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Postby stickers » Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:25 pm

hey, glp, i just started reading... WOW!
:D :D

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Postby lennonluvr9 » Tue Mar 06, 2007 3:09 pm

Aww,

Sally's still having nightmares! Aww again, Lightning's so cute with her! I'm still wondering how these

nightmares will stop...
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Mar 09, 2007 8:48 pm

I'm in trouble so I'm gonna give u a chapter an

you'll have to wait for the next chapter for like a month :

Chapter 3

Angie drove as fast as she

could , even if it was only across the street . The others had woken up and saw me with Sally practically in my

tires . Right when Red saw Sally , he drove right back to the courthouse . I heard Angie waking up Doc , and then

I heard his tires screeching to the scene , as were hers too .

Mater already knew what to do . He quickly

attached his tow cable to her , and drove quickly to the clinic . This time I followed , I was worried enough

before , and now it was even worse . My tires were shaking from my nerves as Angie drove up to me . She looked

nervous too , even though she would be helping Doc again , at least I thought .

Doc came up to me not too

long after , He had taken a quick look at her , and came outside to talk to me .

" Lightning ,

" he sounded as worried as the rest of us , " I don't think she's gonna make it . "

My

eyes became big , " What do you mean ? She can't die , Doc ! I love her too much ! I'd be a wreck , more

than I am now anyway . "

" I'm trying my best Lightning , " he assured me , " her

chances may not be big , but I'm gonna try . Not just for you , but for all of us .

"

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" Okay , Angie , you've seen me do it before ,

now you're gonna help me . "

I knew the precedure , I had practiced it in my head a lot lately

since that night , which was only two days ago . I went by Doc's side , ready for my orders , but then I just

broke down , something I should have done that morning .

" I can't do it Doc , I just can't !

" I cried , " Sally's just too close ! I mean , " I sniffed , " what if she dies ? It's too

big of a chance , Doc . It would be all my fault . "

" It's wouldn't be your fault Ang-

"

" I've heard that too much this weekend ! " I shouted . I was shaking from the sadness

and anger . " I'm sorry , " I said back , my windshield full of tears , " I just .. i just

haven't been myself lately . "

" It's alright Angie , none of us have ," Doc sighed ,

" We'll come to this obstacle another time .. just get some rest . "

I nodded , and left the

room .

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Lightning noticed me shaking while I exited . I

accidentally got him worried . He looked at me , and I knew what the look meant .

" No , she didn't

die , " I whispered , " but we're still not sure if she'll make it . "

" Then

what's wrong Angie ? " he asked me . Lightning was like that , always looking out for me like a big brother

. I swear , the only way we're not related is by oil . " You don't look so good . "

" I

just got a bit shooken up while I was in there , I was worried I wouldn't be able to do anything , " I

started crying a bit again , Lightning noticed and tried to calm me down , he was a certified expert on that now

.


" Hey , it'll be alright , " he said . I followed him to Flo's and I heard him mumble ,

" I hope . "

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I was at Flo's , still worried

as heck about Sally . She was the love of my life , I didn't want her to die . If she did ... I would be ...

lost without her . My tires were still shaking , but it didn't stop me from pacing .

" Lightning ,

" Chai said to me , " please don't pace , you're making it worse . "

" I'm sorry ,

" I replied back softly , " I'm just really worried . "

" We all are , Lightning ,

" Sheriff almost whispered , " We all are . "

I took a quick glance at Angie , fast asleep

at a station . She refused to go back to her cone , and decided she would rest there while everybody waited . She

didn't look so peaceful , and I knew she was worried as well , after all , she had backed off about helping Doc

, afraid she would be right there when Sally .... you know .

An hour later , Doc pulled up , exhausted

looking . He had woken up Angie by mistake , but she looked like she had never went to sleep at all when he did .

A few seconds ... minutes ... maybe hours , and I couldn't take it anymore .

" Is she okay ? "

I asked , almost afraid to .

Doc nodded , too worn out to speak . We all sighed with relief . A few

minutes later , Doc let me go see her.

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I went in , and wasn't as

shocked as I was before when it happened . Sally was still asleep , but when I entered I had accidentally woke

her up .

She wasn't as shocked as she was the first time either . She sighed ," I hate that

nightmare . I keep getting so worked up about losing you . "

" Sally , I

almost lost you , " I drove up to her , and she nuzzled against me , then she noticed what I

said .

" I almost died ?! " she looked shocked .

" Yeah , and don't ever worry me

like that again ! In fact , don't worry any of us like that again ! Angie had a total breakdown !

"

" She did ?" Sally was once again in shock ," Oh , man , now I really hate that

nightmare ! I didn't mean to .. I didn't want to worry you like that . "

" I know , " I

replied back . " I love you so much . "

" I love you too Stickers , " she had said

before she fell asleep .
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Postby CarFreak » Tue Mar 13, 2007 10:11 pm

oh, man those dumb nightmares :P i

hope sally dosen't die!
But I have a feeling it's just going to get worse and worse. :0

I just read

it anyway.

People please review glp's story. Yeah that's right i'm talking to you person who's

reading this. Well except Glp. But that's differnt, please Read and review!

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Postby lennonluvr9 » Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:10 pm

Whew! that was a tension-filled chapter! Thats

interesting that Sally didnt even realize what had happened to her! I felt so bad for Angie & lightning. I

hope things dont get worse after this.
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:44 pm

Well , this chapter might be even more tension-filled , lennonluvr9 ! It's smaller though .

Here it is :

Chapter 4

A few more days past , and I was as good as new . I hadn't had the dream

since that horrible day , and with the help of Stickers , I became healthier each day . Luckily , Doc said I

could go to the first training race , but only if I stayed close and didn't drive to and from . I slept in

Stickers' trailer on the way , with him by my side . It was a bit cramped , but I soon got over it .

We

arrived at the track , and Doc was setting everything up . Angie was searching for Bolts , I could tell by the

look on her face. Although they haven't been back together for long , she still loved him as much as she always

had , and believe me I should know since I comforted her with gallons of chocolate ice cream days after they

first broke up . They got back together a month later , learning it was Chick's fault in the first place , as

it's always been .

" You alright ? " Stickers asked me as we got out of the trailer .



" Yeah , " I said , " I'm fine . " I don't know why he asked me that , I guess he

was still worried a bit about me ... I don't blame him though .



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I had arrived at the track

twenty minutes earlier than Angie had . I was double checking with the crew that we had eveything for the race

when I heard her .

" Bolts ! "

I quickly turned and I saw her driving up to me . I drove

up to her .

" How've you been ? " I asked her , " Haven't seen you in a while . "



" Yeah , " Angie rested on my side , " I missed you . "

" I missed you

too , " I said as we drove up to her and Lightning's pit crew . As we did , I noticed she looked a bit ,

well , tired . Usually she was more energenic than how she was right then .

" What's wrong ? "

I questioned .

" Nothing , " she said exhaustedly , almost in a whisper , " nothing

anymore . "

" Angie , " I was worried , " what happened in Radiator Springs while I

was gone ? " I know her when there's something wrong , she becomes quiet , and almost unsocialble .



She sighed , " Remember that dream Sally had , the night before you left ? "

" Yeah

."

" Well , " she started , " she kept having the same dream , over and over again .

Finally , she just got worn out and passed out . We all tried to not get her to dream it again , but a few days

later she did ... and she almost died . Don't talk about it in front of Sally though , " she warned

politely , " I think she really wants to forget about it .... I know I do . "

As we got to her

pit crew , I heard greetings of " welcome back , " and " how's it going Bolts ? " and an

Itailian greeting I now at least must've mean 'hello' . I saw Sally and I smiled at her , she smiled back , as

if she said ' thanks for not saying anything out loud about it ' .

All racecars to the

starting line , All racecars to the starting line . The race will begin in fifteen minutes .



" Come on , " teased Angie , " lets go so I can beat you faster . "



" You're on , little girl ! " I teased back . I knew she hated it when I mentioned she was one

( but tough )girl out of 42 tough guys , especially when I added ' little ' to it . I was only a few moths

older than she was , but it still counts . She stuck her toungue out at me . I laughed .



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" Be careful out there , "

Sally warned me before I headed on to the track . She kissed me on the cheeck .

I returned the kiss back

, " I will , don't worry . "

The race was only 125 laps , and the first 90 went by smoothly . I

was blocking Chick from coming up in front of me , and he , of course , started to get angry . Bolts and Angie

were behind us , trying to take the third spot .

" I've got you this time , " I heard Bolts

behind me .

" Oh , no you don't ! " I heard Angie's reply , and then I heard Doc

.

" Nice going out there you two , " I heard through the radio . " It's more than halfway

done , and I have a feeling this is how the race's gonna end . "

" What do you mean , I can do

so much better than this ! " Angie replied through the radio .

" Just keep going steady and -

" , he quickly stopped and changed the subject , " Lightning ! Watch out ! "

Chick smashed

into me from behind , and sent me flying into a wall hood first . I tried to stop , but the traction just wasn't

working so good on the track .



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" Lightning , " Doc

asked , " can you hear me ? "

I heard Stickers groan through the radio , and it didn't sound

good . I watched as Doc ordered the ambulance that had rushed to the scene to take him to the same hospital that

Angie was in before .

Speaking of her , she came into the pits as soon as Lightning crashed and he

didn't move at all . Bolts came out too . I guess they both knew they were going to leave the race incomplete ,

but I busy calming myself down as we all drove to the hospital which was only 25 miles away . I didn't want to

pass out again , not after what I woke up to the last time ; Lightning worried to death , Angie crying over her

not being able to help Doc . It was bad enough we were all worried again .

We arrived , and scaringly ,

it looked just like my dream . I know , nobody can tell the future , and at the moment I was really hoping that

was true .

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Postby Mitch » Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:24 pm

I finally got to reading your newest story,

gottalovepixar, and I must say that it's really good! You've got some talent

there. :D

Man -- poor Lightning. I almost cried the first time Sally had the evil dream. I wouldn't mind

it so much if Sally kicked the bucket -- but Lightning? Heh...I feel rather embarassed saying this, but if

McQueen died I would feel as if I lost someone I rather liked; and the same goes for Doc, as well. Thank goodness

Doc is holding up strong in this round.

But yeah -- great story! Keep up the good work! :D
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:36 pm

I've read a few mature-ish ( as in not for the 10 year

old ) fanfictions about Sally dyng and then Lightning wants to go kill himself . Not cool .. and there was

another where he was just depressed and stayed in his cone for , like , ever .

You wouldn't care if she

died ?! Wow , you must not like her that much Mitch !

Oh , and a majority of the fanfics I've read with

cars dying , it's usually Doc , which totally sucks in my case , but I guess they don't think of him as

important .
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Postby CarFreak » Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:42 am

oh, no the nightmare! i think it's coming true! Because you know sometimes when you get dreams they sometimes

come true.

Don't die please! i'm gonna start crying :cry:

wait if Lightning dies then what's

gonna happen to Sally?
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Postby Mitch » Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:16 am

gottalovepixar - Oh no -- it's not that. I think Sally is a wonderful character,

and I would hate it if she died as well! I was almost sweating in my seat when the poor gal kept having nightmare

after nightmare....

I'm just more into Lightning, that's all. I like him a little more as a character,

if you get my meaning. ;)

I can't wait for the next chapter, but I don't want anything bad to happen

either! :(
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:56 pm

I usually tell u guys half-way through a fanfiction of

what the next one is going to be about . But I was too busy writing it that I forgot to tell u what it was about

!

As most of you know from small maessages going back and forth on my profile at deviantart.com , the

fanfic is co-writed by Raine-Hudson , also known as The Raven's Revenge . This fanfiction does include her

character Raine , and is written just how my current one is , except it's only in Angie and Raine's view . Also

, I have never wrote about Doc this much in my entire life !

Another thing , that fanfiction will give a

hint on what's going to happen after that !

So remember , only one more

chapter in this fanfic and then it's this one . :D
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Postby Mitch » Mon Mar 19, 2007 12:30 am

Cool!

I can't wait to see...er...read it. :D
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Postby gottalovepixar » Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:31 pm

A little earlier than usual , but

here it is ! The final chapter of Sally's

Nightmare
.

Chapter 5

It's just a

dream .

I'll be waking up any minute now .

Lightning will be fine .. although I might not be .



I opened my eyes , and I was still in that horrid place . The EMT's soon came in with

Lightning , as Doc followed them , asking questions and all that other stuff . I noticed how he looked , you know

, Lightning . He looked horrible , and I couldn't look any more . I turned away , my windshield wipers going as

fast as possible , and followed Flo , who was trying to comfort me .

" It's alright , " she

whispered , " it's okay , he's a strong car , he's gonna make it . " I dared to disagree

.

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It seemed as if we waited forever in that

emergency room waiting for Doc to come out with the news . I suddenly noticed how Lightning , Doc , and my

parents must've felt when I was in here getting fixed ; upset , worried , anything but calm . Ramone and Bolts

tried to take me home but I refused .

" No , " I replied stubbornly , " I'm staying here

. "

It was an emotional roller coaster ride , but knew it would be better if I stayed . It was better

than getting a phone call . I tried to shake that thought out of my hood , and moved closer to Bolts . He knew

how close Lightning and I were , and he tried to comfort me . It was working a bit , but not that much . I let

some tears go , but my eyes were a bit dry because of what happen with Sally a few days ago .

Doc soon

entered , and we looked at him as if we were lost in the world . He looked tired again , I knew this work

must've been exhausting him a bit . He may be The Fabulous Hudson Hornet , but he does have a few more miles on

him than most of us .

" He's gonna be okay , " he panted .

" Oh , thank Crysler ,

" Sally said relieved .

" I'm only supposed to let family see him , but Sally and Angie are

close to him the most , so they can go in , " Sally was happy about that , but Doc knew the nurses mught say

somethin , " If they have a problem with it , " he continued , " they can kiss my axel .

"

We followed Doc while some of the nurses stared at us . I mean , a hudson hornet with stickers on ,

a porche with tears down her face , and a plymouth superbird that looked exactly like The King , who wouldn't

stare ?

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I entered Lightning's room .

He looked bad , but he was still alive , and in these cases that's what counts . Angie and I looked at each

other , and I could tell she thought the same . Lightning soon woke up , and noticed he was parked in a white

room with wires everywhere , luckily none of them were on him , or I would have had to leave the room .



" Wow , " he said weakly , " I guess that was a bad crash . "

" A bad

crash ?! , " Angie almost shouted , but didn't because she knew Doc would've kicked her out , "

That's an understement ! It's so bad Doc will only let us two in here . "

" Lightning ,

" I said using his actual name . He knows I only use it unless I'm serious , scared , tired , or angry at

him . This time it was bit bit of them all , " don't ever scare us like that again , we thought you were

gonna die ! "

" Yeah , I'm gonna go now before this gets any worse , " Angie sounded a

little wierd , " see ya Lightning , get better . " She drove off quickly .

" Oh , look

who's talking , " Lightning replied back to me , ignoring Angie , " you nearly gave me an engine

attack all week ."

I sighed as I moved close to him , " I guess we've both scared each other

lately . "

" Yeah , " he answered softly , " I guess so . " I yawned ,as I

looked at the clock , 12:39 AM . I had been there for more than six hours .Lightning had fallen asleep .I closed

my eyes as I fell asleep on the side of him , happy all this mess was almost over .

THE END ( no

seriously , the end . like there's no more !)


And remember , the next fanfiction was co-written by

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Postby CarFreak » Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:26 am

(breathes i relief) i thought he was going to die good

thing they both didn't.

so is the nightmares finally finshed? And what'd you mean 'happy all this mess

was almost over?'

Ha! Ha! :lol: LOL kiss my rear axle! oh, Doc.



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Postby gottalovepixar » Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:13 am

no idea what that meant , i wrote this story , like , a

month ago .

Well , I'll be makin' more stories , but that's the end for that fanfiction .
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