Droid Revenge

Try to find these stats Al-Bob.

Words/chapter and Reviews/chapter

You must be the most active fanfic writer on PP! :open_mouth: I’m impressed. I’ve been following your Toy Story 3 and Presto crossovers, but it seems like you got a lotta projects in the pipeline too! I’ve gotta start reading your Incredibles sequel and write you a review when I have the time.
Sorry if this has been mentioned before, but do you have a Fanfiction account? :slight_smile:

Words/Chapter
850 Words/Chapter

Reviews/Chapter
about 2 per chapter written

going over the story it dawned on me how much the story is exciting and audrenaline-rushing. It really was good wasn’t it??

Well, I thought that this story is kinda short. 13 chapters is pretty short to me. And I think there is too much emphasis on the new characters than the Incredibles. but this is all from my standpoint.

actually i recounted and i have 14 plus an epilogue…but yes i did want to write in more characters to create a new “Incredibles”. My opinion was that using the old characters would make the storyline harder to use…[shrugs]

Well, what you could’ve done is extend a few chapters, give it time to let the new chatacters develop first.

that is true…that is why chapter…7?? was so rushed. I had to tell their story but not pause to long or else i would ruin the scene.

To be honest if i could do it over i probably would but i wouldn’t change any of the storyline. I would just double the chapters.

I would aim for at least 20-30 chapters. That is my average story length.

…and that seems very reasonable. I wish i had gotten that before i started “Droid Revenge” but anyway…

Well, at least you have got knowledge now. So remember what we tell you the next time you plan to post a story on PP.

of cource…at least TS3 should have more then 14 chapters…i’ve already got two but i have lots left in the bag that i’m not going to disclose.

I think i’m going to get all of my stories and put their links in my sig instead of that avatar one…that way its silent advertising.

That is a good idea.

There that should do it…now all i need to do is write some more.

I’m sorry i didn’t notice your post until know…

Thanks for the compliment they keep me writing. yes i think i am taking on to much. I have TS3, The Interactive Story (game), Presto Chango, and now i just started the Prologue for Droid Revenge…its called The Troubled Teens.

This one is about Heather and Chris as they get to know each other and what they go through before Droid Revenge.

For your second post…no. I haven’t created one yet. I still don’t know which fanfiction place to join or look at joining. I’m not that advanced with forums…Do you know of one that you could recommend??

That’s amazing Al-bob… how do you keep up with that many fanfics? :smiley:

As for a fanfic account, the one I’m using is the most popular one, Fanfiction.net. Have a look at my profile, and once you get one, lemme know and we can sub.

By the way, have you had a look at my 24/Cars crossover fanfiction? I’ve been advertising it in my sig, I don’t know how much of a fan you are of both the Pixar movie and the Fox TV show, but if you are, you might find it to your liking… I’d love to hear your opinion on the piece. I’ve posted two ‘episodes’ up so far… so have a read, and post your comment in the thread or even as a review once you get your own account. :slight_smile:

1-I don’t…i didn’t realize i could actually take on 4 diff stories at once. But then again my passion is writing so it should be easy for me.

I just got on using the username The Unleasher…Al-Bob was already taken…What do you mean by “we can sub”??

I’ll be looking into your story and see if i can be allowed to read it since it has a T rating…

Thanks Man…

Well, if you watched movies like Live Free or Die Hard, Casino Royale or the Bourne series, I’d say it’s about that level of action-violence and language. Nothing too explicit, and I’ll try not to kill or make the characters swear if I don’t have to. If you don’t mind me asking, how old are you?
:question:

And I must say that you…uh…got inspired by my idea of in-signature advertising? :wink:

Fine sure…if you had been here one week ago you could have seen my birthday…plus my profile gives my age away too. I’m 16…just turned 16.

For anyone who wants to find me now that i’m on fanfiction.com i’m The Unleasher…cuz Al-Bob was taken…

You know what…i think you got inspired by my sig advertising…my first sig was my stories (plus my God Bless You)…unless you started the whole trend that i just created for myself.

Thanks for the chat…i’ll try to get my stories up on that fanfiction site soon.

Look out for them…

Yeah, I think I wished you Happy Birthday on that thread…but either I didn’t know or I must have forgotten if you’ve mentioned your age there… If you’re 16, my fanfic is totally fine for your age! It’s kind of a PG rating, though I’d push it to PG-13 just to be on the safe side. :wink:

You started that thread first? Jeez, you beat me to it… was just ribbin’ on ya, I didn’t realise you had the idea first… but yeah, the idea was all my own too. Guess great minds think alike, huh?

Can’t wait to see your stories and their countinuations… :smiley:

just uploaded my droid revenge on fanfiction.net

i can’t use Al-Bob so my new username is The Unleasher…

Please make sure to post a review on it if you can (even annonomous people can review it)

More updates soon…

If you liked Droid Revenge…go see Troubled Teens.

Flex and Heather star in their own prelogue to Droid Revenge. Follow along as they find their powers and their enemies in the city of Los Angelos. Will they band together or will their friendship fall as their “friends” pull them apart?

Editted by TSS, (combined both posts)