Really great and enjoyable chapters! The ending of Chapter 9 really got me surprised on where it left off. I can just imagine those Lost Boys fighting over Alec…it’s quite vivid. Keep it up.
Good, now for you part of the story.
next update hopefully by Saturday or Sunday…i have finals in 2-3 weeks so the story period is slowing down for now. But after that it will all be downhill.
[size=142]Chapter 11
The cold eerie magical world once again hit Alec's eyes. Lights iridescent and strange glowed around him as the space he was in almost felt like a zero-gravity container. Everything seemed lighter and easier to do. Around him were once again many different portals that could lead him to many different adventures. As he “swam” around the place (as it was indeed close to swimming) he noticed a few that were particularly puzzling. One shaped like a I with a small portal near the top had people in red Christmas suits running around. Another portal shaped like a big circular globe continually had water flowing in from the outside. The one that caught Alec's attention the most was the square one. Inside was a vast galaxy or at least a picture of one. The moon and stars were almost life-size and as Alec gazed at it a ship seemed to roar past with a small little cube like object hanging on for dear life. The little guy seemed to recognize the portal and with a single gesture waved at Alec. Alec twisting his nose as all rabbits do smiled and sheepishly waved back to the poor fella. Getting more and more use to the ins-an-outs of this place Alec quickly decided to test his luck with one of the more medieval portals. Picking one nearby he hoped over. The outside was full of rock and stones but the inside looked almost translucent. Puzzled by the portal Alec stopped to think before he jumped. After thinking for about 5 minutes he decided that nothing BAD could exactly happen beyond what he had already experienced so why not?With a last look over his shoulder Alec hoped over the wall and leaped in. [/size]
[size=142]Chapter 12
Instantly Alec was thrown into confusion. The rather rustic looking well had quickly turned grey and cold. As Alec dropped he felt a cold, dark, spooky feeling wrap itself around him and with a wild kick his entire body seemed to get into a major fit. As Alec screamed in his rabbit voice the decent that he had been doing suddenly stopped. Floating in mid-air Alec looked around himself and as he perceived his surrounding he felt a sort of blackness liquid floating around him. The darkness was so great that one could feel it as well as see it. As Alec looked around in fright a sudden colored object caught his attention. As Alec peered at it the object disappeared. Alec rubbed his eyes. Had the object been real or was it just the darkness playing tricks on him. As he starred in the direction of the light he once again noticed the faint light. Yes, now the light started to have color to it. The glow of color gradually grew into an orange light. Alec began to try and “swim” towards the light. Coming closer the light turned into a funnel like shape. As Alec got even closer he happily recognized a carrot! Swiftly coming close to his favorite snack he stuck his mouth forward to bite it. His mouth was almost on the carrot when it dissipated before his eyes. The orange glowing carrot suddenly dissolved into hundreds of little lights that seemed to fly around him. They were very small but they still frightened the poor bunny. They went faster and faster around him until they began to suddenly stick to his fur. Like a mosquito to a human the little lights jumped onto Alec's fur and with a quick pull dragged him upward. As Alec was being pulled upwards he heard below him loud shouts of joy and happiness. The sudden shout seemed to puzzle Alec. How could anyone have joy when these little “bugs” were covering the skin and freaking out the beholder? Soon two figures seemed to come out of nowhere and flying upwards as well as Alec seemed to begin to come into sight. The first figure was a rather fruffy clothed Prince. His puffed sleeves and colorfully striped clothes were rather midevil for Alec. In his hand was a bright sword which he was pointing upwards towards the roof. His face was almost chiseled from a rock due to its favorableness. As Alec looked at it he could almost promise that he was looking at the only prince charming in the world. The second figure was a lady of immense beauty. Her hair was fair and her face that of the perfect princess in distress. Her dress was also very midevilish and as Alec watched them come closer he could almost see them standing on a castle looking out over peasants and villages. The lady's dress was beautiful to the eyes of Alec. It was almost like pure flowing silver. It sparkled in the lights and seemed to blind the eyes of the beholder. In fact as Alec watched the brightness became more and more unbearable and as the figures began to pass by Alec was forced to close his eyes.
As the two figures rose they too encountered the bright little “bugs” but as the sword approached them they split around it creating a hole among them. As Alec watched he noticed that they seemed to go through the tunnel and that sooner or later they would find the only way out. With a last urge he reached towards the legs of the now passing figures. Just as the figures went out of reach a little squirrel suddenly appeared on the Prince's leg holding out its paw to Alec. With a large shove Alec thrust his hand into the squirrels. He quickly was pulled in and with the little guy clinging onto the prince as they went farther up and farther away.
As the prince led the way upwards through the dark tunnel Alec noticed a difference in the figures. Their faces began to change from their chiseled human faces into a weird sort of colored art face. They didn't get ugly but they simply changed into something different.
They soon began to see lights up ahead and as they approached them Alec once again was forced to cover his eyes. With blinding brightness they moved through the final portion of the tunnels and with a loud roar they came out. Alec slowly opened his eyes as the prince slowly lowered his hand and turning towards the lady seemed to stand still. His eyes were astonished by what he saw. [/size]
I like how you edited it with the better vocabulary and all that. It sounds much better through the way you put it. 
Well thank you!
I hoped you would like it…
[size=142]Chapter 13
All around him was magical and fair. The trees looked strange and yet at the same time more beautiful then anything he had seen in his life. The sky looked clear and the sun shone bright but nor harshly. In that minute
of time Alec suddenly realized what paradise was like.
The Prince gently took Alec and Pip (the squirrel) off his leg. They almost has ripped the clothes they had gripped so tightly. Thankfully the material was hard and the prince smiled when he thought of the damage they could have done in the other world he had just come from.
“There you are, Pip and little rabbit. Go join your friends. I bet they're waiting for you.”
Pip quickly scurried away but Alec unaccustomed to this beautiful place shyly walked around the garden and soon decided to follow after the Chipmunk. He had just rounded the bend that Pip was last seen when he suddenly stopped.
There in front of him were loads of animals! All talking, running, or doing something. Each seemed to be trying to work on something but now that Pip had returned all production was either stopped or wasted. The scene was rather chaotic due to the unnatural state of excitement and curiosity of the creatures. They had surrounded Pip and were asking him questions from every angle.
Back in the garden the Prince and Nancy (Princess) had just settled next to a large bench.
“You know, its weird.” Nancy started. “But I remember seeing that chipmunk just some moments ago, and you know him rather well.”
“Yes, I do.” Answered the Prince.
“Then what I can't understand is that Bunny. He just...came out of nowhere didn't he?”
The prince chuckled when he thought of it. “He must have jumped into the well on accident. Poor fellow must have a curiosity as large as his appetite. That world we just came from is not nice to his kind. They would have made him dinner or made him a pet. He is a very naïve creature but also very cute. Well, at least we are gone from that world Nancy. Now, let us get ready for our royal weeding. Shall we?”
Nancy and the Prince Edward slowly made off for the Castle and their coming weeding.
Alec was in a pickle. The animals had all but asked questions of poor Pip until he was blue in the face and then seeing he would answer no more turned on Alec who Pip said was with him. They had crowded around him and asked so many questions;
“What was it like?”
“Where you scared?”
“Does it really stink in that world?”
“What was the color of the sky?”
“Do humans really have large noses?”
“Do humans have...What is the color of gowns?”
“Do humans wear gowns anymore?”
Finally one animal roughly pulled Alec aside. This creature was a large rabbit not much different then himself.
“I have seen many rabbits before but none quite like you.” He said. “My name is Axle leader of the rabbit clan here in Andalasia. I would like to welcome you to our home.”
Alec simply nodded and attempting to speak for the first time said;
“T..th..tha..nk you. I don't..really know what to say.”
“Well that's alright,” said the rabbit. “Whatever you can't say...we can say it for you!”
And with a swing of his hand the entire population of creatures
standing around Alec yelled; “WELCOME TO ANDALASIA!!!” Wild screams of delight and happiness poured out from the group. Again questions were put forth to Alec but by this time he had been pushed away by the Axle to a nearby clearing. As they walked towards the spot he conversed with Alec about the other world and about humans. Alec couldn’t answer all of the questions although he could answer some. Soon they arrived at the clearing. There some birds and chipmunks were working. A large bird soon came forth.
“Ah, Axle. I was expecting you to join us last week. I thought you had forgotten.” The bird pipped in a demanding sort of voice.
Axle laughed. “Margaret, I helped you last week. Don't you remember?”
Margaret stared at him even more coldly. “No, and don't try to fool me with such banter, You and I both know you are a lazy slob. But anyhow you have brought some fool to take your place no doubt. What is your name?”
Alec was quite puzzled and before he could reply Axle had done it for him.
“This bunny's name is Alec.” He said.
Margaret looked Alec over then looking back at Axle said; “He'll do. Be off with you know. I don't want to hear or see of you until 3 days from now. Understand??”
Axle bowed gentleman like and quickly hopped away. Alec who had bee quite confused was now quite worried. As the bird pushed him towards a nearby “project” she was asking him more questions.
“Now my dear Alec. Do you know who Giselle is?”
(blank face)
“Do you know what happened to Giselle?”
(blank face)
“Are you good at making dresses or doing hair?”
This time Alec scrunched his nose and face into a frown. He had never done such a thing in his life. But Margaret took it for a different answer.
“Ah, so you have done those things. I can see you don't like it but since you have some experience you shall be put to those tasks.”
Margaret then quickly led Alec to a nearby tree and explained what he was supposed to do. Alec heard little or nothing of what she said because all he could think about was his home and the hat that would take him there. Soon as they came around a bend Alec saw what Dress making looked like. A small linen dress was actually being cerated by the small creatures in the middle of the garden.
Margaret looked at him; “A troll destroyed our last one so we had to restart. But now that you're here we should get done sooner then before. Alright...you.....over....there.” Alec soon lost hearing for his eyes had suddenly gazed upon something so marvelous that it almost seemed unreal. There at the head of the dress was a large top hat. Without a second thought Alec darted forward past the alarmed Margaret, and with a single bound landed on the top of the dress.
“OH MY!!!” Exclaimed Margaret. “GET DOWN YOU BUNNY!”
But Alec simple flipped over the hat in his hand and threw it to the ground. Before the hat hit the ground he was gone into the portal once again.[/size]
It’s well rewritten and the details are well brought out, but there is one mistake I would like to point out.
Actually, their world is called “Andalasia”. Enchanted is just the title of the movie.
But nonetheless, I love it.
Thanks…i guessed their land was enchanted…i’ll make sure to edit that.
I read Chapter 13 (the one about Andalusia), and I can discern you have a simple, but clear and concise writing style. I wonder what Alec is doing in the world of Enchanted (which probably means I should start from the beginning), but I’m getting a sort of multi-verse story coming from you, something like Narnia or Bill & Ted’s Excellent Adventure. Which sounds interesting to me!
I like how you gave character to Alex, the bunny leader, and Margaret, the authoritative bird. It was only a few paragraphs, but I gained an insight into their personality. Good job!
Right, I’ll start from the beginning then. By the way, how did you get your font sizes that big? 
the way i change the font size is quite simple…
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I find that different sizes help make the stories seem longer and are more easier to read due to easier viewable size.
Plus its kinda fun to change things up a little.
thanks for the review…now i have a coulpe readers who reviewed.
Update; That is all that i have planned for now. Soue should be sending in his episode in the coming week. After that i need to figure out how to wrap this wild story up without having loose strings attached.
So far the chapters for Presto Chango go as follows;
1-Intro, Yagoobian
2-Little Mermaid
3-Little Mermaid
4-The Hat Portal
5-Boys Bedroom
6-England
7-The Star
8-Flying
9-Off to Netherland
10-The Death, Reserection, and Home.
11-More Portals
12-The Well
13-Enchanted
Okay, Al-Bob I see that it’s my turn. Sending the first chapter of my part.
P.S. Can I give the readers hint of what mine would be like? Please…well I guess it’ll be posted soon. Let me give you the same hint I gave you earlier: It’s not Disney/Pixar!
Lets not give it away too soon…lets let the readers get curious about it before we give it away.
[size=167]Chapter 14[/size]
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Alec dusted himself off as he once again landed inside of the portal. The magician’s hat was still in his hands but as Alec looking inside all he saw was black nothingness. Another thing that had been remained was the radiant glow that had settled around Alec from Andalasia. This glow was still encircling him although as he watched it slowly began to disappear. As his eyes settled down he noticed many portals all around him. Figuring that the better looking portal might be the bettter choice he looked around for one. After 5 minutes of looking around he spotted a nice portal with a beautiful garden on the other side. Loking into the portal Alec suddenly had the wanting to get inside. The garden was lush but also small in complection. Roses were being grown along a brick wall in the back while lillies and Daisies crowded the front. Alec felt himself drawn to this beautiful scene. With a gleeful leap he jumped in.
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This isn’t all I sent you! Where’s Chapter 15?
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i’ve only edited your part to this point, i should get 2-3 more chapters just for the one chapter you sent me…don’t worry.
Okay, here is the next chapter…Soue i’m having trouble clearly writting this one but i think i’m doing okay,
Oh, one update…
[size=159]It is now official…since i am going to be gone for the summer starting June 6th Bright Dot-Dasher has accepted my proposal to take over the writting job for this story…Thanks BDD[/size]
[size=142]Chapter 16
A wave of different senses swept over Alec. The first one was a serious wave of heat while the other was a strong sweet smell that he recognized. This smell was a carrot situated ever so daintily on a nearby table. Alec fully immersed in his surroundings and the wonderful beauty of this place happily leaped onto the table and ate the carrot. As he finished his meal his eyes wandered to where he had been a few minutes ago. He noticed that in his haste he had dropped the hat he had brought with him. As he searched around for it he noticed an open door leading out of the garden. What if the hat flew away? Now how would he get home? Alec slumped into the garden chair and decided to wait and see what might happen. He slowly dozed off to sleep.
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Now that I’ve seen that movie over again, I’ve realized maybe it is an island. Sorry for any confusion earlier.
Okay, so now Al-Bob has officially put me in charge of this fanfic temporarily while he’s gone.
The following chapter is by soue1313.
Chapter 15
Alec fell himself twirling through the portal once more. Then it stopped. He opened his eyes to see that he had landed in a garden behind a small house. Looking around, he realized the hat he had come out of was now blowing away. Now how would he get home! Glancing down, he saw something he had missed for a very long time: a carrot. Alec knew someone wouldn’t care if they noticed a carrot was missing. I mean, he was hungry.
He gobbled up that carrot in no time at all.[/b] Then something caught his eye- and curiosity. Something was flying through the air like a bullet. A shooting star? Maybe this one would take him home. Then Alec realized where he was. A city. Not like the cities in England, though. This one was different. It seemed familiar.
Then it hit him. The rabbit recalled that he and Presto had come here before. To do a show, he remembered. Presto said it was called New York City. But Alec had no idea how he would find his way alone. Then he remembered: Follow the shooting star. He must follow that star- there was no chance unless he took one. Quickly and curiously, the alert rabbit found it and dashed after it. Before long he watched it crash into a nearby construction site.
Alec hopped over to the site, and immediately noticed that it was not a shooting star, but a large cube. Mostly black but smeared with dirt from the crash. It was emitting an eerie green light and seemed as if it was made of the inner workings of a computer.
Suddenly Alec realized he was in danger.
Sorry, I don’t know how to make the font bigger. 
Ugh…I’m sorry about all the mistakes I put in there! I’m glad you just copied and pasted the chapter right into your post. No changes, unlike Al-Bob. (No offense, Al-Bob, it’s just that some of the important parts I put in were edited out!) Do you want me to copy and paste it into a post with all the stuff fixed?
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