FONY's Writings

Re-posted this as the other one was from my crud account. =P

Well, here’s my user profile on FF.NET- Fairly Odd New Yorker

And I’m happy to announce a very short one-shot of Ratatouille- Sleepless
Spoilers for those who haven’t seen it yet.

Lemme know if you like it. I enjoyed writing it, and I’m thinking of writing more. :smiley:

Sorry, FONY, I’m not gonna read it for now because of the spoilers! :frowning:

Damn, when am I gonna see the movie?! :angry:
But I’m sure you did a great job! :wink:

It’s and excellent fanfiction FONY! I’m not usually into the lovey dovey, but if it’s Linguini and Colette then I can make and exception. Please, keep it up! :smiley:

I’m gonna be truthful here…

It was beautifully written, FONY. You can feel Colette’s fluctuating emotions throughout the piece, and the overall depiction of the scene flows as smoothly as silk on a light patch of water.

Of course, being a writer, I probably would have added a barrel full of detail to accompany various moments within the story. However, that is simply my own, unique writing style. Everyone has their own, personal way of conducting a script, and I have read many books that seem to mirror your writing pattern…

For a first start, it is quite lovely. Please keep it up, FONY! :wink:

FONY-

I’ve loved reading your past fics, so once I’ve seen the film, I’ll read your Ratatouille one. :smiley:

Hehe, thanks guys :slight_smile: And for those who haven’t read it

yet … the movie’s more worth your wait, as I was mad that it was way too short for my liking … to be

completely honest. :slight_smile:

Oh, I used

to do that loads of times: but I’ve found I describe too much, and sometimes it’s better to only describe

what’s necessary. This little one-shot was an exercise for my novel. I wanna get the point across with as much

detail as necessary. :smiley: It’s my strange style. :stuck_out_tongue: But it works for me.

Ahh…I see.

Cool. Well, whatever works for you is perfect! :smiley:

Do you think I should describe more in my stuff? =/ It’s confusing and frustrating for me,

since no one reads my original stuff for privacy reasons, and fanfictions are the only way to get proper

feedback. I’m freaking out because I’m afraid my writing style’s too mediocre and my novel’s going to be a

piece of garbage because of it :frowning:

So … any constructive criticism I can take. :wink: It’d be extremely

helpful.

Will you continue this fanfic?It’s very sweet,and it

would be awesome if you continued it. :smiley:

I’m not really that much into reading fanfiction (maybe

that’s because I have never really read it a lot), but after I see Ratatouille, I’ll read your story. The

Linguini and Colette lovey-dovey theme sounds right up my alley!

What can I say? I’m a romantic at

heart, especially when it comes to Linguini. <img src=“{SMILIES_PATH}/love2.gif” alt=“:loves:” title="In

Love" /> Heh.

rachelcakes: Yay! ^^ Yeah, I don’t read much fanfiction

myself- used to a long time ago but now I usually just write fanfictions.

^^

AnnoyingPerson: I may. I was thinking of another one-shot to do, one that

I really don’t think would fit in as a second chapter to this one. But I’m working on it ^^ This time I’m

trying to put it more in the perspective of Linguini.

FONY - Everyone has their own, unique writing style. As I

mentioned previously, some authors incorporate within their story an adequate amount of detail; others only

include descriptive “bridges” and connotations when necessary; and still a fair few will add hardly any

detail at all. It all depends on your style of writing…

I would add more detail, but that’s just me!

I write my novels with a vast amount of detail, but your methodology may be different. It varies with each

person.

Sooo…do what you think is best!

:wink:

I want to read it, but since it’s got spoilers in it, I think I’ll wait till I see the

movie. I can do that right? Sure, I got will power! It’s only what, 3 more days?

Thanks for the advice, Mitch. :smiley: I think I’m getting the hang of my own style … but only time will tell :wink:

Here’s another Ratatouille one-shot I made- Second Thoughts
Summary: Linguini contemplates about his relationship with
Colette and on whether or not he should take it one step further.

I’m happy with it despite the mush. :smiley:

Hey FONY, it was a really good one shot! I loved reading it.

Just an off note here. I think they are going to make a ratatouille category in Fanfiction.net in the movie section really soon. They always do that with Pixar Movies.

TSS: Glad you liked it ^^ Uhh, you’re a pretty quick reader … O_o
And yeah I know- I’ve been looking out for that category- they should make it soon, but for now I’m keeping it under Disney.

Will you plan on moving it to the Ratatouille category when it comes up? Or will you keep it in the Disney section?

FONY- You are such an amazing writer! I love the fact that you don’t drag the story out with long dull descriptions and just get straight to the point. You’ve managed to capture Linguini’s character very well. Slipping while proposing was a nice touch. Please continue writing, you are very good at it. :smiley: :wink:

TSS: That’s a really obvious question. Of course I’m going to move it to Ratatouille. :unamused:

sharpie: Thanks :slight_smile: I’m glad you liked it. I’m going to continue writing, but I’m only planning on making one-shots. They seem to work best for me, especially since they help me to exercise my writing ‘skills’ to warm up for my novel. :smiley:

I loved that fanfic,it was VERY sweet,and the characters were done perfectly. I loved that little nugget at the end about Remy never understanding humans.

I noticed this,though-

There are many ways you can countinue this fic without it going mushy. I can name like 5,with about 3 of them being inspired by all the questions the kids at the theater were asking about everybody’s favorite couple. If you don’t want to countinue,that’s fine with me. You are an awesome author though,and I always love reading your fics (even if they’re not Ratatouille :p).

(P.S.-Please don’t think I’m an idiot!I just stink at writing stuff like that!)