sprinted up to another one. ?How about this one??

?Too crooked.? said Bob.

For

many minutes, Dash would sprint from tree to tree. However, it would be either too tall, too short, too skinny,

too stout, or too crooked. Then Violet came up to one.

?Dad, how about this??

Bob looked at the

tree. It was about 8 and a half feet high. It was not too skinny, but not too wide either. It was so straight, it

pointed directly to the sky. In short, the tree was indeed perfect.

Bob grabbed a hold of the tree and

lifted it off of the ground. He then carried it over to the car, then set it down. He got out some rope and tied

the tree on to the roof of the car.

?Well kids, that about does it! Let?s go

home?

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Bob, Violet, and Dash all got into the vehicle. The car then

drove out of the forest, and back into the city of Metroville. After a while, Bob parked the car in front of his

house. The kids got out and entered the house.

?Hi Vi. Hey Dash.? greeted Helen. ?Were you guys able to

find a good tree??

?Are you kidding mom?? asked Dash.

Then, Bob carried the tree into the house.

Every step he took would leave a trail of fallen pine needles.

?I just vacuumed this floor Bob!? reminded

a slightly agitated Helen.

Dash sprinted into the family room with a Christmas tree holder. He placed it

down next to the corner of the house. Bob placed the tree into the tree holder and fastened it tightly so that it

wouldn?t fall. Violet came in with a pitcher of water. She poured it into the holder. Meanwhile, Helen had just

finished vacuuming the floor. She glanced at their Christmas tree. She was amazed at how beautiful it looked.

Violet went out of the room. She came back, carrying baby Jack-Jack in her arms.

?Isn?t it beautiful,

Jack-Jack?? She asked the baby, tickling his tummy.

The doorbell rang. Violet went to answer it. She was

surprised to see who was there on her doorstep.

?Hey beautiful.? It was Tony.

Violet gave her

boyfriend a gigantic hug. ?Tony, please come in. We are about to decorate our tree.?

Tony went inside the

house. At the same time, Bob came to the family room once again. He was carrying stacks of boxes filled with

Christmas tree decorations. He had to make one more trip after that. When he was finished, eight boxes filled

with lights, ornaments, and other colorful items, were assembled.

?Come with me Violet? said Helen as she

carried Jack-Jack into the kitchen. A curious Violet followed after her.

Bob took one box and brought out

strings of lights. They came in many colors, including red, blue, green, yellow, purple, and white. Dash grabbed

the string of white lights and ran to the Christmas tree. He quickly hung the lights. After that he rushed back

to get a new color, and then another one. Ten minutes later, all of the lights had been hung.

?That was

fast.? said Tony, giving Dash a puzzled look.

Next came the ornaments. There were many various kind of

ornaments, including balls, orbs, rings, miniatures, and sets. Bob hung ornaments in all around the top part of

the tree. Tony decorated around the middle section of the evergreen. Dash, being the shortest of the three, hung

the ornaments at the bottom.

Later, Violet and Helen emerged from the kitchen. Helen was carrying a tray

of fresh gingerbread cookies. Violet brought out five cups and a pitcher of milk. In addition, she brought in

Jack-Jack?s bottle, filled with warm milk. A pleasant aroma filled the air as each person grabbed a cookie and a

cup of milk. They slowly devoured the warm and tasty cookies. After that, Helen and Bob carried the dishes back

to the kitchen.

?Hey Vi, I got to go. It?s almost dark out there.?

Tony went up to Vi and planted a

kiss on her cheek. A sensation of warmth surged throughout Vi?s body. Dash looked disgusted and turned

away.

Minutes later, all of the ornaments were hung. Bob, Dash, and Violet stared in amazement at the

beautifully decorated tree. The lights lit everyone?s eyes as the colorful ornaments added a crisp hint of color

to the tree.

?Well everyone, it looks finished.?

?Not yet.? called a voice. Helen entered the room,

carrying Jack-Jack and a star for the top of the tree. Helen placed the baby down on the floor and handed him the

star. ?You ready Jack-Jack??

Helen lengthened herself to the top of the Christmas tree, grasping Jack-Jack

tightly. Once she reached the top, she brought Jack-Jack closer to the top of the tree. Jack-Jack playfully

placed the bright star on the top. Everyone clapped their hands as the star shined brilliantly. Each eye was

twinkling at the tree. For ten long minutes, the Parr family stared at the tree as the first day drew to a

close.

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The Incredibles celebrated one Christmas Day:

The

first day, they decorate a tree.

The Star Swordsman -

I called my sister

over to me, and we both sat side-by-side near the computer screen before engulfing ourselves in your wonderful

story. I read every line out loud so that we could enjoy it all the more, my sister playing Violet’s and

Helen’s lines…and myself pretending to be Dash and Bob.

I must say, your story is quite the

eye-catcher. I absolutely [b]love[/b] it, sir! It is simple

and easy to read, yet fun and hilarious at the same time. The audience is able to distinguish each character’s

place and the context of the story clearly, making the tale all the more enjoyable.

Fantastic job on the

first part of your “production”, The Star Swordsman. I call it a success

and give it a “thumbs up”!! :smiley:

That’s a cool fanfic TSS , i was happy that you included as many characters as possible ,

even Jack-Jack :slight_smile: .

Very good, can’t wait till the next chapter / day of christmas :smiley:

Awesome TSS! I love it!

Well, you

all want it? You got it.

The Second Day Of Christmas

Dash woke up

early the next morning. He raced down the stairs and turned on the TV. The noise of his cartoons woke up the rest

of the family. Minutes later, Bob Parr came into the family room.

?Good morning son!? greeted

Bob.

?Hey dad!?

Half an hour later, Helen entered the family room with a tray carrying four mugs of

hot cocoa. Violet followed her with Jack-Jack in her arms. Everyone sat on the couch, sipping their drinks until

every mug was empty. Helen took each cup and brought it into the sink.

?So what are we going to do on the

?second day of Christmas?, Dad?? Violet asked.

Bob smiled. ?I?ll let you all decide on that. Now think.

What do you usually do before Christmas??

Violet pondered the question, but then Dash yelled at the top of

his lungs, ?MAKE A WISH LIST!!!?

Bob laughed. ?Very well, we shall be making a wish list

today!?

?What a stupid thing to do!? pouted Violet. ?I thought we were going to do something

fun!?

?Don?t hate it until you try it Vi? teased Dash as he ran upstairs.

Violet sighed, ?This

better be good.?

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Dash grabbed some paper and a pen. He immediately

began to write his letter.

Dear Santa,

I have been a good boy this year. It?s true! I have only 

bugged my sister less times then last year. But let?s get to the point. I would like a new baseball mitt,

baseball, basketball and football. I would like new running shoes, video games, and a nice watch. I would also

love some new toys. Please include new race cars, a water gun, and. . . well anything that you and your elves can

come up with. Thank you. Remember, I have been very good this year.

Dashiell ?Dash? Parr

Dash

looked at his letter over and over again. He went over to the kitchen and went o get an envelope. He then placed

it into the mailbox and sprinted back inside.

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?Now let?s see, what

do I want?? Violet asked to herself.

She sat at her desk, staring at a blank piece of paper for about an

hour. Unfortunately, nothing could come to her mind. She then listed thinks that she thought would be nice. This

included jewelry, clothes and accessories, time with her friends and with Tony. . .

?Tony! That?s it!?

exclaimed Vi.

She wrote down the one thing that she wanted for Christmas. Her mom entered her

room.

?Hey sweetie. Did you make your list yet?? asked Helen with a smile.

?Yep, I definitely know

what I want. I can?t wait for Christmas!?

?I know you are Vi.? Helen laughed.

?What do you and Dad

want for Christmas, Mom?? Violet inquired.

Helen got up. ?The same thing we ask for every single

year.?

?And what is that??

?You?ll see sweetie. You will

see.?

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The Incredibles celebrated two Christmas Days:

Second

day, they?re wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

Good work, TSS! I love how in-character The Incredibles family is, and the

image of Jack-Jack putting the star on top of the tree is lovely and heartwarming. :smiley:

Thanks guys. Keep

reviewing.

The Third Day of Christmas

It was about ten o?clock in the

morning. Helen and Violet started to decorate the exterior of the house. They hung up lights all over the house.

An hour later, the roof and windows were covered with lights.

?Well, that should do it.? said Helen,

placing her hands on her hips.

?I believe so too.?

After staring at the house for a long time,

Helen asked Violet, ?Want to go shopping, Vi??

Violet beamed. ?Sure thing!?

?Great, get my purse. I

need to call someone real fast.?

Violet went upstairs to retrieve her mother?s purse. She went down stairs

and met her mother outside, beside the car. Minutes later, both she and Helen got in the car and drove

off.

?Who did you have to call mom?? Violet asked inquisitively.

Helen cracked a smile. ?You?ll see

honey. You?ll see.?

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Helen drove the car to Metroville?s biggest

mall. It was very crowded like it is every time on this year. People rushed in and out, trying to fit in their

Christmas shopping. Helen had a hard time trying to find a parking space for the car. She was fortunate to find a

small parking space for the car. Helen and Vi got out of the car and walked up to the crowded entrance. Both

pushed their way through the crowd. All of the sudden, Violet noticed a tall, skinny, blonde woman standing in

the crowd.

?Hey Mirage!!!? She called, waving her hand.

Mirage found a black haired girl waving at

her. She waved back. Mirage pushed herself through the crowd. Once she got to Helen and Violet, they shook hands

with each other.

?Mirage, what are you doing here?? wondered Violet.

Mirage looked at Helen with a

smile. ?Your mother invited me over.?

?So nice to see you again Mirage. But, where is. . .?

?GET

OUT OF MY WAY DAHLING!!!?

People kept getting pushed aside. Violet bent down and saw a small woman pushing

her way through people. The small woman crawled under the legs of a man and popped right in front of Mirage,

Violet, and Helen.

?My God, it is crowded. . . DAHLINGS! SO GOOD TO SEE YOU ONCE AGAIN!!!? greeted Edna

Mode.

Hugs were exchanged. After that, the four ladies went into the mall. First, they spent an hour at a

clothing shop. Helen, Violet, and Mirage all tried on many outfits that they liked. Edna just observed and

judged.

It took a while to satisfy Edna. And everyone who knows her knows that it is very hard to impress

her. ?That is ugly dahling!?, ?That would look good on you. . .TEN YEARS AGO!!!?, ?Dahling, TAKE THAT HORRIBLE

THING OFF! IT LOOKS LIKE A DEAD ANIMAL IS SLEEPING ON YOU!!!?

First, Helen came out with a peach colored

jacket with brown colored pants. Violet emerged from the dressing room, wearing a silk jacket and a nice pair of

jeans. Mirage came out wearing thigh high boots, a white dress with a beautifully designed hat. After examining

the three girls, Edna was finally pleased with the outfits. The ladies all left the clothing store.

From

that point on, the four separated to search for more stuff. Helen went to buy stuff for the family, including

Bob, Dash, Lucius, and Jack-Jack. Edna searched for some new material for new Super Suits. Mirage looked around

for stuff to buy for the staff and Supers in the NSA, and Violet explored for stuff for her Super

friends.

About an hour later, the four ladies all met at the food court. They bought themselves some

lunch.

?So what did you get, Vi?? wondered Helen.

Violet smiled. ?It?s a surprise Mom. I can?t just

tell you yet.?

?That?s true dahling. But seriously,? said Edna, ?I am so happy that the holidays are here.

That means more time to relax and to do what I love to do.?

?True,? Mirage added, ?plus, only a couple

days left until Christmas. I can?t wait.?

An hour later, the ladies all exited the crowded mall, and once

again, had to battle the crowd of people. After pushing a couple people, Helen, Violet, Edna, and Mirage stepped

onto the street.

?I got to be back at the NSA Headquarters.? said Mirage. ?I?ll see you all

later!?

Everyone waved good-bye. All of the sudden, a 20-foot, white limousine pulled up. The door opened

and Edna stepped inside.

?Well dahlings, thank you so much for a marvelous day shopping. I hope to see you

soon I am a busy woman you know. Bye-bye!?

The limousine drove away, leaving Violet and Helen by

themselves. Both of them went over to the car. Helen drove out of the parking space and back home. Before they

left the mall, Violet?s eye caught something. On the corner of the street, a man, dressed in a Santa Claus outfit

was ringing a sleigh bell. On the ground next to him was a small bucket with money inside. The bucket had a label

on it that said, ?[i]Please donate, to give a Christmas to those who aren?t able to have

one[/i].?

Violet sniffled as a tear dropped from her eye. Helen noticed this and asked her

daughter.

?What?s wrong sweetie??

?It?s nothing mom.? Violet replied, wiping her tear away. ?It?s

just that we are so lucky to have a Christmas. You know, we have a tree, decorations around the house, and even

more. Yet there are some out there who aren?t as fortunate as we are.?

Helen smiled and placed a hand on

her shoulder. ?I know how you feel Vi.?

Minutes later, Helen pulled the car up onto the driveway. Suddenly

an idea came to Violet. She grinned back at her mother.

?Mom, I know what I want to do tomorrow on the

fourth day!?

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The Incredibles celebrated three Christmas

Days:

Third day, they?re shopping,

Second day, they?re wishing,

And the first day, they

decorate a tree.

[b]Great

chapter TSS! I love how “E” and Mirage are in this one! :smiley: I can’t wait till the next one! :smiley:

[/b]

I giggled through all of the Edna parts . I think I know

what they’re doing next . :slight_smile:

Well, here is day four for you

guys.

The Fourth Day of Christmas

Violet woke up early the next

morning. She went down the stairs and found her mom frying some bacon. After giving her a hug, she went over to

the refrigerator. She pulled out some milk, eggs, and butter.

Seconds later, Dash came into the room and

found both his mother and sister cooking. ?Hi mom, and Vi, you aren?t going to kill me with your cooking are

you?? He joked.

?Dash, be nice. Your sister is doing something very thoughtful.?

Violet went over

to the cupboard and brought out four boxes of gingerbread cookie mix. Altogether, she had four boxes of mix, one

carton of a dozen eggs, one gallon of milk, and a stick of butter.

?You are making all of those for ME??

asked Dash with an innocent smile on his face.

Violet sighed. ?No you little twerp. You can have one, but

these aren?t for you. Guess what we are doing on the today on the fourth day of Christmas?? inquired Violet. Dash

shrugged his shoulders. ?Today, we are going to give people a Christmas!? she replied excitedly.

?Excuse

me?? said Dash, a little puzzled.

Helen walked up to Dash and rubbed his hair. ?Honey, there are some

people out there in the world who aren?t as lucky as us to have a Christmas. Some don?t have the money, time,

environment, or place to celebrate. So we are going to help.?

?Like how?? wondered Dash.

Helen

answered, ?Well, donating things is a good way. Giving toys, clothes, and food is a great way to give them a

little Christmas. After all, a little is enough.?

Violet smiled. ?I?m baking a bunch of gingerbread

cookies! And from the looks of this, I am going to bake a lot of them.?

?So if the people do hate your

cooking. . .? joked Dash.

Violet glared at him and grabbed an egg. She was about to throw it at him. That

was when Dash sprinted out of the kitchen. An hour later, Violet was finished baking the cookies. The pleasant,

savory aroma of gingerbread filled the house. Dash sprinted back to the kitchen.

?What do you want??

Violet asked.

Dash?s mouth was watering. He gazed with innocent eyes at five full plates of gingerbread

men cookies. He was about to reach for one until Violet threw a force field, stopping Dash in his

tracks.

Violet grinned. ?You didn?t answer my question Dash.?

Dash sighed. ?Uh Vi, may I please

have at lease one cookie??

Violet smiled and put down her force field and handed a cookie to Dash. Dash

excitedly snatched the cookie from her hands. The young boy began to devour the tasty treat. He finished the

cookie and a smile was placed on his face.

?Well?? wondered an anxious Violet.

Dash grinned. ?Well, I?m glad that they aren?t poisoned.?

Violet smacked him in the

back of the head. Dash grumbled as he rushed out of the kitchen, nursing his head.

Upstairs, Bob was

assembling boxes of clothes. He brought them downstairs to the family room. Just then, Helen emerged from the

garage, bringing in some groceries. She brought into the kitchen a nice, plump, juicy turkey, mashed potatoes,

creamed corn, fruit, and two boxes of Christmas pie.

?I sure hope this is enough.? said Violet, stacking

another tray of cookies. She now had six stacked plates.

?Oh I?m sure we have plenty.? smiled Helen. ?By

the way, where is Dash??

Suddenly, a knock came from the door. Curious, Bob answered the door. And right

on the doorstep was Dash. Behind him was a giant sack filled with toys. Bob smiled and lifted the sack up and

carried it into the family room. The family of Supers all assembled together.

?Well everyone, let?s go.?

said Bob.

Everyone went up to their rooms and slipped into their Super Suits. After that, they all loaded

the trunk with the sack of toys and boxes of clothes. After placing the cookies and food in the middle of the

back seat, everyone got into the Incredibile and drove off.

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Mr.

Incredible drove the car to a nearby hotel. This was where they were going to hold the Christmas gathering to all

of the homeless, poor, and unfortunate.

They unloaded the Incredibile and brought the stuff into the

lobby. The Incredibles were amazed to see the lobby and dinning hall beautifully designed and prepared.

Medium-sized decorated Christmas trees were placed in every corner. There was a fireplace with stockings on the

top. Lights colored and brightened the vicinity.

Elastigirl placed the food down on a counter. Invisigirl

placed the cookies right next to it. Bob placed the sack of toys and boxes of clothes at a corner. Then, Rick

Dicker, Edna Mode, and Mirage all entered and greeted the Supers.

?This place is well done Rick.? Mr.

Incredible commented.

?You can thank Mirage for this.? grinned Rick. ?She picked the place and designed

everything here.?

E finally praised, ?This is just beautiful dahlings. I have designed many spectacular

things in the past, but this is absolutely beautiful Mirage.?

?Thank you E.? replied a complacent Mirage.

?Oh, that reminds me. We better get ready. Our guests should arrive anytime soon now.?

The food was set

up, the cookies were revealed, and the toys and clothes were wrapped neatly in five minutes, thanks to

Speedster?s speed. Finally, the guests arrived. More and more people filled the room. At last, every seat was

filled by a man, woman, or a little child. A sense of excitement filled the hearts and minds of the Incredibles,

Rick, E, and Mirage.

?Attention everyone.? called Rick, gently clanging a piece of glass with a spoon. ?We

thank you all for coming here. You don?t know how fortunate we all are to be here. But before we get this

celebration started, I would like to thank one special person who greatly contributed to this occasion.

Everybody, please give a warm thank you to, Mirage.?

A loud roar of applause was echoed throughout the

room as Mirage step forward and gave a slight bow. A minute later, the applause began to die down.

?Well

now. I bet you all are starving. So, let the dinner be served!? proclaimed Rick.

Everybody cheered. They

all got up from their seats and made their way toward the buffet line. Mr. Incredible sliced up and served a

piece of turkey for the guests. Elastigirl spooned them a chunk of mashed potatoes and cream corn. After

obtaining a piece of fruit, they all sat back down at the tables. When the last guest was served, the family of

Supers, Rick, Mirage, and E served themselves. While eating, the seven of them observed the faces of their

guests. Never in their lives have they seen a happier crowd. Smiles were put on everyone?s faces. Never in their

lives have they eaten so much. The food was delicious, the atmosphere was elegant, what more can make this

perfect?

Half an hour later, Invisigirl got up from her seat and went to obtain her homemade ginger bread

cookies. She took a plate and offered them to each person sitting at a table. Minute later, each person in the

room had a cookie to munch on, and Invisigirl had one plateful of cookies left.

Each person took a bite

into the ginger bread cookies. A sense of delight filled their entire body. After the people finished their

cookies, they all turned to Invisigirl and clapped their hands. A proud and stimulated young heroine stood up and

took a bow.

When the applause died down, Invisigirl asked her mother, ?Mom, have you seen Dash or

Dad??

Elastigirl shook her head. All of a sudden, a bright green blur sped all around the hotel. People

turned their heads, trying to figure out what was going on. Then, in the midst of all of this activity, the blur

stopped right in front of the fireplace.

Elastigirl and Invisigirl tried their hardest not to laugh. It

was Speedster, dressed up in an elf costume.

?Hello kids!? greeted a joyful Speedster.

?Hello.?

responded the children as they all gathered around the fireplace.

?I am so excited to have you all here.

Is everybody having an incredible time?? he asked. Every kid in the hotel screamed as loud as they could. ?Who

has been a good kid this year?? Speedster asked again. Once again, all of the kids raised their hands and

screamed. ?I hope so.? he said as the noise began to die down. ?How many of you would like to see Santa Claus

today?? Every child yelled loudly once again. It was probably the loudest cheer of the day.

?Ho, Ho, Ho!?

came an echo.

All of the kids looked around in bewilderment.

?I wonder who could that be??

Speedster grinned.

?Ho, Ho, Ho!? the voice cried louder. ?Ho, Ho, Ho!? Suddenly, feet appeared from over

the chimney. They dangled in the air. ?Ho, Ho, Help me out here!? cried the voice.

Speedster slapped his

head and grabbed the two dangling feet. He pulled with all of his strength. Seconds later, Santa Claus landed on

his butt in front of the kids.

?SANTA CLAUS!!!? cried the kids.

Invisigirl smiled and giggled.

Elastigirl grinned and shook her head. It was really Mr. Incredible, dressed in a Santa suit, with a white beard,

red cap and suit.

?Ho, Ho, Ho. Merry Christmas!? he proclaimed.

?Uh, Merry Christmas to you Santa,

but I am afraid you came a little to early.? said Speedster. ?You see, today is the seventeenth of December.

Christmas isn?t for another eight days!?

?Really? Oh, I am sorry. I guess I?ll be on my way then.? At once

the children started to whine. Santa turned around. ?My, my, who might these little boys and girls

be??

?Santa, these are people who were just unfortunate to have a Christmas. Most of these children have

never seen you before. We all just wanted you to give these children a wonderful Christmas.?

Santa smiled.

?Have you children been good??

?YEAH!!!? shouted every kid in the room.

?Well that is just

excellent news. Come, sit with me, and I?ll see if Santa has something for you.?

Santa took his sack of

toys and sat down in a chair. One by one, a child would come up and sit on his lap. After introducing themselves,

Santa reached into his sack of toys and gave one to each kid. The boys would receive action figures, sports

equipment, and other guy play items. Santa gave each girl a doll, stuffed animals, and other girl toys.

Finally, after the last child received his gift, the children began to happily play with their toys.

Tears of happiness and smiles of joy filled everyone?s eyes. This included the adults and Supers as well. Never

in anyone?s life have the Incredibles, Rick, Edna, and Mirage made so happy.

After a long day, the crowd

started to leave. Before they exited out of the hotel, each person was given a box of clothes and some money to

start their life anew and hopefully, jump from the depths of poverty.

Invisigirl sniffed and wiped a tear

from her eye as the last guest left the hotel. She turned and was astonished to find a little ten year old girl

with shoulder length brown hair, curled up in a ball in the corner of the room. Invisigirl walked over to

her.

?Hey there, what?s wrong?? inquired Invisigirl. ?You shouldn?t be sad on a day like this.?

The

teenaged Super wiped the tears away from the little girl?s face. After that, she dove into the arms of

Invisigirl, burying her face into the heroine?s chest.

?Santa never gave me what I wanted. I just wished

for one thing.?

?And what is that?? Invisigirl questioned.

?All I want for Christmas is to see my

mother again. She left me at an orphanage, saying to me that she will find a better life for me and her. I

haven?t seen her in five years.?

And with that, she began to sob into Invisigirl?s Super Suit. The

teenaged Super couldn?t help but cry with her. At that moment, Elastigirl walked up to the two, and embraced

them.

?Oh little one. Don?t cry. Trust me. Everything is going to be okay.? She consoled the little

girl.

Then, in the lobby, Rick called out to the three females. ?Well, looks like we got ourselves a late

arrival!?

A woman in her mid thirties stepped was greeted by the family of Supers and the NSA workers. The

woman then saw Invisigirl and Elastigirl. She walked over to them. Just then, the little ten year old girl caught

her eye.

?Vanessa!? the woman cried.

?Mom!? gasped the girl.

She ran and jumped into her

mother?s arms as the two hugged and cried with each other. Smiles were put on everyone?s faces. In addition,

tears of joy filled everyone’s eyes.

//////////\

The Incredibles celebrated

four Christmas Days:

Fourth day, they’re giving,

Third day, they?re shopping,

Second day,

they?re wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

(sniff) it’s so beautiful ! :`-( waah ! :slight_smile:

Day 5. Here is a fun one. You all

can sing if ya like.

The Fifth Day of Christmas

It was about noon on

the fifth day of Christmas. The family was sitting around the house doing nothing. Helen just emerged from the

kitchen.

?Well, that is it. I called everyone. They are all coming!?

Violet smiled. ?Really? I

can?t wait until tonight!?

Everyone agreed. Tonight, they were going to go into the streets of Metroville

and have one gigantic singing performance. As Helen said, everyone was going to be there. Rick and Mirage were in

charge of the event, E hosted the show, and each member of the Incredibles were going to perform solos, duets,

and join together in the finale.

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Later that night;

?Test,

test, one two three.? Mirage spoke into the microphone on a stage in the city of Metroville. ?How is everyone

doing out there?!?

The crowd screamed at the top of their lungs and clapped their hands loudly. After a

minute, the crowd began to die down.

?Well, I can see we have an exciting crowd with us!? said Rick. ?I am

so glad that you all have come here to this great event. Now how many of you out there are excited that Christmas

is only one week away?!?

The crowd roared.

?Very well then.? smiled Mirage. ?And now, the moment

you all have been waiting for. Please give a warm welcome to THE INCREDIBLES!!!?

The crowd gave a

tremendous amount of applause as the lights of the city all went down. A spotlight shone on the family of Supers

in their Super Suits, posing. The music started. The family started to sing the song ?[i]Jingle

Bells?. [/i]After that, the Incredibles sang the song [i]?Deck the

Halls?.[/i]

The crowd applauded as the lights turned dimmed and the Supers exited off of the

stage. The host, Edna walked on to the stage. ?Dahlings, how are you doing this evening??Once again, the crowd

cheered. ?Well, I hope you loved the opening, because this is only the beginning!?

Mr. Incredible started

things off. He sang the songs ?Winter Wonderland? and [i]?Let it

Snow?.[/i] After that, Elastigirl came on stage. She performed [i]?Santa

Baby?[/i] and ?All I want for Christmas is You?. The crowed applauded for

her singing, and then it was Invisigirl?s turn. She sang ?The First Noel?, and

?Silver Bells?.Everyone was in awe of her beautiful voice. Speedster was next. He

sang ?Here Comes Santa Claus?, and [i]?Frosty the

Snowman?[/i].

?How about that folks, give them a round of applause dahlings!? said Edna, coming

on to the stage. ?Well, before we enter our intermission, I would like to invite Mirage up here. She shall be

performing a Spanish Christmas song called ?Feliz Navidad?.

Mirage sung it to

perfection. The crowd roared, then took a forty minute break. The audience helped themselves to concessions,

snacks, souvenirs, and other stuff. After a while, the show resumed.

The second act started with Mr.

Incredible and Elastigirl singing ?I?ll be Home for Christmas? and

?Sleigh Ride?. After that, Elastigirl left the stage and Invisigirl joined her

father. Together, they sang the tune ?Here we Come a Caroling? and [i]?Oh

Christmas Tree.?[/i] When that was done, Invisigirl exited the stage and Mr. Incredible?s son came on.

Both performed ?Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer? and [i]?Up on the

Housetop?.[/i] After that, both father and son left the stage. Elastigirl and Invisigirl went on.

Together, thy sang ?Silent Night? and [i]?Away in a

Manger?[/i]. Speedster joined her mother as Invisigirl left. Both performed [i]?Jolly Old

Saint Nicholas?[/i] and ?Little Drummer Boy?. Finally, Invisigirl and

Speedster sang together ?Twelve Days of Christmas? and [i]?Santa Clause

is Coming to Town?.[/i]

?Ladies and gentlemen,? said Edna, coming on to the stage, ?we thank

you for attending our Caroling Festival. We would now like to conclude with this number. Good night everyone.

Merry Christmas.?

The whole family, Mirage, Rick, and even Edna went onto the stage. Together, they

performed the final medley. They first sang ?Joy to the World?, then

?Have a Holly Jolly Christmas?, next was [i]?Oh Come All Ye

Faithful?,[/i] and finally, they all concluded with [i]?We Wish you a Merry

Christmas?.[/i] People applauded louder than ever before. They gave them a standing ovation. The

Incredibles, Edna, Rick, and Lucius all gave a bow as the crowd continued to

cheer.

//////////\

The Incredibles celebrated five Christmas Days:

Fifth

day caroling,

Fourth day, they’re giving,

Third day, they?re shopping,

Second day, they?re

wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

Great fan-fic I love how you’ve included all the characters!

sings On the

sixth day of christmas The Incredibles…???

Well, here is what they did on the sixth day:

[b]The Sixth Day of

Christmas[/b]

Dash woke up on the sixth day. He rubbed his eyes and looked out the window. His

eyes immediately darted open from what he saw. He rushed to everyone?s room, waking them up.

?IT?S

SNOWING! IT?S SNOWING!!!?

Violet, Helen, and Bob all jumped out of their beds and made their way toward

the window. They were astounded to see white snow flakes falling from the sky. Even Jack-Jack was awed by the

falling snow.

?What are we going to do today dad?? Violet asked.

Bob smiled. ?Get changed

everyone.?

Everyone was quite puzzled of Bob?s plan, but they went to their rooms and put on some warm

clothes. Bob went into the garage and started the car. Helen placed Jack-Jack inside and then took a seat in the

front. Violet and Dash followed after her. Bob drove the car out of the garage and into the snowing Metroville.

They drove a couple minutes down the road until they came across a huge frozen lake. Helen, Violet, and Dash

smiled at Bob?s idea.

They got out of the car and went to the ice-skate rental shop. Half an hour later,

the family exited the place with some skates. After putting them on, the family stepped on to the ice and began

skating. Helen carried Jack-Jack in her arms, holding on to her husbands hand. Violet skated calmly and placidly

behind her parents. Dash, however, sped around the lake as if he were in the Olympics. By the time he made one

revolution around the lake, his mother grabbed him by his shoulder.

?Dash, please stick together. You

could get tired. Don?t use all of your energy.?

Dash sighed. ?But going slow bores me.?

Violet

giggled. She then bumped into someone. She landed on her behind with a thud.

?Oh my goodness, I am so

sorry.? she apologized, stumbling to her feet, nursing her behind.

?You don?t have to Vi.? said the

person.

Violet looked up and her eyes began to glitter. ?Hi Tony!?

She gave him a huge hug. Tony

looked around, embarrassed. ?Violet, there are people staring at us.?

She giggled. Both stared in each

other?s eyes. After that, Vi grabbed Tony?s hand and both skated happily together.

Helen and Bob witnessed

the whole thing. ?Isn?t this romantic honey?? asked Helen.

Bob grunted. ?Just so long as he doesn?t take

her so far.?

?Bob!? gasped an exasperated Helen.

?What? I?m just

concerned.?

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A couple hours past. Everyone was enjoying themselves.

Then, Dash skated to his parents. He was panting heavily.

?Mom, dad. . . help.?

Helen placed her

hands on her hips. ?Well, I told you not to go all out.?

?No mom. . .? huffed the young boy. ?Someone. . .

needs help. . .?

WHAT?!? wondered Bob.

?HELP ME!!!? someone cried.

Jack-Jack saw the person

in need and started to reach his arms out to him. The baby began to wail. Helen noticed this and gazed her eyes

at what Jack-Jack was reaching to.

?Bob, look!?

In the middle of the frozen lake, a young boy was

drowning. Apparently the ice broke from under him. Bob, Helen, and Dash ran and found a place to

change.

Meanwhile;

?Oh my God! Someone?s gotta do something!? said Tony. He looked around but

noticed one thing missing. ?Violet. . . Violet. . . Violet where did you go??

Inside Tony?s mind, he

wanted to panic. There was a boy, crying for help. He was too afraid to move. He then clenched his fist and raced

out to help the boy. Tony dashed to him. The ice started to crack from under him. It isolated, stranding the

teenaged boy in the middle of the lake. The boy grabbed on to the ice that stranded Tony and he pulled him

on.

?Hang on there boys.? said a voice.

It was Mr. Incredible. He grabbed the isolated ice and

lifted it up before it could drift any farther. He lifted them up in the air. Unfortunately, Tony lost his

balance and fell into the lake.

?TONY!!!? cried Invisigirl.

She jumped into the lake and swam after

Tony. The water was freezing cold. She had to summon all of her courage and energy to swim under after him. Once

she got to him, she grabbed his body and clenched to him tight. From above the surface, Elastigirl reached under

and grabbed the two teens. She fished them out of the water. A drenched Invisigirl and Tony landed on the ice.

They were shivering and freezing. Mr. Incredible carried Tony and Elastigirl carried her daughter inside the ice

skate shop. Inside, there was a blazing fireplace. The two Supers placed the two teens in front of the fire.

Elastigirl then wrapped the two in thick blanket. Soon enough, Invisigirl?s and Tony?s body temperature began to

raise. Speedster then came in with two cups of hot cocoa. The two began to sip on the hot drink. When that was

finished. Tony and Invisigirl gave each other a nice tender hug.

?Thank you for saving my life.? whispered

Tony. Invisigirl simply blushed.

Meanwhile, everyone outside was relieved that the boy was going to be

okay. However, they were quite saddened that the lake was now broken and unsafe to skate on.

?Hey

everyone, chill out. I got this problem fixed.?

It was Frozone. He walked up

to the lake and fired a beam of ice from his hand. The second it touched the water, it became frozen solid and

sturdy. The people cheered as Frozone skated away.

An hour later, the Incredibles were applauded by

everyone there. Smiles of joy were planted on everyone?s face. Each member of the family took a bow and headed

into the Incredibile. Mr. Incredible started the car and drove

away.

//////////\

The Incredibles celebrated six Christmas Days:

Sixth

day, ice skating,

Fifth day, caroling,

Fourth day, they?re giving,

Third day, they?re

shopping,

Second day, they?re wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

Please comment people. Thank you. Here is Day

number seven.

The Seventh Day of Christmas

Snow continued to fall the

very next morning. Dash looked out side. He saw cars trying to move along the slippery road. He saw neighbors

shoveling their driveways and walkways. Dash looked at his own driveway and saw his father shoveling.

Bob

dug into a large chunk of snow and shoveled it out on to the lawn. Dash continued to watch his dad. Finally, Bob

was finished. The Parr family driveway and walk was clean and clear. Bob went into the garage an put his shovel

away. Dash ran down the stairs to greet his father.

?Nice job dad. Other driveways are still covered in

snow. Some folks have given up already.? he said.

Bob smiled and rubbed his son?s hair. ?You know, one

should not be working at a time like this.? said Bob. ?The snow is beautiful. The atmosphere is

elegant.?

Suddenly, a thought struck Violet. ?I know! Today, why not play in the snow??

?How??

wondered Dash with a perplexed look.

Helen grinned. ?Honey, there is so much we can do. Go skiing,

sledding, have snowball fights, make snowmen. . .?

Dash was convinced enough. ?Well, what are we waiting

for? Let?s go!!!?

Bob, Helen, Violet, Dash, and Jack-Jack got dressed into some warm clothes, then made

their way to the car. Bob placed an old sled and even a snowboard in the trunk. Then, he drove it out of the

garage and on to the driveway.

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The drive was a half an hour long.

Soon, Bob drove up to a wide open area of snow. There were two small hills and one large one, about the size of a

house. Later, another car drove up, two people stepped out of the car.

?Yo Bob, Helen, Vi, Speedo,

Jack-Jack.?

It was Lucius. He went up to the family and shook hands with them. Then, a very small woman

walked up to them.

?Dahlings, just because I?m short, doesn?t mean I don?t exist.?

The family

smiled and greeted Edna Mode as well. After that, Bob went to retrieve their stuff from the trunk. He placed the

sled and snowboard on the snow. Everyone made their way to the vast open of snow.

First, they all had a

snowball fight. It was Bob, Dash and Frozone versus Helen and Violet. Edna did not want to participate, so she

decided to take care of Jack-Jack and watch.

First, the five Supers constructed two forts, one for Bob?s

team, another for the other. With Bob?s strength, Dash?s speed, and Lucius?s ice powers, they created two of the

most indestructible snow forts of all. The two teams went behind their own forts.

Helen and Vi might have

been out numbered, and it might been guys vs girls. However, this snowball fight turned out to be a pretty even

match.

First, Bob hurled giant snowballs at the other team. They were about the size of boulders. Dash

rapidly threw small snowballs at them. And Lucius blasted his ice beam at the other team.

The two females?

strategy was simply this. Violet?s force field would be used as the first line of defense, blocking any and all

ice particles projected at her and her mother. The force field was not only used as a shield, but a distraction.

All the while, Helen had been scooping and rolling an abundant amount of snowballs. When the guys ceased their

fire, Violet?s and Helen?s offensive plan was put into action. Helen clustered all of the snowballs together,

wrapped her arms around them, and flung it to the opposing team.

?INCOMING!!!? shouted Dash, pointing up

at the sky.

The snowballs rained down on the male Supers. Vi and Helen laughed hysterically. All of the

sudden, a large clump of snow hit Helen in the face, she fell backwards and landed in the snow. Violet turned

around, but too late. A large snowball smacked the front of her face. She landed right next to her mom. The two

got up and brushed the snow off of their face and body.

?Dash, no throwing snowballs in the face.? Helen

chastised, staring at the young boy.

A second of silence followed. After that, came laughter. Bob, Helen,

Violet, Dash, and Lucius resumed their snowball fight, without Super

Powers.

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Meanwhile, Edna grew bored of watching the five pelt each

other with snowballs. She stood up and picked up Jack-Jack.

?Gosh dahling, I grow tired of this,

insignificant snowball fight. Come on little one. Let?s have some fun.?

Edna carried the baby over to the

sled and placed him on it. She then pulled Jack-Jack around. The little baby was enjoying his little ride as he

cooed and laughed along the way. Edna smiled at Jack-Jack?s reaction. She then pulled the sled up a tiny hill.

She sat on the sled with Jack-Jack and held on to him tight.

?Ready dahling?? Edna asked. Jack-Jack

joyfully clapped his hands. ?Very well. One. . .two. . .three.?

Edna and Jack-Jack rode the sled down the

small hill. Edna held on to the baby with a firm grasp. Jack-Jack laughed in excitement and exhilaration.

Finally, the sled decelerated to a stop.

?Wasn?t that fun dahling??

Jack-Jack laughed and clapped

cheerfully.

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Bob took the snowboard and made his way up the really

huge hill. Lucius followed after him.

?Bob, aren?t you a little. . . you know. . .?

Bob just

laughed. ?Nonsense old buddy. I can do this. Back in the day, I used to perform cool moves like

you.?

Lucius smacked his head in annoyance. Finally, the two reached the top. Bob strapped the snowboard

to his feet. Lucius put his Frozone boots on. Both gazed down the him. It was pretty steep, with some small hills

to get a little elevation.

?Okay, look out below!? said Bob.

Bob made his way down the hill. Lucius

just watched. Bob accelerated down the slope. He was going so fast, he lost control of his board. It wasn?t long

before Bob fell flat on his face. He rolled down the slope until he reached the bottom.

?Amateur.? sighed

Lucius, shaking his head.

He jumped off, and two silver ice skis popped from his Frozone boots. He landed

on the downslope and began to ski his way down. Lucius decided that the steep hill wasn?t fun enough. He

discharged his ice beam from his hand and created a little ice ramp. He jumped off of it and performed many

tricks and spins in the air. Lucius then formed another ice ramp with his beam of ice. Once he launched off of

theat, his skates converted to his ice disk. Lucius then glided down the rest of the slope. He stopped right next

to a dumbfounded Bob.

?Bob, if it?s from you, then it is not cool. If it?s from me, then it is cool. Got

it??

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Meanwhile, Helen was helping the kids make a snowman. She

rolled a huge chunk of snow into a base. Violet rolled out a middle section. Dash rolled the head. Violet placed

the middle section on the base and Dash placed the head on top. Dash collected stones and placed them on the

snowman?s face. Violet took off of her scarf and wrapped it around its neck.

?It looks good kids.?

commented Helen.

?Thanks mom.? recited the two in

unison.

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Finally, the sun started to set. The whole family, Lucius

and Edna all felt exhausted. After loading the stuff into the car, they all left. Helen, Vi, Dash, and Jack-Jack

began to fall asleep as the sun disappeared behind the horizon.

//////////\

The

Incredibles celebrated seven Christmas Days:

Seventh day, with snow,

Sixth day, ice

skating,

Fifth day, caroling,

Fourth day, they?re giving,

Third day, they?re

shopping,

Second day, they?re wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

Well, my sister and I

[b]finally[/b] got around to reading all of your chapters. I

must say, they’re really good, sir! Keep up the good work! We both can’t wait for the next chapter! :smiley:

– Mitch

Sad news, i was hoping to

update it every single day, but since no one commented each time I submited a chapter, the timing was thrown off

indefinetely. But I will finish it. Just promise you will comment every time I submit a chapter.

Thanks.

The Eighth Day of Christmas

Violet looked out the window. Snow

wasn?t falling from the sky. She looked up into the sky. The sun was out and was shining down on the Earth. Vi

got changed and met her family in the kitchen. Helen placed a bowl of oatmeal in front of her

daughter.

?So Bob, what are we going to do today?? Helen asked.

Bob placed his hand on his cheek.

He thought and thought. Ten minutes later, he shot open his eyes with an idea.

?Why not go for a sleigh

ride? You know, like in the song Jingle Bells.?

Every person in the room looked at him with a puzzled

look.

?Bob, what are you talking about?? asked his wife.

?Yeah dad. Where we are going to get a big

sleigh? And the reindeer??

?Hang on there, Dash. Just stay calm. I know what I?m talking

about.?

Bob walked over to the telephone. He dialed a number. The rest of the family continued to look at

him with an inquisitive gaze.

?Hello? Brandon?s Sled Rentals? Yes, I would like to rent one for my family

and a couple of friends. Yes. . . yes. . . Bob Parr. . . eight to nine people. . . none please. . . I?m sure. . .

I?m serious. . . thanks. . . be there in two hours. . . thanks. . . bye.?

He went back to the

table.

?So what?s going to happen dad?? inquired Violet.

Bob smiled. ?You just wait.?

After

breakfast, everyone put the dishes away. Violet had been told by Bob that she could invite any person that she

wanted. Violet raced up the stairs, grabbed her phone, and dialed a number to a friend?s house. Helen called the

NSA and invited Mirage, and Edna. Bob called his friend Lucius.

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An

hour later, the Parrs got into the car and were on their way. They drove for forty five minutes until they

arrived at a gigantic forest area. Bob, Helen, Violet, Dash, and Jack-Jack all got out of the car. They found a

large barn area with a lot of reindeer and a lot of sleighs.
?Hey Bob! Over here!? called a voice.

It

was Lucius. The Parr family walked over to him. Five minutes later, Edna and Mirage arrived. After greeting each

other, they all went to get their sleigh. Everyone except Violet. She stayed and waited.

?Hey Vi, you

coming?? asked Helen.

?I?m just waiting for someone mom.?

?Who??

A car horn was heard. A

young boy exited out of the car.

?Thanks dad, I?ll be done in a couple hours.?

The boy walked up to

Violet. Violet was so elated, she couldn?t move, or speak. Finally, after staring in each other?s eyes for about

ten seconds, she spoke.

?Thanks. . . f. . .for coming. . .T. . .Tony.? stammered Vi.

?Thank you for

inviting me.?

After the two gave each other a hug, Vi and Tony went over to join the rest. Both were

rather surprised to see a huge sleigh, but no reindeer. Everyone glared at Bob.

?Is everyone ready?? he

cheerfully asked.

Dash gave him a peculiar look. ?Is this a joke dad? Where are the reindeer to pull the

sleigh??

Bob smiled. ?You?re looking at him.?

Everyone?s eyes widened in curiosity and

astonishment. After a minute of silence, a sound of a giggle was heard. It came from Dash. Violet was also

laughing. Tony then joined her. Soon enough, everyone was laughing.

Lucius place a hand on his friend?s

shoulder. ?Okay big man. If you want to carry all of us, be my guest.?

Bob went and got some strong sturdy

rope. He tied it to the front of the sled and then tied the other ends around his chest. Everyone got on the

sled. It had two rows. Helen, Dash, Violet and Tony sat in the front row. Lucius, Mirage, and Edna, carrying

Jack-Jack, sat in the back.

Bob pulled the sled. He didn?t have to try, as he used half of his effort to

easily pull and maneuver the sleigh. They went at a normal pace. Everyone enjoyed the scenery. The bare trees

stood tall like soldiers. A large cushion of snow blanketed the ground. The sun peered from the branches of the

woods.

Violet clung tightly to Tony?s body like a giant teddy bear. ?Isn?t this beautiful

Tony??

Tony just gazed at Vi with affection in his eyes. ?Yes, incredibly beautiful.?

Violet stared

into his eyes and began to blush. Dash looked disgusted, but Helen glared at him just in case he opened his

mouth.

After hours of sleigh riding, Bob pulled the sleigh back to the stable. He loosened the rope and

threw it away before the owner discovered anything suspicious. When the owner exited his office, all he saw was a

giant sled, right in the middle of the parking lot, with no reindeer

nearby.

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The Incredibles celebrated eight Christmas Days:

Eighth day, sleigh riding,

Seventh day, with snow,

Sixth day, ice skating,

Fifth

day, caroling,

Fourth day, they?re giving,

Third day, they?re shopping,

Second day, they?re

wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.

Not bad. I’m curious to see what

else the Parrs will do during the last four days – they’ve practically used all of their “resources”

up: they went sledding, skiing, shopping, skating, and caroling. What else is left?

Heheh. Well, I’m sure you’ll think of something. In the meantime, keep up the good work. :wink:

By the way,

I know that some of us (myself, in particular – shame on me) haven’t been reviewing your chapters as often as

you would prefer, but patience is the key. Won’t your audience feel pressured to read your story as fast as

possible if you keep pushing them to read it? No offense – I don’t mean to hurt your feelings at all.

As a matter of fact, sometimes it is – I guess – a good thing to keep asking one’s readers to review

his/her chapters, otherwise…they will become negligent.

Once again, no offense. I really hope that I

didn’t make you feel down there. :blush:

Your story is really cool though.

My sister and I quite enjoy reading it.

Well Mitch, you haven’t thought of everything yet. After

all, they are the Incredibles. And I finished this story way before I submited the first chapter. But as long as

you guys keep reviewing, I will keeping updating.

[b]The Ninth Day of

Christmas[/b]

Jack-Jack awoke from his sleep. He opened his eyes and could not believe where he

was.

?Good morning Jack-Jack.? greeted Helen, taking him out into the open.

The family looked

around. They were at Disneyland. The Parrs looked around. The entrance was rather crowded, although the park

wasn’t opened yet. Finally, a voice was heard over the speakers.

?Good morning everyone! This is Mickey

Mouse speaking. I hope you are having a swell holiday! And welcome to the Magic Kingdom of Disneyland!? he

welcomed. Everyone cheered. Mickey continued. ?Me and the rest of the gang hope you have a swell time here! And

don?t forget! At tonight?s Holiday parade, we shall be having special guests joining us! So be sure to check it

out! Thank you! And have a fun and magical day inside the Happiest Place on Earth!

The doors were opened

as the crowded filed inside. Twenty minutes later, the Parrs arrived at [i]Main Street

USA[/i]. Dash turned to his parents.

?Special guests for the parade? I am so excited! I wonder

who they are? Will we get a good seat? Where is the best place to. . .? he asked to rapidly.

?Slow down

Dash! Not so fast please!? pleaded his annoyed sister.

Bob laughed and ruffed through Dash?s hair. ?Don?t

worry son. I promise we shall get the best seats in the entire parade.?

Dash gazed at his father with

innocent eyes. ?You promise??

?I promise.?

First, the Parrs went on Small World. It was a slow

ride, so everyone went, including Jack-Jack. The songs ?It?s a Small World After All? and ?Jingle Bells? played

throughout the entire ride. Jack-Jack laughed and cooed throughout the entire ride. After that, Violet and Dash

went on the tea cups. Helen and Bob watched, smiled, and took pictures of their children on the ride. After that,

Violet and Dash rode the Matterhorn Mountain ride. Helen and Bob took their turns playing with Jack-Jack, while

waiting for their kids to finish with their ride.

?You enjoying your holiday cutie?? asked

Bob.

Helen tickled the baby?s tummy. ?You are enjoying yourself aren?t you honey??

Finally, Violet

and Dash came back. Both decided to go on one more ride together, then would settle down for some lunch. After

waiting in line, the kids finally got on board. They rode the Space Mountain ride. Afterwards, they got off. Dash

felt incredibly dizzy. Violet felt like she was going to throw up. They stumbled over to their

parents.

?Feeling okay?? asked Helen.

?We?ll be alright.? said a woozy Violet.

The Parr

family went over and got some lunch. Bob, Helen, Violet, and Dash each had a slice of pizza. Jack-Jack was given

his own baby food. After that, the Parr family went on some more rides. First, they went on the adventurous

Jungle Cruise. After that, Bob and Helen browsed a store while Violet and Dash went on the Indiana Jones ride.

After that, Helen and Violet watched Jack-Jack while Bob and Dash went on the Big Thunder Mountain Railroad Ride.

Helen and Violet then went on Splash Mountain while Bob and Dash took care of their little infant. The last ride

they all went on was Pirates of the Carribean. Dash decided to stay and watch and play with his baby brother.

Soon after, the entire Parr family all assembled back together and headed back to Main Street.

?Hey

everybody!? said a voice. ?Mickey Mouse here speaking! This is just a reminder that our Holiday Parade is about

to begin in exactly thirty minutes! And don?t forget. We have a very special guests joining us for this parade!

So I hope you will be able to join us!?

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Thirty minutes later, the

parade started. Animated characters from the movies Pinocchio, Peter Pan, Lion King, Beauty and the Beast, Little

Mermaid, Aladdin, Alice in Wonderland, and Mulan were first. The characters waved to the excited and awed

audience. After that, the classic characters of Disney followed. Goofy, Donald, Daisy, Chip, Dale, Pluto, Minnie

and Micky all followed.
?Hey Everybody! Glad that you all can make it! And I am so happy that you are having

a swell holiday!? proclaimed Mickey.

?Oh Mickey.? Minnie says. ?What a wonderful holiday it has been. And

now, it is time to introduce our special guest. Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, please give a warm welcome

to…THE INCREDIBLES!?

On the float behind them, stood the Incredibles. They waved at the crowd happily

and cheerfully. The float was 20 feet long and 12 feet high. The first half of the float was mainly a city with

buildings pointing out in different direction. On a building-like platform stood Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl,

waving to the people. On the other half of the float was mainly a Nomanisan-like jungle platform with trees and

bushes planted in it. Invisigirl and Speedster walked all around and waved to the crowd. Jack-Jack was strapped

securely on a balcony. He waved to the crowd as the parade

ended.

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The Incredibles celebrated nine Christmas Days:

Ninth

day, Disneyland,

Eight day, sleigh riding,

Seventh day, with snow,

Sixth day, ice

skating,

Fifth day, caroling,

Fourth day, they?re giving,

Third day, they?re

shopping,

Second day, they?re wishing,

And the first day, they decorate a tree.