It’s and excellent fanfiction FONY! I’m not usually into the lovey dovey, but if it’s Linguini and Colette then I can make and exception. Please, keep it up!
It was beautifully written, FONY. You can feel Colette’s fluctuating emotions throughout the piece, and the overall depiction of the scene flows as smoothly as silk on a light patch of water.
Of course, being a writer, I probably would have added a barrel full of detail to accompany various moments within the story. However, that is simply my own, unique writing style. Everyone has their own, personal way of conducting a script, and I have read many books that seem to mirror your writing pattern…
For a first start, it is quite lovely. Please keep it up, FONY!
Thanks for the advice, Mitch. I think I’m getting the hang of my own style … but only time will tell
Here’s another Ratatouille one-shot I made- Second Thoughts
Summary: Linguini contemplates about his relationship with
Colette and on whether or not he should take it one step further.
Hey FONY, it was a really good one shot! I loved reading it.
Just an off note here. I think they are going to make a ratatouille category in Fanfiction.net in the movie section really soon. They always do that with Pixar Movies.
TSS: Glad you liked it ^^ Uhh, you’re a pretty quick reader … O_o
And yeah I know- I’ve been looking out for that category- they should make it soon, but for now I’m keeping it under Disney.
FONY- You are such an amazing writer! I love the fact that you don’t drag the story out with long dull descriptions and just get straight to the point. You’ve managed to capture Linguini’s character very well. Slipping while proposing was a nice touch. Please continue writing, you are very good at it.
TSS: That’s a really obvious question. Of course I’m going to move it to Ratatouille.
sharpie: Thanks I’m glad you liked it. I’m going to continue writing, but I’m only planning on making one-shots. They seem to work best for me, especially since they help me to exercise my writing ‘skills’ to warm up for my novel.
I loved that fanfic,it was VERY sweet,and the characters were done perfectly. I loved that little nugget at the end about Remy never understanding humans.
I noticed this,though-
There are many ways you can countinue this fic without it going mushy. I can name like 5,with about 3 of them being inspired by all the questions the kids at the theater were asking about everybody’s favorite couple. If you don’t want to countinue,that’s fine with me. You are an awesome author though,and I always love reading your fics (even if they’re not Ratatouille :p).
(P.S.-Please don’t think I’m an idiot!I just stink at writing stuff like that!)