The Nature of Fear
a CARS fan fiction by
stickers
just as promised - i started translating my fan fiction. so here comes a very first part.
but be aware - it is creepy, it is dark, it is unpleasant, and it is written for adult
readers. although it has a fluffy ending - if you wanna know how it feels to be taken hostage, please go
onā¦
[b]caution (1) - this is a translation from
german to english, and i hope my use of words is not too awkwardā¦ please feel free to correct
me!!!
caution (2) - Contains explicit language, violence and in one scene insinuation of attempted (but
failed) sexual violence. (Rated 16 years
minimum)[/b]
[url=http://www.futuremania.de/fear.html]Chapter 1 - A Date
and a Robbery[/url]
Chapter 2 - Into the Woods
(not yet complete)
Chapter 3 - Between Hammer and Anvil
Chapter 4 - There is
no Silver Line at the Horizon - it is Greyā¦
Chapter 5 - Epilogue
Iām trembling of fear , just give him the money
already so she doesnāt get hurt ! we can chase the dude later !
he he, this is just the beginning.
itās getting worseā¦
[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,
Stickers ![/size]
is Sally going to be ok? Anything but
the porchse!
very cool though
CarFreak:
is Sally going to be ok?
wellā¦ hmā¦ not
really.
i warned you. this is going to get worse.
[size=92]Ohehmgee, the suspeeeenseā¦WRITE FASTER! [/size]
OMG! I dont even have to sense
trouble in this one, cuz itās already here! and something badās going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know
what happens, lol!
lennonluvr9:
OMG! I dont even have to sense trouble in this one, cuz itās already here! and
something badās going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know what happens,
lol!
your wish is my commandā¦
oh man! I just read that update! poor sally! At least Lightning found out. I was afraid lightning wouldnt find
out why sally couldnt meet him.
[size=92]Go Lightning! RESCUE HER, MAN![/size]
so, here we go
i finished the first chapter
and started working the secondā¦
sorry, the translation is somewhat ācrudeā. it is very hard to
translate the landscape descriptionsā¦!
I still have a bit of chills up my
spine , and I donāt like the name of chapter 4 ! It scares me ā¦
ohā¦ you mean
this chapterā¦?
hmmm, this chapterās isnāt that badā¦ if you donāt look at it from a psychological point
of view, of courseā¦
Man,he really loves her .But
that was sad.
Wow! Iām glad they didnt notice him. I hope heās able to stay that way.
Unnoticed, I mean.
the ānature of fearā goes onā¦
iāve started translating again; so here comes another piece of text.
if youād like to know how the story goes on, feel free to readā¦!
[size=75]p.s. you might have noticed that i changed the warnings. sorry, i had to do this (after a short communication with the forum moderators). chapter 3 isnāt as bad as it seems to be - but nevertheless, a more rigorous warning is a prerequisite for going on with the translationā¦[/size]
ooo! Now itās getting scary! (well, scarierā¦) Again, I thought Lightning was gonna get found out! Very good so far!
THANKS!!!
i desperately hoped to get that kind of commentā¦