Here After

8D I’m just glad I’m the writer, I don’t think I could beat him either. :wink:

From a Burger King? That’s awesome! And I’m flattered you look forward to my updates so much. <3 Glad you liked the title this time as well! Naming them can be so hard, and I went through multiple changes on this one, so I’m pleased you liked the end result. :slight_smile: Oh, and a little secret on the thing with Sally’s father; I literally added that out of nowhere. I was in the process of typing it up from the rough copy and I was like, “Hold the phone…genius idea for a twist.” :sunglasses: And you predicted the argument?! Dang, I thought it was quite unexpected, thought I had made it appear that Sally and Doc had closed the invisible door on their tension with each other. Should have known that you would have guessed it though. :wink: But I get some points for getting you on the end though. :sunglasses: This is why I’m telling you about my top-secret fic! You’ll have it all figured out before I even post it! 8D

Nope. That’s because I see this thread maybe a minute or two after the last post is made. :smiley: I’m also a pretty quick reader on top of that.

Of course! Like I said, it’s either my #1 or #2 favorite story from you so far. <3 Really?! Well, it is a genius idea. It just makes sense, it gives a reason for Sally to make that decision and act like that, not a good one but. Wait, that sounds bad. Like, whatever happened doesn’t justify the choice to keep secrets from Vina but you know! I know you know what I mean. :wink: Yes! I did predict it! Really? Oh, haha. I didn’t catch that one. :blush: I just always thought that Doc would have enough and just want Sally to tell the truth. I also thought something else but I’ll tell you in a PM. LOL okay, you’re right. Now, I see why you won’t tell me. :wink: :laughing:

Sheesh! I’ve missed like, three chapters! :shock: If [b:vph9lb8w]Ballboi[/b:vph9lb8w] holds the title for quickest reviewer, then I probably hold the one for slowest. :lol: I keep attempting to write a review, but every time I’d get sidetracked and I’d forget. But hey, here’s the good part… each time I tried, I’d re-read the chapters, so they’re like partially engrained in my head now from how many times I’ve read them. 8D :roll: Anyways though, on to my actual comments and questions…

First off, I must say [i:vph9lb8w]Romantic Remains[/i:vph9lb8w] is probably one of my new favorite chapters… not entirely sure why, but every time I read through the pages that one always seems to capture my attention. 8) I think it’s because we were digging into the past, and I’ve always enjoyed that in stories (primarily why I love prequels… cough [size=60:vph9lb8w]Star Wars[/size:vph9lb8w] cough 8D :mrgreen: ). Oh, and the title. That was great too, fit in perfectly. :-D) ;)

[quote:vph9lb8w]It is a beautiful shot of my mother smiling and gazing into his eyes under neon lights. His hands are holding her by the waist, like he’ll never let her go. And Mom…she’s wearing the happiest look I’ve ever seen in my life.[/quote:vph9lb8w]

Hmmm… would that by any chance be a picture from the scene in the actual movie right before all the reporters came in and whisked Lightning away? :-D) :D

[quote:vph9lb8w]my eyes settle on the spilling bundle in his arms. My daughter’s limbs hang limply and I see her eyes closed.[/quote:vph9lb8w]

"Spilling bundle". That phrase just adds so much more to the eerieness of that visualization. :shock: And I, for one, have not a clue as to what happened to her! o_0 For some reason the idea popped into my mind that Livian staged it or caused it in some way, or was doing something out of spite and ended up hurting herself, but other than that, no idea. Suppose I’ll just have to wait and see. :lol:

[quote="MissCarrera":vph9lb8w]Oh, and a little secret on the thing with Sally’s father; I literally added that out of nowhere. I was in the process of typing it up from the rough copy and I was like, "Hold the phone…genius idea for a twist." 8) [/quote:vph9lb8w]

So awesome! :mrgreen: When you get those little inspirational ideas though, you just have to plug 'em in then and there, even if it’s at the last moment! And it worked out great, adds just that much more depth and background to your story. 8)

Well, we now have several mysterious things that still have yet to be answered… and I’m still wondering what it’ll be like when Livian confronts Sally with her findings. o_0 [i:vph9lb8w]If[/i:vph9lb8w] that’s how things unfold. :lol: I will be awaiting the answers, and this time I’ll try to actually respond on time. 8D :-\ But update soon! And keep up that brilliant talent of yours, [b:vph9lb8w]Rebecca[/b:vph9lb8w]! I will never fail to enjoy reading your work! ;-) :D 8)

When shall we expect the next chapter Rebecca?

Paulisha: Don’t fret, you know I get what you were trying to say. :wink:
Jonah: 8D It’s OK! You leave long reviews, so it makes up for it. :sunglasses: Wow, that’s your favourite so far? Interesting! I must say, I love prequels, backstories, whatever you want to call them. Probably why I always end up working them into my writing. :stuck_out_tongue: And yes, that is the exact scene I meant by that picture! I humanized it of course, so I’m glad you knew what I was trying to portray. I like how you pick out specific phrases you like from the story, so thanks! All your questions shall now be answered… :wink:
Jordan: Right now! :smiley:

I just want to say that I hope you all had a fabulous Christmas! And here is my treat to you, the final chapter of “Here After”.

Chapter Ten
“Love Letters”
(Sally’s POV)

I don’t feel myself rocking like I did in the ambulance, but I do feel overcome with the same sensation of worry and panic. I scoop Levina into my arms and cry her name while tears roll down my face. Doc hears all the noise and joins us outside. He doesn’t speak at all but grabs Levina and carries her back through the doors. I rush to follow him, but Mater holds me back.

“What are you doing?! Let go of me!” I scream, trying to twist out of his clutch.

He whips me around and brings me so close to his face that I could count the freckles on it. “Miss Sally, get a hold of yerself. She’s gonna be jus’ fine. I found her layin’ out in Ornament Valley, probably just got bitten by a snake or somethin’.”

“A snake! What if it was poisonous? Damn it, Mater! Let go of me!” I struggle against him some more, but like Lightning once pointed out, I’m weak when I’m scared. I start crying violently at the memory of him placing his strong arms around me when he’d said it. He knew me inside and out, just like I knew stupid little things about him. He couldn’t resist chocolate covered almonds, he hated the word ‘boisterous’ and he loved to sing Bon Jovi songs when no one was around. The things I’d never forget about him…the tiny details that etched their way into my mind.

However, I’m not going to start a list like that for Levina. She’s the only thing I have left of him, the only thing I love above all. I don’t intend to lose her too. I fight harder against Mater, but he doesn’t free me.

I finally give up, and when I do, he drags me inside the waiting room. He sits me down with some force and gives me a stern look.

“Miss Sally, I know this is hard fer ya, but I won’t have ya goin’ losing yer mind again. Just sit still and we’ll wait for Doc.”

I nod back and relax into the chair. Surprisingly, Doc comes out relatively quick. He moves closer to us and I stand up immediately. His eyes grow wary, but he says, “Everything is OK. She just passed out from some severe dehydration. I’ve got her on fluids, and I told her to rest, but she’s begging for you, Sally,” he pauses to clear his throat, “I think there is something she wants to talk to you about.”

I don’t hesitate for a second, I dash to her room. I open the door and I’m met straight on with her blinking blue eyes. My heart stops as I realize just how much she resembles Lightning.

I approach the bed with caution and then lift her head to hug her. She hugs me back, and after a minute I release her. I gaze at her through my teary eyes and stroke her soft brown hair from her face.

“Levina…oh, baby, where did you go?” I whisper.

Her face changes to an indescribable expression. I watch as she reaches under the sheet and withdraws a fist. Slowly, she uncurls her fingers to reveal a golden ring.

I gasp and my hand flies to my open mouth. It’s the ring Lightning gave me when he asked me to be his girl. The ring I put away in the storage shed…

Levina takes my ivory hand and places the ring where a wedding band would go. With pleading eyes, she peers up at me and asks, “Mom…can you tell me now?”

2 weeks later

Levina and I stand side by side on the bridge crossing over the Tailfin waterfall. We each hold an envelope, mine addressed to ‘Stickers’ and hers to ‘Daddy’. I grab her hand and squeeze it gently. I look out into the depths of the water and stare at it whirling far down below us. This isn’t the first time I’ve done this, but it feels so much more special with my daughter.

Levina kisses her letter, and I do the same. In unison, we throw the envelopes over the railing and watch them drift downwards until they are swept away by the rushing currant.

I turn and hug her closely, feeling more complete than I have in years, nearly 15 years to be exact. I may not have Lightning anymore but at least I have her to shower with my love. She’s the nearest thing to a piece of him that I’ll ever find.

I let her out of my embrace and she smiles lovingly at me. I smile back at her and ask, “Now, what do you say we go work on that race car?”

THE END

That's it everyone, the end to "Here After".  :smiley: Thanks so much to everyone who read and left comments, I appreciate it so much. I hope you enjoyed this story and will leave me your final thoughts on this chapter, or the story as a whole. As always, feel free to give advice for improvement or rate this one out of 5 stars type of thing. It was a pleasure sharing this with you.  :slight_smile: My next piece will either be one with [b]Jonah[/b], or a one-shot about Francesco to be titled "Momento". So keep an eye out for that if you like, and thanks again for reading!  <img src="//pixarplanet-forums.s3.dualstack.us-west-1.amazonaws.com/original/2X/c/cc83e9b583138e48ff45f96609046b06d06c7f9d.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":mrgreen:" title="Mr. Green"/>

I loved it! I didn’t think it was as good as Family Tidings but I enjoyed this. I’m going to give it a 4.5/5. Also, Levia is such a beautiful name.

Yes, yes, yes! Oh my gosh, it’s funny that you say that because I just watched all the Star Wars movies for the first time on Christmas Day. I knew about them being classics and all but I didn’t care much about them. I’m not a fan now or anything but they’re really good! The prequels are the best (EPISODE THREE!!! :sunglasses: )and I adore prequels for the same reason you do. I love seeing how everything and everyone matches up and it’s just like a big “Oooooooh” moment. :smiley: And yes, I’m exceptionally excited for Monster’s University because of this. :slight_smile:

Okay, back on task, LOL. You have succeeded in bringing me to tears again, Becca. One, because it’s the end, I forgot that this was a short story so I didn’t expect this to be the final chapter. :frowning: Two, because Lightning’s dead (had to bring that back :laughing:) And three, because this chapter was just… too awesome for words. I loved so much in it, this review is going to be so long cause you know I got to comment on everything. 8D

Details like that are just… cute! I love traits like that, I don’t know- I’m weird. o_0 :unamused: By the way, chocolate covered almonds? Lightning’s my kind of guy, I looooovveeee those. :wink: <3

^^^ I love this. I had to read it more than once, like thrice. :laughing: I love how the ring was used and there were really no words, if that makes sense. Plus, how Vina puts the ring on Sally’s wedding finger and how you ended it with her asking… I loved it, just did. <3

I like Vina and Sally writing the letters and dropping them in the river. Where did you get that idea from? Like I never heard of doing that before! And the last line of the story was awesome! I love how you linked the old race car back around like that. :sunglasses:

Overall, I say 4.9 out of 5! It’s a tie being my favorite along with Family Tidings. You would of gotten 5 out of 5, I just never give a perfect score. There’s always something that needs improvement but it was so covered in awesomess that I couldn’t even find it. :wink: i truly enjoyed it, loved it, and definitely cried enough tears in it. :laughing: <3 Whatever you decide to publish next, you know I’ll be right there reading it!.. And Jordan will be right there reviewing it. :wink: 8D

Yep. I read it a couple minutes after the chapter is posted.

Jordan: Awesome! Thanks! You liked “Family Tidings” better because there was more Doc, didn’t you? :sunglasses: And I am seriously considering adding “Levina” to my ‘future daugher names’ list. <3
Paulisha: That’s why I’m looking forward to the new MI movie too! :smiley: Hahaha! I love how you always bring up the point about Lightning being dead. :wink: Ooh! I just knew you would like that line! It is one of my favourites from the entire story. :mrgreen: Hehehe, thrice. :laughing: < What I was going to say there was, I’m pleased you liked that scene. I wanted to give it a meaning, rather than just something like Levina confronting Sally and making accusations and all that. The idea about the letters…I’m not quite sure where that came from. Nothing I saw on TV or whatever, it was an original idea. I think it sparked from when I thought of Sally writing letters later on (like she was doing at the desk) as a form of escape and in memory of McQueen. But I couldn’t just have that idea stuck in there with no purpose, and it wouldn’t make sense to the readers, so I decided to use it again at the end. And the race car thing…well, that’s a classic thing I do. :wink: :open_mouth: 4.9?! Oh, wow! Thanks so much! Dang, will I EVER get a perfect from you? I think that may be my new goal. :sunglasses: I’m shocked that everyone loved “Family Tidings” so much, I personally think it is my weakest. I like them in this order: Personal Affairs, Dangerous Keepings, Here After, Family Tidings. That’s not including my one shots. Haha, I’ll be looking forward to seeing your comments again soon, all of you! :smiley:

wow! thank you so much for the story, I really love it. I hope you write more soon :wink: you’re the best keep it up! :smiley:

Thanks Destiny! Oh, it won’t be long. :wink:

Yep, you guessed that right. I’m actually playing with some ideas for a possible Cars fan-fic set after the second film.

Hahaha! It’s a tearjerker for me! "Thrice" :lol: Well, you know, twice is for quitters. :wink: 8D You know, I actually thought that’s how it was going to go down but you’re right, this way was much better. It was different and more purposeful than just…

Levina: You’ve been lying to me my whole life!!! Why didn’t you tell me?!?! :-x
Sally: I was just trying to protect you! I thought I was doing the right thing! :cry:

^^^… Cause that’s what always happens. :-\ 8D

Really?! Well I liked the idea of it and I give you props for coming up with something so sentimental and creative as that. <3 Oh yeah! You know I actually forgot about that part of Sally writing the letter, FAIL. :oops: :lol: But yeah, that makes sense. LOL! Hey, the day that I beat [b:1z4sponf]Jordan[/b:1z4sponf] in reviewing your stories first is the day that I give you a perfect score. :wink: :laugh: I’m not even sure if I can order your stories, it tends to change, lol. I know that this one and [i:1z4sponf]Family Tidings[/i:1z4sponf] is always wrestling for #1. Then, I’d say [i:1z4sponf]Dangerous Keepings[/i:1z4sponf], then [i:1z4sponf]Personal Affairs[/i:1z4sponf]. :)

Jordan: Ooh! You should so do it! I enjoyed your other stuff. :slight_smile: I got a brand new notebook, so I’m excited to get filling it! I’ve already gone though two of them, and I was running out of pages to write new stuff! :stuck_out_tongue: And I also like your new sig. :wink:

Paulisha: Oh yeah, third time is a charm. :sunglasses: And you’re right, that is ALWAYS how it goes! So I’m happy you liked me version instead of that for a change. :smiley: Yup, the letters thing was all me, thanks! <3 It’s alright that you forgot about it though, it wasn’t a major point or anything, just a small connecting detail. :laughing:

But that is possible. I’m hoping my next full length fic will get your perfect score. I think it might just. :sunglasses: Or perhaps another 4.9 would be good with me! :smiley: 8D I’m just finishing up with the one-shot at the moment, should have it out around New Years!

Rebecca: Thanks! I like your new signature to. I’ll try to send you a PM when I can think of something.

Paulisha: You mean when you beat me to post a review on a specific chapter?

You’re right, it is. And that makes me very excited to read it. :wink:

Jordan: Yep! :smiley:

Ah. And who shall be my first commenter on my next Cars fan-fic?

Me! I shall beat Rebecca and Jonah on this one. I am determined. :sunglasses:

8D She probably will beat me! I’m going to post up my one-shot now. :smiley: