Here it is :
The first page of Crossover 2.
Hope you like it ![]()
Dude, the first page was so incredible. The first couple of frames sent shivers down my spine. [spoil]I thought that that guy (I forgot his name) came back, but I was relieved to see the last frame was just a dream.[/spoil]
Or was it? Could it be a forshadowing of events to come? I don’t know, but you have really started Crossover 2 really wonderfull.
A good start already, Archibald! Boy, you really know how to work a good cliffhanger, don’t you? Even if it was [spoil]a dream, though already I’m beginning to question what’s really happening…[/spoil] Looking forward to the next page!
Glad you both liked the first page ; and it’s also good that you’ve already started questioning.
More questions should rise with this second page.
Oh my goodness! So it wasn’t a dream? Oh man, two pages in and you already uped the intensity on this story. Nicely done. I can’t wait for page number 3.
Very exciting! And I’m loving the angles you’ve used in each picture, as it gives the page a real sense of momentum. Good work!
Very nice page. My favorite frame is the wide shot of Mike, Sully, Roz, and The Incredibles sitting around the table. That must’ve taken a long time to do. Really nice work. I can’t wait to see what [spoil]Woody and Buzz can do for them.[/spoil]
Just went through your whole Crossover comic, and I love-love-loved every bit of it! It’s so awesomely done!
You have no idea. A nightmare. Urgh.
bright dot-dasher : thanks very much. I hope you’ve started reading Crossover 2 and that you’re also enjoying it ![]()
Anyway, page 4 of Crossover 2. Here it is. The story slowly moves forward (but I wish it was page 7 already. I can’t wait to do this one and see how you react
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Are you kidding me? [spoil]Randall on their team?[/spoil] This gets more and more crazy by the second. I like the plan though. Keep it up.
Ooh, very intriguing! Great update, Archibald.
I love the look on Roz’s face in the second picture. Very suspensful, Archibald!
Dang it, I can’t see ANY of the pages, only a link that doesn’t work at the top. How come everyone else can see the comics, and I can’t? I’ve tried copy-pasting that link, but it still doesn’t work. Nothing else shows up when I click the link except that URL at the top.
Nevermind…I opened the pics up just fine on my old, slow computer; for some odd reason, the new one won’t open PNG files. If anyone knows how to change this, let me know!
Anyway, great comic, although I have to admit the whole deal with Randall still as the villain rubbed me the wrong way, and seeing him in chains and shackles like a slave(or a DOG-he’s not just an “animal”, nor is he a lizard, or even a true reptile) is pretty disturbing, too. Sulley and Mike ALSO broke the law; Randall was NOT legally exiled from the Monster World at all, and in covering for them, Roz would also have broken some serious laws, CDA or no CDA(no one knows how to play the corruption game better than a government agency, after all). In any case, I hope that Randall gets to redeem himself, and it’s gonna take a lot for Mike and Sulley to redeem THEMSELVES in MY eyes. I’ll be looking forward to updates, and for some reason, the black-and-white really works here.
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Oooh, very cool 2nd crossover! The questions are arising in my head…can they really trust Randall? What happened to Adam? What will Adam plan to do if he succeeds? How are they going to do it?
Nice work! You really got the suspense up.
I love the first half of the 5th page Archibald. I wonder if Randall could really be trusted. I got a bad feeling about this. Oh well. I can’t wait for the next half.
This is some good stuff Archibald! I like how you put your own style onto each of the characters! Id like to see you add some digital ink to these drawings.
Gasp! Very exciting! Great tension there, Archibald, and you’re really using the form of the comic to make the timing just right. Looking forward to the next page!