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“We interrupt our Redskins V.S. Chargers Game to bring you this superhero dispatch.”
“Great they were just about to score”. The voice of Mr. Incredible raised in anger startled the Parr family as they relaxed on a lazy Sunday evening.
“Bob don’t get angry”. Mrs. Parr (Elastigirl) cut in. “Go ahead Rich” She said returning to the reporter.
The TV man continued. We have an important message towards the Parr family. A robbery has been committed in sector 127 of the Governmental Secrecy Facility. The suspect is unknown and we have no information except that he took one item which we haven’t identified yet. We request you come at once.
Helen replied for her husband. “Okay we’ll come over…Bob?” She turned towards Bob with a questionable look. “Are you coming?”
“Yah…I’ll come.”
“We will be over in 5 minutes.”
“Very well…”The Report finished as the football game flashed back across the screen.
The Parr family quickly got suited up and hopped and raced towards the G.S.Facility.
The Family was soon next to an ominously large building that could have easily resembled a prison. Next to the main gate was a man waiting for them. “Good you got the message.” He said. “Please follow me.”
Dash and Violet stayed behind as their parents walked inside with the man. Suddenly there was a crash and part of the wall next to the corner fell away!
A figure swiftly disappeared into the night.
“MOM!!!”
Elastigirl and Mr. Incredible appeared where the wall had once been.
“Who was that?!?”
Mr. Incredible calmed her. “It was Bomb Voyage. He was here stealing some bomb they had.”
“Did he get it?”
"No he couldn’t get the crate out of the door. Dash!! Go get him see where he leads you too.”
Dash puffed himself up with pride and dashed away into the dark. In a couple of minutes he returned.
“He went into a nearby hotel. If we hurry we can nab him.”
Mr. Incredible and Dash were soon running along the street of downtown Los Angeles towards the hotel. Once they arrived they asked for his room number and hurried upstairs. They burst into his room.
Mr. Incredible!!! Cried Bomb Voyage. In a flash Dash whirled around him putting hard rope around his arms and waist. Soon Bomb Voyage was tied up and ready to be sent to jail.
Have a nice “Voyage” Mr. Incredible said as the police took him away.
Voyage struggled and cried out as a last remark. “You can try to stop me but you won’t stop my cousin. He will get the better of you.” And with that the police dragged an upset Bomb Voyage away to jail.
Dash was the first to speak as the pair headed home. “He has a cousin??”
“Yah all supers do. Some have powers and others have no power because the chance is much slimmer of getting them. You have a cousin….his name is Christopher if I remember correctly. But he disappeared four years ago when your were 8. He would be 13 by now so almost your age.
Have you ever seen him?
“No, I never got to. His mom lives in New Mexico and when he was lost they were all vacationing in Los Angeles. They searched for days but never found him. So they simple took the idea that he was trying to get home on his own.”
“But he wasn’t home was he?”
“No he wasn’t. They do say that shortly afterwards a new superhero appeared in Los Angeles but we never heard anything else of it. Those reports soon stopped as quickly as they appeared.”