Well here is where ill set up shop… for updates concerning the story im writing… (dont know if this is where i should post this so mods tell me if im wrong) this story Inspired by my Flying Monkey craze… more like crazy… lol but ive decided to write a story about it… fantasy…(it will be the best fantasy-action-adventure-comedy-romance, story there is… no im not talking about a love story about tacos… lol ) so i guess ill start writing then… oh and any suggestions would be welcomed…
Hey, I didn’t realize you were waiting on someone to post! 
I haven’t got any suggestions yet (unless you want to put something Star Wars reltated. 
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thank you snipe!!! right now ive been busy but i go the intro done…
Introduction: 4782 B.C. what is to be known as South Africa…
Narrator: “In the time before Pharaohs and Kings… No one was more feared than Monkey Kahn… No one had ever seen him… only that they knew that once you did it was the last you ever saw of anything. He ruled all of the land destroying all in his way. No one could escape. No man, woman, or even child was safe from him… His mighty Empire spanned all over Africa. it wasn’t until Noambi a man in his peak… faced the ruler… and defeated him… The ruler retreated into the caves… and his Kingdom destroyed… Legend has it that the crown had a mystical jewel in it… able to transform a human into a monkey… the crown was lost millenniums ago… and the ruler forgotten”
that all i got so far…
hm not bad…just make sure you make a final draft with loads of description…
suggestions…hmmm…maybe add a future aspect…somehow open the time sphere more broadly then just the portion you want to include…if you can get a real good multi time story people will love the storyline and you can make it as complicated as you want…