I love the sleek and simple lineart of the first one, and the way you’ve coloured it in is just so stylish! The expression on her face is sweet too. And the colouring of the second one is gorgeous, so sleek and effective. Considering the style of the lineart, I think you’ve chosen the right direction in terms of the colouring of that one. And the last page of sketches are good too, I particularly like the giraffe. As others have said, you’ve got a unique style and I like it!