[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,
Stickers![/size]
[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,
Stickers![/size]
is Sally going to be ok? Anything but
the porchse!
very cool though
wellā¦ hmā¦ not
really.
i warned you. this is going to get worse.
[size=92]Ohehmgee, the suspeeeenseā¦WRITE FASTER! [/size]
OMG! I dont even have to sense
trouble in this one, cuz itās already here! and something badās going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know
what happens, lol!
your wish is my commandā¦
oh man! I just read that update! poor sally! At least Lightning found out. I was afraid lightning wouldnt find
out why sally couldnt meet him.
[size=92]Go Lightning! RESCUE HER, MAN![/size]
so, here we go
i finished the first chapter
and started working the secondā¦
sorry, the translation is somewhat ācrudeā. it is very hard to
translate the landscape descriptionsā¦!
I still have a bit of chills up my
spine , and I donāt like the name of chapter 4 ! It scares me ā¦
ohā¦ you mean
this chapterā¦?
hmmm, this chapterās isnāt that badā¦ if you donāt look at it from a psychological point
of view, of courseā¦
Man,he really loves her .But
that was sad.
Wow! Iām glad they didnt notice him. I hope heās able to stay that way.
Unnoticed, I mean.
the ānature of fearā goes onā¦
iāve started translating again; so here comes another piece of text.
if youād like to know how the story goes on, feel free to readā¦!
[size=75]p.s. you might have noticed that i changed the warnings. sorry, i had to do this (after a short communication with the forum moderators). chapter 3 isnāt as bad as it seems to be - but nevertheless, a more rigorous warning is a prerequisite for going on with the translationā¦[/size]
ooo! Now itās getting scary! (well, scarierā¦) Again, I thought Lightning was gonna get found out! Very good so far!
THANKS!!!
i desperately hoped to get that kind of commentā¦
ā¦just added a little bit of text.
he he - itās a nice little cliffhangerā¦
so, i finally managed to finish the storyā¦
iām
afraid itās rated āMā because of one nasty scene in chapter 4. but for those whoād like to read
nevertheless - it can be found here:
[url]http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3515301/1/[/url]
Cool! Iāll have to take a look at it
when I get the chanceā¦
Yeah so I just read it. Very suspensful! I can say Iām glad what almost
happened to sally didnt happen. And iām glad for the most part Sally & lightning were able to reconcile
their relationshipā¦