Hey, guys. Thought I would post a thread where I could write some songs to share with you guys.
This one is called Those Lonesome Golden Years. Hope you would enjoy.
[i]Who had snatch the stars away from my blue sky?
In a flash, gray clouds flooded my brows
Joy and sorrow had used to judge themselves
Forgetting that I deserve to be cared
Pair of hands
Shred of dream
Kept on diving down along the road
So painful I forgot how to scream
Unending loneliness
Drowning my sorrow
My far-stretched world
A desert below zero
I do in fact want
The warmth of a hug
To dissolve these enduring foam
Unending waiting
Such a letdown to all
The sky ripped apart
By the serrated lonesomeness
Who could take away
This beautiful sorrow
And make me believe
The reason to be loved?[/i]
Please post your thoughts.
Oh, and because this forum is kind of like a āWritingā forum, I had initially thought that this would be the suitable place to post this thread. I apologize if itās not so, and I would appreciate it if you would move it to the accurate area of your judgment.