I never stopped! I’m just focused more on school right now! Everyone keeps thinking I stopped. 
I would never, until it ends.
Glad you liked it!
Good. I’m glad 
it’s an awesome and exciting story
I’m glad you like it. I’m glad a lot of people here like it. It keeps me motivated to do more.
I will say this too, it did keep my mind off some one for a small while…
Sorry they aren’t long enough then…?
Nah there good. It’s just cause I went to my email… Maybe if I read the WHOLE thing (the whole story) hmmmmm…
If you honestly sit here and read my whole story again, I’m going to cry with happiness.
Well, since my dad and brother are gone, my sibs are in bed, my mom is busy I think I will. Only thing is my phone might die while reaing it (half battery) also since Ami is gone for now I have a lot of free time 
sooooo off I go…
Oh my goodness!!! xD
Well, it took a while but I did it!!! 
lol my eyes hurt now…
I read it. Good job. I liked the mention of Kori, I actually really liked her character in the movie. I know it is a lot of work to keep up with a fan fic! I didn’t think it would be but I try to post one chapter a week and with school the time just goes by too fast but I’m hoping to get the next chapter of mine up tommorow possibly.
I haven’t read your story since [spoil]Sally saw the ring.[/spoil] I need to catch up.
Glad you liked it!
and glad you read it all again, Garrett!
It’s been that long?! I thought maybe you were reading but didn’t want to post a comment. Well, I’m on chapter 8 now so you do have some catching up to do! I undertstand though, balancing school and all that is so difficult so take your time. Hopefully you will get a chance to read it some time, I think you will like it. I’m being sure to keep up with yours because like Garrett said…if I missed more than one chapter I would have some major reading to do!
I don’t like doing short chapters, sorry. I used to do them, but then I realized my story would go on forever in chapters, and it already is. I’m making a second one soon.
No, no, I don’t mind at all! Sometimes mine get pretty long but I edit them to break it down into more chapters. Kind of the opposite of you. 
I’m trying to extend the amount of chapters I have to make the story a little better. What do you mean a second one? Another fan fic?
The second book of this one.
I’m probably going to catch up to your story this weekend because I’ll finally have alone time!
LOL no problem Jessie
A second one? That’ll make it like a book series! Cool! How far do you plan on taking the story? Like up until Jane is full grown? And another question; do you plan on incorporating the second film into your story?
I haven’t decided where I’ll actually stop, but most likely when she’s fully grown. I do plan on adding the second movie in, but it’s going to be slow, and probably not in this book.
Well good for you! I really love Cars and if I put a lot of effort into it I think I could make a book out of it. But I can’t really fuel enough ideas to keep it going so that’s why I’m just making my fan fic short and sweet. I’ve got the plot figured out and I write it one chapter at a time. If I were to write a book it wouldn’t be a fan fic though, it would have to be something from my own imagination. Writing a fan fic is actually harder than you think because you have to make sure it corrospondes with the film and it’s also a lot harder when you’re working with cars as your characters. 
Plus there are a lot of unknown elements you know, like things you want to write in but your not sure what it would actually be like in the cars world so you have to make it up yourself. Challenging and fun don’t you think? 