[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,
Stickers![/size]
is Sally going to be ok? Anything but
the porchse!
very cool 
though
well… hm… not
really.
i warned you. this is going to get worse.
[size=92]Ohehmgee, the suspeeeense…WRITE FASTER! 
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OMG! I dont even have to sense
trouble in this one, cuz it’s already here! and something bad’s going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know
what happens, lol!
your wish is my command… 
oh man! I just read that update! poor sally! At least Lightning found out. I was afraid lightning wouldnt find
out why sally couldnt meet him.
[size=92]Go Lightning! RESCUE HER, MAN![/size]
so, here we go 
i finished the first chapter
and started working the second…
sorry, the translation is somewhat “crude”. it is very hard to
translate the landscape descriptions…!
I still have a bit of chills up my
spine , and I don’t like the name of chapter 4 ! It scares me …
oh… you mean
this chapter…?
hmmm, this chapter’s isn’t that bad… if you don’t look at it from a psychological point
of view, of course…
Man,he really loves her 
.But
that was sad.
Wow! I’m glad they didnt notice him. I hope he’s able to stay that way.
Unnoticed, I mean.
the “nature of fear” goes on…
i’ve started translating again; so here comes another piece of text.
if you’d like to know how the story goes on, feel free to read…!
[size=75]p.s. you might have noticed that i changed the warnings. sorry, i had to do this (after a short communication with the forum moderators). chapter 3 isn’t as bad as it seems to be - but nevertheless, a more rigorous warning is a prerequisite for going on with the translation…[/size]
ooo! Now it’s getting scary! (well, scarier…) Again, I thought Lightning was gonna get found out! Very good so far!
THANKS!!!
i desperately hoped to get that kind of comment…
…just added a little bit of text.
he he - it’s a nice little cliffhanger… 
so, i finally managed to finish the story…
i’m
afraid it’s rated “M” because of one nasty scene in chapter 4. but for those who’d like to read
nevertheless - it can be found here:
[url]http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3515301/1/[/url]
Cool! I’ll have to take a look at it
when I get the chance…
Yeah so I just read it. Very suspensful! I can say I’m glad what almost
happened to sally didnt happen. And i’m glad for the most part Sally & lightning were able to reconcile
their relationship…