glp's Radiator Springs Adventures W: New fanfiction rated T

How do you learn to write like this :slight_smile:

?I can’t even do this :frowning: !However I am working on a story about my adventers in RS,or at least trying :unamused:

.

Aww. That

just made me smile. I feel bad for Bolts though, after Doc ā€œexhiledā€ him from the room (and away from

Angie, for that matter). By the way, I think ā€˜Jackson’ would have been a cool name for Bolts. :wink:

Nice

chapter, gottalovepixar. You’re a fast writer; faster than me, anyway. I’m not

even a third of the way done with my story yet. :stuck_out_tongue:

Keep up the good work, as always! :smiley:

Mitch :

That’s because i get so excited and i want to see people’s reactions . It’s so fun !! :smiley: *claps hads

excitingly like a ā€˜yay me!’ moment *

gottalovepixar - Haha – yeah, I can tell. :wink:

Maybe I should consider

trying out that ā€œtechniqueā€ that you and The Star Swordsman enforce, the

one where you don’t submit any new chapters until someone reviews the previous one. I always thought that that

idea was too ā€œpushyā€ for my taste. Maybe I better not. :stuck_out_tongue:

When are you going to submit the next

chapter of your story?

Actually , i already do that . :slight_smile: I usually wait

until 2 or 3 people have replied .

I really don’t know when the next chapter will be up , because now i

don’t know if i should do 2 more chapters of here in RS or just make her leave . I might do it sometime this

week . If i have time . I despise homework . :unamused:

gottalovepixar - Oh yeah – that’s right. You do. Heh – my

mistake. :wink:

Hmm – I see. Well, you just take your time; I can wait. I kind of hope you lead Angie back to

Radiator Springs, but it is your story. :wink:

You know how i said i write when

i’m bored ? Well, i’m bored now , so , i think i’m gonna write a bit . If you want the full feeling of this

chapter , i suggest you play the score ā€˜goodbye’ over and over and over again until you’re done reading this

chapter . The you’ll probably cry :cry: , so have some tissues ready . :wink:

Chapter 15 - Never

Say Goodbye

A month had gone by quickly , more quickly than Angie wanted it too . Her birthday was fun ,

with a birthday cake * , chocolate , her favorite flavor ,and of course a few gifts and some money to support

herself ( although she had plenty , but it’s the thought that counts , and she knew this ) . Her most favorite

gift , was a group picture of all of them . Angie in the center , with Doc and Lightning behind her . The third

row was Mater , Sally , Sheriff , Flo , Ramone , and Lizzie . The last row was Luigi , Sarge , Filmore , Red ,

and Guido . She loved it , and triple-checked that it was packed the night before .

Before she knew it

her trunks were packed and everyone was at the end of the road to say goodbye , tears ready to flow from the

windshields of the cars , except Mia & Tia , they were just a little sad .

She had already said bye

to her parents , and her mom cried a bit , and she left .SHe never told them about a quick pit stop to get her

stuff .well , it was more of a week pit stop , but , they didn’t need to know that . She was afraid her father

would make her go start up racing again . After all , he was upset when he found out she was going to quit racing

.

Angie thought it would be easy to leave , just say ’ seeya ’ and head off . But that wasn’t the case

, and she almost turned around to unpack , but this was her dream , and she wouldn’t give up , even if it meant

leaving her second family .

" Do you have everything you need ? " asked Doc .

"

Yep . I’ve got everything . "

" Lightning , " said Sally , " remind me never to have

children . "

" Why ? " , questioned Lighting .

" Because they and leave you at

the end ! :`-( , " Sally burst into tears , making red cry too and quickly drive away .

" You

got the fuel ? " asked Flo .

" Yes , and i’ll be set for about the year now . Thanks again ,

" said Angie .

" Well , you better be settin’ off now so you can be there by the orientation ,

" warned (?) Sheriff .

" Well , " said Angie to Doc , " I guess this is goodbye .

"

That was the tear starter . Angie started crying , but not bad , just a few sniffs and some tears

:cry: , like that , not like this :`-( .

Doc tried to quiet her , now cryin a bit himself ( amazing

isn’t it ) " Shh now , this isn’t goodbye , it’s more like a seeya later . Besisdes , we’re the one’s

supposed to be crying . "

She soon ran out of tears , and settled down . The college was far , about

a 3 1/2 hour drive , not including the traffic there would be , and the only way she would be driving that to

visit would be on vacation . Luckily , there was one right before the last race . Maybe she would go see

Lightning race . If they wouldn’t cram her with vacation homework .

" I promise to call as soon as

I get there , " she said . " I’ll miss y’all !"

Angie drove a bit , then turned around

to look back . She saw shops , houses , and beautiful scenery . She could see a small indication of Willy’s

Butte and the courthouse with Stanley in front of it . But most of all , she saw memories . fun memories , sad

memories , funny ones too .

I’ll be back , Angie thought , making a small

oath to herself , I’ll be back .

  • Let’s just say they eat cake okay , i

mean you never know . :wink:


It’s so sad ! :`-( . Or is it just me

? Please tell me so i know i’m not crazy .

:smiley:

nice chapt. GLP so, Angie leaving huh? (sniff) it’s so sad! :`-(

Just to let you guys know , the fanfic isn’t over ! We

still haven’t even got to the main part of the conflict . So far here’s what you have of the conflict .

[spoil] Despite her father’s dreams , Angie wants to become a doctor , not a racecar

[/spoil]

Awwww! That’s kinda like when I left for college that first year! So sad! (although not depressing, which is

good) I hope she comes back soon. You know when Doc, who usually has that rough exterior, starts getting

misty-eyed things are pretty sad…

Yeah , i was thinking that when

i was typing it down . I was like ’ Doc doesn’t sound like he would cry . Maybe i shouldn’t make him cry . ’

But then i thought ’ aww , what the heck ! Just do it ! It will show how sad it is . ’

Just wondering ,

did anybody take my advice and read the chapter while listening to ā€˜goodbye’ ( the score not the "na na na

na hey hey hey goodbye ’ song ) . It really makes you cry ! I did listen to it while creating the scene in my

head before typing it out . So it’s basically the inspiration . Cool! My story has an inspiration ! lol

:wink:

i think i’m gonna make

another chapter now . And i would just like to say , if i get the whole college life thing wrong , it’s because

i’ve got 4 1/2 years to go until i get there . lol

Chapter 16 - Dorm Buddies ( hee hee , doesn’t

the title make you wanna laugh )

" I think i might like here , " Angie said to herself with

a smile .

She had arrived to the campus quicker than expected . There wasn’t much traffic on the way ,

but she noticed it was because only the freshmen were coming that day . Some of them were with their parents

their mothers practically choking them to death . Others were with friends , ready to have fun and slack off , as

usual . The best part was , nobody was staring at her or rushing up to her . She guessed it was because she was

stickerless . Angie knew though , sooner or later , somebody would , and either squel with glee … or beat

her down until she was nothing but a flat road pancake .

When she got to her dorm , she noticed two

things . One , it was white . Very bland , and it made her feel … well … hopeless .

[i]I’m

gonna have to change that before i take pictures and send them to everybody back at Radiator Springs

[/i] , Angie thought , [i] or else Ramone will rush here with paint just to make it look

more colorful [/i] . She laughed at the thought .

ANother thing she noticed was that there

wasn’t one spot for sleeping , there were three .

" Oh no , "

Angie blurted out loud , " oh no , no , no . Please let them not be fans , please let them not be fans .

Puh-lease let them not be fans . Or popular snobs . "

Luckily , she got

their before her roomates , so she got first pick . She decided the one next to the wall on the right was nice ,

a good enough place to put her pictures . It was either that or one next to a window on the left or one next to

a dark corner .

Right when she picked it , a mint green convertable voltswagon beetle ( the convertible

cover was tan ) drove into the room .

" Oh , " the car said with a small giggle , " hello

. I thoguht I’d be the first one here , but you proved me wrong . I’m guessing your my roomie .

"

" One out of two , " replied Angie , " i haven’t met the other one yet . "

" Well , I’m Chai , " said the car .

" Chai ? "

" My mother’s

big on the whole yoga relaxation thing . " Chai rolled her eyes , " and you are ? "

"

You mean you actually don’t know who I am ? " asked Angie with a smile .

" No , " Chai

looked a bit freaked out , " am I supposed to ? "

" Well , I was hoping you wouldn’t .

And you don’t , which is good . I’m Angie . Angie Weathers . "

" You mean the female racecar

who just quit for unknown reasons ? You were an inspiration to young girls everywhere ! You probably still are ,

actually , " said Chai , excitement lowering a bit now . " I’m sorry , you probably didn’t want

people to do that . So , what are you here to learn ? "

" Medics , " Angie replied ,

" I always wanted to be a doctor , or somebody that helps people instead of making them sit with a big ag of

potato chips . You ? "

" Journalist . But not the poparazzi type of journalist . One who

actually tell people what really going on . Not one who writes about Britney Lears ( note : It’s supposed to be

Lears ) changing her hair color , or Cali Farlo getting pregnant with a Brazilian male supermodel . That stuff is

so … unimportant . "

" Wow , we have alot in common , " said Angie , " we’re both

sick of celebrities making people lazy and star-obsessed . "

They both laughed . Chai took the spot

acroos from Angie’s and they both decided to take a drive around the campus before fully settling in . While

driving , trhey saw the football jocks with the football jocks , the nerds with the nerds , the drama kids with

the drama kids , and the popular snobs with the popular snobs . A silver bmw that looked like it took all of it

father’s money away just on her rims laughed at them like a hyenna and drove up to them .

" How

great , " she said sarcasticly , " Chai the loser found herself an Angie Weathers wannabe . "

" I’m not a wannabe , " said Angie agrily , " i’m the real thing . "

The

bmw’s posse started whispering , all of them noticed ny her voice she was the real Angie Weathers . the bmw

perked up a bit , having a small idea .

" Well , if you are the real thing , why don’t you hang out

with me and my gang . I’m Roshell . There’s no need for you to hang out with geeks who needed a schaolarship to

get here . "

" No thanks , " Angie replied , " I don’t hang out with snobs " ,

and drove off . Chai stuck her tounge out at Rosell , and followed Angie .

Of course , the future

poparazzi of america members heard this , grabbed their cameras , and started taking pictures of Angie .

" Oh my gosh , " said a red car , " I can’t believe I go to the same college as Angie

Weathers ! What dorm garage do you live in ? "

" Uh , 26B . "

" No way ! ,

" said the car , " that’s my dorm ! Did you hear that guys ? " she

said to her group , " I , Jessica Gibbs , share a dorm with Angie Weathers ! "

" Oh no ,

" said Angie and Chai at the same exact time .

It was around evening , and the new roomies were in

their dorm . Jessica had settled down , and Chai explained to her if she acted like she did that afternoon again

, she would personally get her in a new dorm . This , of course , shut Jessica up right away .

Angie had

put up just about everything , only one picture left . It was the group picture of her and everybody at Radiator

Springs . She sighed sadly . Angie had that homesickness feeling again . It was nice at her college , but not a

beautiful as the little town . She missed them all , and she hadn’t even been gone for a whole day yet .

I think I’ll call them tomorrow , she thought .

" Who’s that

? " asked Chai .

" Oh , just the gang , " answered Angie , " that’s me ,Lightning ,

Sally - "

" As Lightning Mcqueen and his girlfriend ? " asked Jessica excitingly . Chai

gave her a look . " O.k , i’ll shut up now , " she said backing off .

" Mater , Filmore ,

Sarge , Flo , Ramone , Lizzie , Red , Luigi , Guido - "

"is that the hudson hornet " asked

Chai , but not as if she was excited .

" Yep . That’s Doc . Taught me most of the stuff I know

about racing and my dream job . "

" He’s a doctor too ? " Chai looked puzzled .

" And a judge . "

" Wow , somebody likes to multitask . Well , goodnight .

"

" Goodnight , " said Angie , shut the light off , and went to sleep .


Well , that took quicker than I thought . It was fun too . I just

love creating the snobby characters . :wink:

Haha – not bad! ā€œBritney Learsā€ā€¦ (snigger)

I’m pleased that Angie made

at least one friend on her first day at college. I like her name, too: Chai.

Keep it goin’,

gottalovepixar! :smiley:

I’ve been trying

to think of a name for her for days now , and i was in the kitchen and i say green chai tea . i thought chai

sounded cool , and the more i said it , the more it made sense .

The best part is , she’s my dream car .

I got to create my own perfect friend . pretty cool , huh ? lol

Cool, indeed. Not to get off-topic, but: Have you ever tried chai tea? It is the most

delicious drink on the planet (besides hot chocolate and Sprite) – not to mention,

the fact that it is warm and soothing may explain Chai’s personality: comfortable and sensitive/sweet/caring.

Kind of a coincidence that you chose that particular name for her, eh’? :wink:

Oh boy. Fangirls. Gotta love it. And I’d say that was a

pretty good take on the first day of a college freshman. College dorms usually dont have anything in them when

you get there except the beds and some furniture. You gotta bring everything.

To be exact , they are future poparazzi journalists . I

thought that would be cool . :sunglasses:

Hmm , how am I gonna make this work ?

Chapter

17 - Argument

It had been about two weeks after school started and the teachers declared an emergency

vacation for two weeks . Although it wasn’t that far into the school year , the students leaped for joy and left

as fast as possible . There wasn’t that many people at school still , just Angie , Chai , Jessica , and about 20

of their classmates .

" I wonder why they’re giving us a break so soon , " said Chai to her

two friends .

" Probably because the big race is in two weeks , " answered Angie .

" What makes you think that ? " asked Jessica , one eyebrow arched .

" Because

about ten of them asked me if I had any spare tickets . Even Professor Dillamond ( how can I not add something

from ā€œWickedā€ ) asked me for one . "

" No way !" exclaimed Chai , " he’s a

total downer . I would never think of him as a racing fan . "

" Well , lucky me , " said

Jessica , " I got a pit pass from a press company thanks to my essay I wrote about why celebrities are so

important to our news of the day . I’m off ! Buh-Bye ! "

The two said goodbye to their friend as

she left for an adventure of her own .

" So, " Angie turned to Chai , " what are you doing

for two weeks ? "

Chai rolled her eyes . " I’m probably just going to stay here . My parents

are still in Germany visiting our long lost realatives . Apparently , one of them is a supermodel ."

" Eww , " they both said aloud .

" Let me guess , " Chai said after their

small giggle-fest , ā€œyour going to visit your friends in Radiator Springs , right ?ā€

" Mmm

, I might go tell Lightning good luck , " replied Angie , " but I have plans to go visit my dad before

he starts calling saying how mom thinks I don’t care about them anymore . Good thing they’re in their vacation

spot an hour away from here , I really don’t feel like taking a long drive . "

" Al-righty

then . See-ya in two weeks . "

"See-ya , " answered back Angie , and she drove off

.

The drive was short . Angie knew the way better than the back of her tire , and nobody was on the road ,

so she went a little faster than the spped limit . 80mph , to be exact .

[i] Hm , feels nice

to go fast every once in a while [/i] , thought Angie . She missed racing a little bit , but not that

much . After all , she was pursuing her dream , and you have to give up some stuff every now and then to do that

… right ?

She got to her parents , and her mother drove up to her quickly from the house’s porch .

" Why didn’t you call ? " asked her mother .

" I called ," Angie answered ,

" you just were never here when I did . "

She stood for a few days , and it felt just like it

did before six monts ago . It was quiet , peaceful , small family chats not including a phone line . Surprisingly

, one other familar thing came up that Angie didn’t want to - her racing for Dinoco .

" You know ,

" The King said to Angie one evening after supper . The sun was was setting , creating an orange and pink

sunset , " Dinoco wants you to race for them again . "

Angie sighed . " Daddy , I’m not

racing . I’m done . "

" What do you mean ? You always had so much fun ! I always saw you with

a smile after you won or got close to it . "

" That was because there were 50 cameras

surronding me wanting that smile . Not because I was happy . "

" Angie , " he father

replied sternly , " I want you to be able to support yourself when your mother and I are gone , and racing

is the best way to . "

" How do you know , " Angie was getting pretty fusturated , "

the only thing you ever did was racing ! "

" Because I enjoyed it ! And I know you do too .

Ever since you were six years old you would do anything to set your tires on the track . You always wanted to be

a racecar and- "

" [b] Well , dad , I don’t want to be a racecar anymore

!!![/b] , " Angie yelled . " You know what … we’re finished here . I’m gone . " She

drove off , practically throwing dirt in The King’s face , going fifty miles per hour .

" Angie !

" , yelled her father . But it was too late , she was gone .

" Psst , " Chai heard

someone whisper , " Chai , wake up ."

Chai opened her windshield and yawned . " Oh , "

she said , " it’s just you Angie . Why are you back so soon ? "

" I’ll explain later .

Come on . "

" Where are we going ? "

" I don’t know , somewhere my dad

can’t find me . I just need to take a drive and make sure he learns to let me do what I wanna do . "

They drove offf the campus on Interstate 40 . Angie and Chai were jst going straight , while Angie

explained what had happened that evening .

" I can’t believe he was actually trying to make you go

back to what you don’t want to do ! , " exclaimed Chai . " That’s just wrong . "

Just

then , it started to rain .

" Ooh , no . Of all days why now ? "

" Why don’t you

want it to rain ? "

" Becuase my brakes stink in the rain . Come on , let’s get on an exit .

"

They turned at the next exit . By the next car’s headlights , a sign shined in the night Angie

and Chai missed . It said ā€œRoute 66ā€ .

They drove , Angie taking each turn as slow as she could

. Then she it a slick spot . She turned and swerved , finally hitting a pole .

" My nose ! " ,

cried out Angie , " it’s busted ! "

" What in the blue blazes ?! " said a car .

" Sheriff ? " , Angie tried to look behind her .

Angie was right , it was Sheriff . He

was on duty as usual , and saw her driving like a maniac and chased her down . Angie was suprised she didn’t

hear the sirens , they must have been drowned by the sound of the rain pattering the ground harder than ever .

" Well , we better get you to Doc before he goes to sleep , " said Sheriff , " I doubt you

want to look like this for a while . "

They drove off ( luckily Mater was not needed that late night

) , Chai wondering what in the world was going on .

" You’re gone for three weeks and you’ve

already got in trouble . Perfect , just perfect . "

Angie was in Doc’s office , and Doc had taken

the last dent out of her hood . It didn’t look as new as befor , but a paint job session with ramone would fix

that .

" You ran way from the school , taking a friend with you ? " Doc elclaimed . He had

quickly met Chai before fixing up Angie hood . " Do you know how much trouble you can get in ? They could

kick you out right now ! "

" I didn’t run away from the school , " Angie said in a soft ,

childish , innocent voice , " I ran away from daddy . Schools out for two weeks because of the race . "

" You know what , I don’t get you , " replied Doc , " why in the world did you run away

from your father . "

That’s when it got to Angie , for the second time in three weeks . She just ,

cried . And this time it was a boo-hoo cry . She felt like a seven year old again , just crying because she

needed to .

" I’m guessing it was concerning something not good . "

Angie nodded .

" Aww , he didn’t want you to be a doctor did he ? " asked Doc , going to her side to comfort

her .

She sniffed . " He wants me to race , and I really don’t want to . I mean (sniff) why can’t

he accept my dream ? "

" Because it concerns his dream . "

" What ? "

asked Angie , confused .

" He wants you to take over what he did , " said Doc , " so you

can be more , closer a bit . "

" How do you know that ? " questioned Angie .

" Told me himself . "

" If anything , " she replied , " it’s brought

us farther apart . "

Angie and Chai each got a room at the Cozy Cone that night .

"

Well look who’s back , " said Sally , and handed each of them a key , Angie getting once again , cone #4 .

Angie was surprised to notice it was the same exact way she left it . The alarm clock still on the floor

, suffocated by a pillow , a small stain of fuel she left from being up late searching for the perfect college on

her laptop , and one picture of the group at the track she forgot to pack .

" Hm , " she

whispered out loud , " just like before . "

There you go ,

you finally have all of the conflict ! I’ve had that big screaming line for Angie since i had the idea for the

fanfic . I just love big arguments - and the comforting that comes afterwords . :wink:

Hahaha! well i’m not really sensing much

trouble anymore. It appears to have happened already. Aww, I feel bad for both Angie and King. I dont think he

deserved to be yelled at like that, but I know why she did. As long as they can eventually patch things up

between each other.

I know what you’re saying , but I needed to add a

little drama . :wink: Besides , It was also a good way to get her back to Radiator

Springs too .

Hee Hee , everybody gets to Radiator Springs by a wrong turn . I just noticed that .

lol