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Postby CarFreak » Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:46 pm

oh, okay, but i found

your screamn' Banshee story on Fanfiction.net
Most people are probably confussed about the OCs (other

charatcers)
Are interested in putting your original stroy there?
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Postby gottalovepixar » Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:52 pm

Then they should go to my profile that sayd that the original fanfiction is posted

here . I will be posting it , just once I revise my other chapters . Or I might just post the first chapter on at

the moment ...
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:35 pm

UPDATE : Chapter Two has been revised .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Mar 25, 2007 2:26 pm

UPDATE: Chapters 3 and 4 have been updated .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:42 pm

Okay , here's the link to my latest fanfiction

:


Unadulterated Loathing

I decided

it's best if I just post the links to where my fanfictions are , as it looks a bit more .. neater . ;)



OMG , Mitch gave me OCD ! lol , jk Mitch ! ;)
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:41 pm

That was really good! So much

suspense! I gotta admit I was getting a little misty. I was all "nooo! dont die on me Doc!" But anyway,

that was a really good one :)

now, raine hudson, raine hudson, where have I seen that name before? I

must have spotted it half past sometime ago when I was searching Cars on DA....
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Postby gottalovepixar » Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:37 pm

lennonluvr9 : here's her profile

http://raine-hudson.deviantart.com/

Geesh , I've been hangin' out there too much , I put

yamihoole before I changed it to lennonluvr9 . lol
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Apr 08, 2007 12:49 pm

WARNING : The first two dialouge quotes in my fanfiction

are rated T for mentionings of female puberty and ... how can I put this ... talking about certain things but in

dog term .

So here it is ! The first chapter of my latest fanfiction , since you guys are ahead of the

people on fanfiction.net and will be for a long time ! :wink:


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Stars were shining bright while Angie Weathers tried to sleep . As soon as one of her troubles ended , a new one

always began . Doc wasn't even home for an hour when Angie had to give Sally and Lightning the news of their

first child being on it's way . Angie couldn't help but listen to the couple's new ( and first ) argument

.

" One time , I mated with you <u>one time</u> , and now you're pregnant ?! It

would've been nice of you to tell me you were in heat ! "

" I'm sorry , but I thought you

would've noticed by the <u>oil I was dripping</u> !" Silence lingered after Sally's remark ,

worrying Angie even more . It was awful how something like this could put such a passionate relationship in

danger . "So . . . are we going to keep it ? I could still get an abortion if we want ." Sally had

finally asked the question Angie was waiting for .

" I don't know , Sally . . . . I don't

know , " came the correctly guessed response from Lightning . Angie wanted to listen more , but she soon

drifted of to sleep , all of her troubles leaving her for a short while .



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The next day's practice

was pretty silent . Doc's daughter Raine , who had just decided to move back in with her father , had ordered

Doc to take it easy for a couple of days , which meant a bit more practicing without their beloved crew chief .

So it was just the two at Willy's Butte .

"I know you heard us last night , so don't try to

deny it ," Lightning had decided to say something first . They were taking a break , something Doc would

probably never let them do , since they only practiced for two hours every day . Angie only nodded in reply .

"How much did you hear ?"

" Not much ," she replied softly . "Did you . . .

. did you make a decision yet ?"

" Yep , " Lightning said . A few seconds passed ,

" Oh you wanted to know ?" he teased .

Angie laughed ," Duh ! Spit it out Mcqueen

!"

" Well , it looks like there's gonna be a Baby Mcqueen in the future , "

Lightning smiled proudly as Angie squeeled with joy . Lightning winced at the sound , " Please don't do

that again .. it's annoying . "

" So's your 'Ka-chow' , but you don't see me complaining

! "

" True ... hey , you wanna race ? " Lightning asked , " I'll let you

choose how many laps ."

" One lap , " Angie decided , " so then you only have to

fall into the cacti once ! "

"Fine then , " he said as he rushed to the turn , as

she soon went ahead of him . Angie got to the dreaded turn three , but she turned to late . Angie looked like a

dog , pawing the edge . She soon fell with a thud into a pile of the cacti that was originally reserved for her

racing partner .

Lightning rushed to the scene , " You want me to go get Mater ?

"

" That would be nice considering I can't move !

"

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Sally gazed outside of the Wheel

Well's office , daydreaming while waiting for customers to come around the bend of the road , laughing about how

fun the drive was . Ahe rememered when she first brought Lightning to Wheel Well , but that was long ago . A

least it seemed so , for it seemed so long ago before everthing changed . Before there were many customers ,

before they were together , before they had met Angie . . . before they were expecting a child .



Sally noticed all of the 'they's in that previous thought . Over a year ago she would've laughed if somebody

told her she was going to fall deeply in love with a famous racecar that was once the biggest obnoxious jerk ever

.

The phone rang , oulling Sally away from her precious thoughts as she answered .



"Sally Carrera speaking , ower of the cozy cone motel and co-owner of the Wheel Well , how can I help you

?"

"Sally ? It's me .."

"Dad ?" she was shocked . Sally hadn't talked

to her fater in years . The past anger soon bubbled up again , "How did you find me ?"

"

You're all over the news with that famous racecar Sally , or do you no longer own a television ?" if she

didn't know her father , she wouldve took that as an insult , " I just wanted to tell you I'll be visiting

you soon . I'll probably be there by tomorrow , maybe early morning if I'm lucky ."

"That's

great , " Sally lied , " I'll see you then . "

She quickly hung up the phone .



"When did I change back to the fast lane

?"
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Postby Mitch » Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:29 pm

Not bad for the first chapter. They should name the kid "Ka-chow" -- heheh. Keep up the good work!

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Postby gottalovepixar » Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:37 pm

Mitch : Sally would probably smack Lightning in the face even if he thought of naming the kid that !

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Postby lennonluvr9 » Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:17 pm

Yay for Lightning & Sally!

They'll hear the pitter-patter of little tires soon. :P I'm glad they're keeping it. I wonder who Sally's

padre could be? Seems like she's starting to get a little anxious about life moving more quickly for her

again
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Postby gottalovepixar » Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:31 am

You'll see next Sunday . ;)

And "Baby

Mcqueen" ( lets just call him/her that for now , haven't picked yet ... or have I ? ) won't be coming for

a while . This will be my first actual long fanfiction since Cars 2 itself ( wow that seems so long ago ) . It's

actually two fanfiction ideas in one . You know what they say , two birds with one stone . ;)

At the

moment there will be about four more fanfictions after this before Baby Mcqueen . I know , you want the baby to

come , but it takes a while you know ! Don't worry though , two of those mentioned fanfictions are one-shots ,

and the rest are going to be smaller than the one I'm working on now ( i think ) .
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Postby gottalovepixar » Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:36 pm

Two things ...

1. )I am working on chapter two ..

it's just taking a while . It should be on sometime this week .

2.) I forgot my password and I'm not

aloud to go on the email adress that this name is under , so if somebody starts putting chapters under the name

of AngieWeathers ( or something with Angie's name ) , don't worry ! It's me . ;)

Let's just hope my

saved name will kepp me on for about two (or more) weeks , when I can go on that email adress .
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Postby Mitch » Wed Apr 18, 2007 9:03 pm

Take your time,

gottalovepixar. I'll be waitin' for it. ;)
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Postby Hatcat » Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:57 pm

That's a cool story. I'm going to read it over and over. Nice job gottalovepixar! ;-)
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