Not bad with the first Lightning and Doc drawings. As I wrote before, however, I’m not a big fan of drawings colored using color pencils or any other coloring materials that produce the similar texture. To me, they kinda ruined the artwork because, again, to me, they look ‘messy’ after that. The color will be all scattered throughout the drawing, and it would, pardon me writing this but, look like something created by a six year old.
However, I must emphasize that you did a good job using this sort of coloring, because, at the least:
- Your sketching looks good, neat and clean.
- Added with point number one, the coloring is simple and neat; a very significant part people need to focus on when using color pencils (or whatever you use) as they tend to smudge or produce ‘contrasting lines’ that travel in different directions, making look like the artist was scribbling.
Your depiction of Mater was okay. It’s not perfect, but at least it’s better than your depiction of Sally, which, I must write, is a little off with her eyes. Other than that, her body looks like her film counterpart, but that’s an easy part to draw.
as for your ‘humanization’ of Lightning and Sally, they are quite nice, but I felt that the ‘blond’ and ‘brunette’ Lightning look almost the same as the first one, which is the best out of all three. As for Sally, again, she looks like her film counterpart, which is a good thing, so, keep up the good work!
I apologize if my criticisms are not constructive enough and are, instead, destructive. If so, pardon my words.