Thats a really great story Al-Bob. I loved the epologe. I think it is one of the best endings I have ever read. Pretty nice that Vi and Tony decided to tie the knot. Nice work.
Overall, it was an exciting story. Kinda confusing at first, but it was intresting. In my opinion, I think this story could’ve been expanded a bit more. I think 13 chapters might be too short for an adrenaline pumping chapter like this. BUt still, a great story.
yah now that i look over it 13 chapters seems to short but when you are having school, and lots of other stuff it was really good for me at least.
I’m working on a review sheet that you guys can write number 0-5 on ranking it-
0-5
Villian-
Heroes-
Chapters (how many)-
Storyline-
Excitement-
What i would do to change it…
Overall Review- Stars
Wow ! You did a great job AI-bob ! Really looking forward to reading other storys like this one ! 
Great ending, Al-Bob!!!
I love how you stayed true to all the chracters and never made the story seem like some dumb Michael Bay story. So overall, I’ll give it a 4. Great work!
(But please don’t do a WALL-E 2. For me. I just loved the ending so much I would be in agony if it continued! I think that’d ruin the story! Please don’t do it!)
Well for now i’m going to finish my Ansonia book 1.
Going to get that thing started…looking at Mosters Inc 2 next otherwise maybe TS3.
Wow, very nicely written! Great creativity, storyline, and you sure knew how to keep the readers in suspense, Al-Bob.
ya…the only problem is that i think i dropped the reader at the end.
WEEEEEEE…ahhhhhhh…thud!!! That’s it!
which is why i wrote the epilogue.
You wanted a review sheet conclusion Al-Bob? You got one!
Villian- I think the return of the omnidroid was a little cliche, but his diabolical plan was something I didn’t expect. (3.5/5)
Heroes- Obviously, I love the Incredibles, so that gives it the automatic 5. But your new characters are a delight to see as well. (5/5)
Chapters (how many)- 13 chapters. Kinda short for me. But the length of the chapters is just right. (4/5)
Storyline- THe story is really nice. There were some parts that confused me and some that went too fast. (3/5)
Excitement- There were quite a few exciting chapters that kept me on the edge of my seat. (4.5/5)
What i would do to change it…
My reccomendation is to do a little research, and edit your chapters.
Overall Review- 4/5 Stars
Nice new avi, Al-Bob!
Thanks TS2…i’ve been trying to get a new one for a couple weeks now…liked this one bacuase it resembles my family of 9 sometimes.
HEHEHE!!!
Family of 9? How did you find the time to get Droid Revenge done? 
well i’m the second oldest…so i don’t have all the responsibilities in the house.
Hey TSS…would it be okay if i publish this in another thread (seperate) so that readers don’t have to scroll through the replies and comments?
Just start another with the real title and just the story?
No, I think it is just fine. If they want to start with the story, all they have to do is just start at post number one. The next long post they see will indicate the next chapter.
okay…
New update…I’m going to start Monsters Inc. 2 in the next 2 weeks! Try to look out for it when i post again. Thanks for all of your support through my first story.
I can’t wait to read them dude!
Ooh, they sound cool. I’ll definitely keep an eye out for that.
Oh, and you’re welcome, Al-Bob. 
okay update on stories…
Monsters Inc. 2 hit a wall and is being backtracked.
Interactive Story-In progress of being started.
The Terrific Three-Possible start up soon.
Toy Story 3-Possible start sometime in the next month…
But monsters is canceled for now…
Okay i just wanted to wrap this story up with facts about it that i found very interesting…
Pages (if you printed it)- Pages 33
Word Count-11950 Words (rounded down)
That means the average of 365 Words per page…wow.
I’d also like to update my upcoming stories…
Presto Chango-Soue has decided that he wants to get involved so that next chapter is under construction
Toy Story 3-Next chapter ready to be written
The Terrific Three-Almost set up and ready to be written…
Phew i’ve got lots to do
i’m hoping to get Presto Chango done by next summer…
TS 3-Done by the time TS3 really comes out
and the Terrific Three done by next summer or fall.
Thanks for you time and your patience, i hope to get more stories out soon.
Stay in touch for moer updates and chapters…