Yay! A new chapter! I thought Ariel only knew about sea creatures, but I guess Prince Eric must have told her about land animals. Nice job, too! I was surprised when the chef said “Rabbit stew”. I thought their menu should include seafood.
Anyway, I’m so glad you finally updated! I’ll get to the future ideas soon.
You liked that??
Sounds good…take your time.
Chapter 4
Alec spun round and round inside of the hat. The space around him was colorfully red and pink but in it all he was scared half to death. He had never been thrown into the hat before and this was something he would never forget. All around him were little windows. Occasionally a window would open and a rabbit would be thrown into the space only to be pulled out by a hand. Alec had just seen this take place for the fifth time when a nearby window opened close to him. A large hand grabbed him. With a sharp jerk he was pulled abruptly into bright sunlight!
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Alec was launched into a great flood of light. A child about ten was holding him with the most surprised look on his face. Alec quickly gathered in his surroundings. He was inside of some kids bedroom. The kid evidentially not expecting a bunny to pop out of his “hat” was quite shocked. With lightning speed Alec quickly dodged back into the hat without a second guess. He knew that whether or not the boy was nice he needed to be with Presto and not far far away. Again the weird space between worlds flashed before Alec’s eyes. He began searching for windows once again. Running through windows he would peep inside of them just to see some weird looking magician standing before the hat and not Presto. After two minutes of constant denial Alec just chose one and jumped through it.
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Chapter 6
Alec instantly smelled the aroma of London that struck his nostrils in full force. Maybe he was home? The very idea made his countenance brighten. But to his dismay as he looked around the area he was in was more like the alley’s more than the nice suburb homes. The aroma that had once surrounded him had faded into a yucky, foul smelling odor that brought with it a sense of danger and tragedy. He peered around at the darkness just as a shooting star overhead blazed across the sky. He watched the slow going star as it sailed across the sky. It seemed to get closer and closer to the ground and just as Alec realized it was going to hit somewhere nearby the star disappeared behind some houses nearby. Alec instantly started after it. Rushing along he caught a sight of the glow the star left and changing his course soon caught up with it. The star had fallen inside of a house window. But how could it? The window was a residential building. As Alec peered more closely at the building a loud barking awoke his thoughts. A large dog nearby was barking at the window creating quite the racket. Alec started forward towards the window just to get a peak at what he was witnessing. He jumped inside the lawn and with a single bound began his climb up the wall. Just as he reached the top of the second story window he noticed that the star had stopped to glow and was now a bright little light that was flying around the air outside the window. With a last grunt Alec reached the open window. What he saw inside shocked him to the core!
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Al-Bob?!?!?!!?!?! What is that star and where is Alec?!?! Is that Doug barking at him just like in Ratatouille? I’m sorry I couldn’t help, but it looks like you’ve done great without me! (in a good way) I am ready with new ideas and other stuff. I am PMing you right now.
Thanks Soue…i’ll PM you where Alec is and what the star “Thing” is…
Ooh…suspense. What is that star, I wonder…but maybe I’m better off reading about it later.
Anyway, sorry, Al-Bob, for not having gotten to the you-know-what crossover part yet…I just don’t know when I should jump in and how to make it work…'cause the story seems to be doing fine on its own at this time…
once i get to the end of this part you could jump in…it will be ready for a different Cross-over then.
Good stuff Al-bob
[slaps self]
I told myself i wouldn’t post another chapter until a certain date so that suspence could build but i can’t because i seem to have 3-4 chapters i want you guys to read;
Anywho here is Chapter 7…Chapters 8-10 will come out before 3/21 so relax.
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Chapter 7
Inside of the room was a green man no, a boy. He was flying around the room
with the greatest of ease as his spectators looking on in awe. The boy looked
very “woodsmany” if any word could describe him. At his waist was a large belt
which held many different instruments of war, civility, and other types of uses.
His clothes were like that of the leaves because they seemed to overlap each
other. His cap was like a straight point towards his face with a red feather
sticking out from the top. His features were marvelously chiseled. His rugged
looks made him look older then his true age should have been and his
muscular hands and legs made him appear to be the strongest boy in the
world. As he flew around the room Alec couldn’t help but wish that he too could
fly.
The “star” that Alec had seen now circled around the room and swooping
towards Alec starred at him! Alec realized that it wasn’t a star but a fairy! The
fairy starred at him and then flew back towards the green boy.
As Alec looked back at the boy the image of flying was so magnificent. Just the idea brought a soaring imagination into his eyes. As he watched the kids in the room talk he wondered about birds and flying. He wondered what exactly made one fly and if so what were the dynamic principles behind it. As Alec was thinking to himself the green boy had been thoroughly dumping a light “dust” on the kids. As Alec curiously watched they too began to fly around the room. Alec stood back away from the window astonished to see the kids flying just like the boy. He began to search for that light dust stuff so that he too could fly.
As he searched around the room he noticed the eldest of the kid’s top hat lying nearby. The situation was a puzzling one. On one hand was the opportunity to fly but on the other was a ticket home and freedom from this world of imaginary things. Alec sat dazed by the predicament. He finally decided that home was better then flying any day so he skipped over to the hat and with a single bound landed inside.
As he waited for something to happen he suddenly realized that he couldn’t go anywhere unless someone said the magic words! Shuddering with fright the poor bunny struggled to get a better position in the hat so that he could peer over the side but just as he was about to look the hat was taken by rough hands and with a loud whoosh it was lifted!
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Oh, so that’s what is was! Brilliant. Man, I could just picture cute little Alec Azam wishing to fly. (That would make great fanart). Can’t wait to see where this leads us next.
(P.S. You got 34 chapters already? Are you sure you need help? You seem to be doing fine independently.
oops…that is a typo. I have 3-4 chapters still in the bad left…but once i get those done with i have nothing so you guys are going to be needed to help me get more time to think of new ideas.
Soue-really liking your ideas…can’t wait to see it. Just don’t rush it…
BDD-can’t wait to see your chapters…but also please take your time.
I promise to take my time, Al-Bob Thanks for telling me ahead what this chapter would be like! I hope you guys like my chapter, it’s not exactly Disney… Keep postin’ !
Come on, Al-Bob, you really need to put another chapter on soon. I was like all typing up my chapter, thinking mine would be the finale or something. But no one’s posted! Al-Bob or BDD, you guys seriously need to post your things soon… PLEASE! I want to have mine on here!
Well, I sent mine to Al-Bob… Not to put the pressure on you or anything, Al-Bob.
Sorry…i’ve had a really busy week.
My High School Baseball team did a three day tournament…not to mention we were done with spring break so school was also a dilemna…
Okay, i’ll set a date and stick to it;
April 8th…that is when i will put the 1st chapter of BDD version of Enchanted…
Okay, i am officially losing track of my stories…i still have more chapters of this portion before i go into BDD…and her next part. Okay Soue…let your story get better and better. We will have you on soon but if you could check with me first that would be good. Otherwise i have 3 more chapters and then BDD may have 5-6 chapters so this might be about another 2 weeks before we get to you Soue…hopefully sooner. I don’t have plans on ended with you though Soue…i had some other ideas that might push the story for another 2-3 adaptations…
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Chapter 8
Alec had never been “flown” before but now as the elder boy held his hat in front of him Alec suddenly realized that they were flying! The boy who he soon came to know as John had decided to carry his hat while he learned how to fly. This only left one option for Alec. Fly along with the group or fall to the ground, He shuddered at the latter because he realized what would happen. As the group sped on into the night Alec became more and more aware of the surroundings. Things like tree’s began to change form and shape. They became more alive, yet still dead in a sense. They had more livid color and strength that one just couldn’t explain without seeing. Also the stars were much closer, almost a mile or two away from the atmosphere. As Alec watched the happenings the hat he was comfortably traveling in began to shake and move. Realizing the hour had come Alec promptly stuck his head out of the hat. John his possessor was the most surprised when he saw a bunny come out of his hat. A look of shock and astonishment was all that Alec could see. As Alec quickly began to climb out John quickly comforted him saying;
“There, there little bunny. I’m not going to hurt you. You stay in there and we can let you travel safely to Neverland.”
“Neverland??” Alec was puzzled by this word. “How could any place be never?”
As John pushed him into his hat the boy who Alec had seen when he first arrived swooped over with excellent agility. “What is it John?”
John looked up at the boy. “Oh, its a bunny Peter. Some sort of a bunny got stuck in my hat.”
“Well can’t you just dump it up?”
“What!!”
“Just kidding…my gang could use a bunny. Good stew…” And with that Peter winked at John and soared away leaving John agape at such a remark.
John turned to the poor bunny with a hurt look on his face. “Don’t worry, I won’t let them hurt you.”
Peter returning to the lead of the gang called back at his followers…
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Alec had never seen anything like Neverland. The trees were bright green with color, the sea full of life swaying too a fro like a cork on water. Everything seemed to have a different dimension then his old world. As he flew through the air a strange sound began to rise up to the fliers. A strange melodious yet strangely inhuman music which made the ears tingle and the heart yearn. As Alec peered over the hat he noticed just how high he was. The trees below were punt compared to the clouds they would burst out of. With each continual minute sudden downpours would erupt from above only to stop as soon as they had arisen. These continual bursts made Alec feel like laundry instead of a first class passenger. By the time he began to drop towards the ground he was thoroughly washed from head to foot and his fur was much ruffled and wild looking. As the small group of children began to approach the trees Alec could scarcely make out a group of kids waiting for them near a very large tree. They all were just like their leader Peter in their manner of dress but they all seemed more savage then Peter. Each one carried a small sword or ax. Each boy stood starring at the sky but as Alec watched one of the group suddenly looked away and started walking off with a bright light. Suddenly above the trees a large breeze shook Peter and John in their flight. A loud scream was heard and looking to his right he heard the girl Wendy started to fly out of control to the right while he and the rest went to the left. Peter tried in vain to get to her but the current was too strong and the group slowly drifted away from each other. As Peter and John talked Alec watched for the girl to reappear but as hard as he looked he couldn’t find her. Just as suddenly as it had come the wind settled down and the group minus the girl started towards the right. They had just traveled for about five minutes when Alec thought he saw a distant figure on the ground. John saw her too;
“Hurrah! She is safe and sound!”
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Alec watched Peter and John carry the unconscious Wendy to a nearby tree. They had concluded that a necklace on her chest had saved her life from the arrow but the concussion was going to be a great loss to her strength when she awoke. Alec had watched Peter call out names for his troops. He thoroughly investigated the culprit and the problem scolding the one who shot the arrow. The boy was very sad and tried to excuse himself by saying he mistook her for a swan or a lark. Peter then began a long speech to his men complaining about problems that he saw with their camp and other stuff. He had ended his speech with a emphasis on making Wendy feel welcome and happy when Wendy began to stir. Immediately the group dispersed to find things. Alec sat about watching as the entire gang built a wood house or more like a tea house for the girl. They were just finishing the curtains when the she opened her eyes. Peter and John helped her regain her senses and her strength. As Alec watched them do this one the boys picked him up with his small childish hands. “Hey guys! What should we do with this bunny?” After much conversion and disputing the “bunny” was put on the table as a pet because Peter had said that he looked better as a pet then as a dinner.
The house was completed just as Wendy began to rise to her feat. Her admiration for the house was only half as much as her joy at finding Alec sitting on the table. Alec was soon the center of attention as the children attempted to play with him. They tried to play dress-up and other kiddy games. These upset Alec because every outfit he tried was either too big or too fluffy. The worst one was the fox scarf they gave him to wear around his neck. This made him squirm with fright and he almost ran away.
The afternoon wore on and the small group of children playing with the bunny became less and less until only the youngest of the children was playing. Alec soon began to have a liking to this child only because he played gently but with purpose. They would play hide and seek and whenever they would find each other the younger boy would laugh. Soon Peter came into the room and going over to Wendy asked what would be for dinner. Wendy looked at him with disgust in her eyes and replied;
“Anything I server you is what dinner will be.”
“Well I can imagine some already prepared for you.”
“You can do that?”
“Yah, I can get a carrot for the bunny, Watch this!”
And with a frown in his forehead Peter imagined a carrot right next to Alec. The carrot was the best Alec had ever seen! Its color was ripe and full while the odor and taste was absolutely perfect. As the pair watched Alec eat the carrot Peter and Wendy talked about dinner. Soon a bell was wrung and all of the boys rushed into the clearing when Peter and Wendy had set up a large dinner feast full of good food. From pumpkin pie to chicken, raspberry sauce and strawberries. There was peaches and cold milk. There was Turkish delight (for Peter’s sake) and warm bread for Wendy. But just before they sat down Peter turned to John with a mischievous grin on his face. With a sudden movement he snatched the top hat from John’s head and flying over to Alec grabbed the poor bunny with his other hand. With a twirl of his hand the entire group settled down and became silent. Peter then bowed majestically and with a slight accent in his voice began;
“Ladies and…err…Wendy and Gentleman. I Peter the Great will now perform for you the greatest feat a magician is possible to do. I will transform this bunny into a great dessert you will all enjoy. Watch now!”
And with that Peter twirled his hand over the hat and with a swift motion placed the bunny inside of the hat. Alec just had time to think about it when Peter said the magic words.
“Alakazam!”
Alec disappeared once more into the cavernous space of the magic hat. As he disappeared from Neverland the last thing he heard was;
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