just another CARS fan fiction...

The Nature of Fear
a CARS fan fiction by

stickers

just as promised - i started translating my fan fiction. so here comes a very first part.

but be aware - it is creepy, it is dark, it is unpleasant, and it is written for adult

readers. although it has a fluffy ending - if you wanna know how it feels to be taken hostage, please go

onā€¦

[b]caution (1) - this is a translation from

german to english, and i hope my use of words is not too awkwardā€¦ please feel free to correct

me!!!

caution (2) - Contains explicit language, violence and in one scene insinuation of attempted (but

failed) sexual violence. (Rated 16 years

minimum)[/b]

[url=http://www.futuremania.de/fear.html]Chapter 1 - A Date

and a Robbery[/url]
Chapter 2 - Into the Woods

(not yet complete)
Chapter 3 - Between Hammer and Anvil
Chapter 4 - There is

no Silver Line at the Horizon - it is Greyā€¦
Chapter 5 - Epilogue

Cool. :sunglasses: It looks

like Sally is very busy.

Iā€™m trembling of fear , just give him the money

already so she doesnā€™t get hurt ! :shake: we can chase the dude later !

he he, this is just the beginning.
itā€™s getting worseā€¦

[size=92]Wow, poor Sally! O.O Awesome stuff so far,

Stickers![/size]

:cry: is Sally going to be ok? Anything but

the porchse!

very cool :sunglasses: though

wellā€¦ hmā€¦ not

really.
i warned you. this is going to get worse.

[size=92]Ohehmgee, the suspeeeenseā€¦WRITE FASTER! :laughing: [/size]

OMG! I dont even have to sense

trouble in this one, cuz itā€™s already here! and something badā€™s going to happen to sally? Oh my! I need to know

what happens, lol!

your wish is my commandā€¦ :smiling_imp:

oh man! I just read that update! poor sally! At least Lightning found out. I was afraid lightning wouldnt find

out why sally couldnt meet him.

[size=92]Go Lightning! RESCUE HER, MAN![/size]

so, here we go :smiley:

i finished the first chapter

and started working the secondā€¦

sorry, the translation is somewhat ā€œcrudeā€. it is very hard to

translate the landscape descriptionsā€¦!

I still have a bit of chills up my

spine , and I donā€™t like the name of chapter 4 ! It scares me ā€¦

ohā€¦ you mean

this chapterā€¦?
hmmm, this chapterā€™s isnā€™t that badā€¦ if you donā€™t look at it from a psychological point

of view, of courseā€¦
:confused:

Man,he really loves her :slight_smile: .But

that was sad. :cry:

Wow! Iā€™m glad they didnt notice him. I hope heā€™s able to stay that way.

Unnoticed, I mean.

the ā€œnature of fearā€ goes onā€¦

iā€™ve started translating again; so here comes another piece of text.
if youā€™d like to know how the story goes on, feel free to readā€¦!

[size=75]p.s. you might have noticed that i changed the warnings. sorry, i had to do this (after a short communication with the forum moderators). chapter 3 isnā€™t as bad as it seems to be - but nevertheless, a more rigorous warning is a prerequisite for going on with the translationā€¦[/size]

ooo! Now itā€™s getting scary! (well, scarierā€¦) Again, I thought Lightning was gonna get found out! Very good so far!

THANKS!!! :smiley:

i desperately hoped to get that kind of commentā€¦ :smiley: