Kingdom Hearts 3

Now, I know you guys are thinking, “There is no KH3! Just 358/2 days and Birth By Sleep!” But that’s why I’m writing this fan-fic. It’s just how I imagined it. Okay? Good. Just so you know, it’s at the final battle in KH2 with Sora and Riku VS Xemnas. Except in this version, they don’t defeat him and go home. No. Just read. Here it is:
Chapter 1
Xemnas
Sora and Riku were instantly transported to a strange place. It had white lines moving all over the walls, and the walls were pulsing, as if they were inside of a heart. Then they heard a voice. Turning around, they saw him: Xemnas.
“Heroes from the realm of light,” Xemnas called. “I will not allow it to end this way-not yet. If Light and Darkness are eternal, then surely we nothings must be the same. Eternal!”
Sora and Riku had to give this some thought for a moment, and then Riku said, “You’re right, Light and Darkness are eternal. Nothing probably goes on forever, too. But guess what, Xemnas?” And Sora answered as he raised his fist, “That doesn’t mean YOU’RE eternal!”
Xemnas had a fit of laughter and calmly said, “No more eternal than that Radiance of yours,” and stood for a moment to soak it all in. Sora and Riku summoned their Keyblades. Xemnas cackled with laughter as the battle began.

Aw, another KH fan! nods to siggie

Nice concept, but I have some suggestions.

  1. Make your chapters longer
  2. Change paragraphs whenever a new person is talking. It’s what the grammer peeps say. :wink:
  3. INCLUDE KING MICKEY, THE BEST KEYBLADE MASTER OF ALL TIME! YEAH!

Yeah, now I’m kinda mad that just about every KH fan here on Pixar Planet is somewhat writing a fanfic. But I swear I had the idea first! Ever since I heard they were making a KH 2, I wondered if there would be a three. [spoil](Which, evidently, they didn’t make a third, just 358/2 Days and Birth by Sleep.) [/spoil]So I just decided to write a story about it.
Rac_Rules: I know the quality of the first chapter wasn’t very great, but I can explain that! I had like two minutes to type it, plus I had to watch a video of the real thing on YouTube, just to get the dialogue right. Plus, I kinda forgot the rules of writing. (The paragraph thing, I already knew that, just forgot.) I just decided to make the first chapter short, because the cutscene in the actual game is quite short. But Chapter 2 will be longer, since it’s the final battle in KH 2.
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I hope to get the second chapter on soon!

Got the idea first huh 0_-
Good starter. Nice that your connecting it to the original kingdom hearts story line at the start :smiley:

I’m just wondering if this fanfic will be related to Pixar in any way? If it isn’t, then I’ll have to move it to the Non-Pixar Art section.

Nexas-I know I probably didn’t have the idea first, it’s just been in my mind since KH 2.
rachelcakes1985- This is definitely gonna have Pixar worlds in it.

chuckles It’s alright, I’m not being competitive or anything ^^ Hope that both our fics will get attention ^^ There are few visitors in the fanfiction section, as the board noted at one time 0_0

This is good! I like it :smiley: I would like, if they do make a 3rd Kingdom Hearts, a Toy Story or WallE world :sunglasses: A WallE world would be GREAT, also a Toy Story one would be pretty cool. Keep it up!

sorry about taking so long…with me being in school still, (don’t ask) I haven’t been able to write the next chapter. Any ideas will be greatly appreciated. Just PM me your version of the final battle between Sora/Riku and Xemnas, and I’ll pick one. Thanks!

ahhh…Kingdom Hearts. I’ve been thinking about doing a crossover with KH but i haven’t quite gotten the best storyline yet…but i can hint towards something…Mice from Pixar and King Mickey must rescue…just a quick look into my fanfic future.