The Nature of Fear
a CARS fan fiction by
just as promised - i started translating my fan fiction. so here comes a very first part.
but be aware - it is creepy, it is dark, it is unpleasant, and it is written for adult
readers. although it has a fluffy ending - if you wanna know how it feels to be taken hostage, please go
[b]caution (1) - this is a translation from
german to english, and i hope my use of words is not too awkward… please feel free to correct
caution (2) - Contains explicit language, violence and in one scene insinuation of attempted (but
failed) sexual violence. (Rated 16 years
[url=http://www.futuremania.de/fear.html]Chapter 1 - A Date
and a Robbery[/url]
Chapter 2 - Into the Woods
(not yet complete)
Chapter 3 - Between Hammer and Anvil
Chapter 4 - There is
no Silver Line at the Horizon - it is Grey…
Chapter 5 - Epilogue
I’m trembling of fear , just give him the money
already so she doesn’t get hurt !
we can chase the dude later !
he he, this is just the beginning.
it’s getting worse…
[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,
is Sally going to be ok? Anything but
is Sally going to be ok?
well… hm… not
i warned you. this is going to get worse.
[size=92]Ohehmgee, the suspeeeense…WRITE FASTER!
OMG! I dont even have to sense
trouble in this one, cuz it’s already here! and something bad’s going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know
what happens, lol!
oh man! I just read that update! poor sally! At least Lightning found out. I was afraid lightning wouldnt find
out why sally couldnt meet him.
[size=92]Go Lightning! RESCUE HER, MAN![/size]
so, here we go
i finished the first chapter
and started working the second…
sorry, the translation is somewhat “crude”. it is very hard to
translate the landscape descriptions…!
I still have a bit of chills up my
spine , and I don’t like the name of chapter 4 ! It scares me …
oh… you mean
hmmm, this chapter’s isn’t that bad… if you don’t look at it from a psychological point
of view, of course…
Man,he really loves her
that was sad.
Wow! I’m glad they didnt notice him. I hope he’s able to stay that way.
Unnoticed, I mean.
the “nature of fear” goes on…
i’ve started translating again; so here comes another piece of text.
if you’d like to know how the story goes on, feel free to read…!
[size=75]p.s. you might have noticed that i changed the warnings. sorry, i had to do this (after a short communication with the forum moderators). chapter 3 isn’t as bad as it seems to be - but nevertheless, a more rigorous warning is a prerequisite for going on with the translation…[/size]
ooo! Now it’s getting scary! (well, scarier…) Again, I thought Lightning was gonna get found out! Very good so far!
i desperately hoped to get that kind of comment…