Psyche OS X

Aww… you guys… <3 I honestly didn’t think you were all that excited to keep reading it, which makes me feel worse about not making any headway with it the last half a year or so. (Dang, has it really been that long…?! :open_mouth:)

Seriously, you’re too sweet. I can’t believe that the one story I thought would be my most controversial ended up being the one people kept coming back for. I’ll definitely be thinking over some plot points to move the story ahead, again not quite sure when you’ll actually see the continuation of it, but we’ll see. :slight_smile:

Awww, shucks… :blush: You really know how to flatter me, don’t you? :stuck_out_tongue:

I really want this to come to a nice end, considering just how much I wrote, it deserves a good ending. You’ve definitely encouraged me to at least try to get this story off of the ground and swirling back around in my brain, so we’ll see what happens. :wink:

Well, I haven’t really updated it thinking it wasn’t getting read all that much over here, but I might go and add the next chapter anyway, now that you’ve reminded me. :stuck_out_tongue:

little chef

Yes, have you gotten enough inspiration yet? :smiley: I want to read more, too! Take all the time you need, as long as you don’t drop it :wink: It’s wayyyy too lovely to drop!

Hopefully you continue this summer! I wanna know what happens! :smiley:

I hate to say it, but you’ve given me a reason to feel guilty over the hiatus I took from the forums for nearly a year. I honestly wish I could have kept up with this thread before; your story is so beautiful! I really, truly love how you’ve written it, especially with clever little inserts here and there (namely, “Probe 1 just found out she’s positive” and “knight in rusty armor” and so on). I even almost cried at some parts, and I have a heart of stone (in my opinion)! It’s simply breathtaking, and even all I’m writing here can’t describe my feelings for this. It’s phenomenal!

Oh, and I couldn’t help but wonder at one point that (this may be a major spoiler) [spoil]perhaps WALL•E’s internal memory could also somehow be transferred into a human being…perhaps a certain newborn one! <img src=“{SMILIES_PATH}/love2.gif” alt=“:loves:” title="In

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As an aspiring writer, I’m officially inspired yet intimidated (only because I’m trying to lift one of my WALL•E fan-fics I’ve been working on for so long off the ground). I can’t wait to read on!

There needs to be a “happy cry” emoticon on here like on dA, because it needs to be used right here! <3

Eve: I agree! The “Probe One just found out she’s positive” line really made me jump inside.

Just want to bump this thread for newcomers to discover. I know you’re on a HTTYD-fan-roll, little_chef, but I’m waiting in anticipation for the conclusion of this story! :stuck_out_tongue: This was one of the first fanfics I followed on the forums (next to TSS’ 'Incredibles Trilogy) and it’s close to a year since you started it. Time to bring Eve and Alex home! :wink:

I was close to tears that was so beautiful. Please finish it. Please?

Oh my goodness… thank you, Pizza Planet Truck! 8’D I’m honestly flattered!

I’ve been writing out more plot lines in my big ol’ fanfiction planning notebook over the week, so if I can get my homework done early this week I might try to plug some new words into this bad boy. It needs to have a definite ending, and I think I’m coming to a good idea of how I’m going to do that. :wink:

Thanks so much for all the continued support, you guys. I still can’t believe you’re all waiting so eagerly for this… the one story I thought would be a total flop ended up being a site favorite. <3

little chef

Aw… no thanks for me? :frowning: I bumped this thread on the last page… anyway, yes, you must get crackin’ and finish this epic tale of romance, identity and betrayal! :sunglasses:

Ahh!..- every time this thread gets a bump, I think you’ve updated, lol.
I, too, have to know what happens next! I have faith that you can finish this story as beautifully as you’ve told it so far. :smiley:

Well, hey, guess what? I’m bumping this thread… because I actually have an update! :smiley:

I finished Chapter 12, and I hope it’s as good as what you’ve read so far. It’s been a little strange trying to get back into it, but I’m determined to work on this and get it finished! One more chapter to go, and I’ve pretty much got it mapped out in my head already!

Enjoy, guys! And thanks so much for sticking this out with me. I’m so sorry this didn’t get updated sooner! D:


Chapter 12, Last Part

An hour or more had passed, and Mo was still sitting in the waiting room with his headphones shoved into his ears in an attempt to get his mind off of what was going on. However, it was nearly impossible not to think about with nurses dashing in and out of the maternity ward every five minutes or so, and he couldn’t help but begin to wonder if something was going wrong.

He sank lower in his seat and cranked the volume up higher. Don’t get nervous. She’s probably fine. Maybe it’s all normal when someone has a baby.

His eyes shot up to follow a random nurse as she walked toward the intensive care ward, and she flashed him a quick smile as she walked by. He gave a faint smile back and watched as she continued on, greeting another young man as she disappeared into the room. Mo’s eyes landed on the man she had just greeted, and he immediately noticed the slightly confused look on his face as he stood there in the middle of the atrium that branched off into various wards of the hospital, as if he hadn’t a clue where he was supposed to go.

But it wasn’t the fact that the man seemed lost that grabbed Mo’s attention, it was that he looked oddly - and eerily - familiar.

A receptionist at the round desk in the middle of the atrium seemed to notice the confused man as well, and she called for his attention to ask if he needed any guidance. Mo carefully kept his eye on this man, watching as he wandered to the desk and placed his hands on top of it, then hesitated to speak to the receptionist.

“You wouldn’t… happen to know if anyone by the name of Eve McCrea is in the maternity ward, would you?” he finally managed. Mo carefully watched as the nurse went through a digital list on the computer in front of her. Her face twisted into an expression of confusion, and she looked back up at the young man.

“No, there’s no one by that name here,” she replied. The man’s shoulder’s slumped.

Mo furrowed his brow. Why in the world would that random guy want to know where Eve is?

“Well then… uhh, did a young woman with blonde hair get admitted here today?” he further wondered, and Mo shifted forward in his seat in curiosity.

“Yes,” the nurse slowly replied, “but she’s listed here as Rylee Landon.”

Mo was struck with confusion. Who the heck was Rylee Landon?

“Where is she being kept?” the man wondered, and the nurse sweetly gave him the room number he was looking for. As he headed off down the hall, Mo saw him stopping right in front of the door to Eve’s room in the maternity ward, and almost without thinking he shot out of his seat and ran down the hall, then clamped a hand over the man’s shoulder before he could turn the handle.

“No!” the word burst from his mouth, and the man jumped several feet in the air from being surprised.

“Kid, you just about gave me a heart attack,” the man gasped before wrenching Mo’s hand off of his shoulder. “And what do you mean, ‘no!’?”

“You stay away from Eve,” Mo spat. “She’s not Rylee Landon, whoever the hell that is, and I’m pretty sure she wouldn’t want some stranger to show up while she’s in the middle of-” The man shook his head and held up his hands to silence the angry teen.

“I know she’s not Rylee Landon,” he calmly interjected, “and I’m no stranger, either. It’s me, Alex O’Neill. Remember?”

Mo studied the man’s face for a minute, and suddenly recognized him. How could he have not seen it was him before? It was probably because there was something different about him, but at the moment he couldn’t entirely place his finger on what exactly that difference was.

Before either one could say anything else, noises from inside the room seized their attention. In between the loud, frantic chattering of nurses, they could hear pitiful groans that sounded like WALL•E, as well as Eve gasping for breath periodically.

But it was the sound of a newborn baby’s cry that rang out above all else, capturing and gripping both Mo and Alex’s pounding hearts and holding them firmly to the ground where they were standing.

The two looked at each other, and for the first time since they’d known the other, they exchanged a smile.

“That’s… that’s my baby,” Alex breathed, saying it more to himself than to Mo. He reached down for the door handle and pushed it open, this time without protest from Mo, and the two carefully stepped into the room. The eyes of McCrea, WALL•E, and all of the nurses shot up to meet them, and while the nurses smiled upon recognizing Alex as the baby’s father, the countenance of WALL•E and McCrea weren’t so welcoming.

“What are you doing in here?!” McCrea cried, getting up from his seat. Alex entirely ignored him and walked over to Eve’s bed side. “You leave her alone. She’s been through a lot and I don’t want you making anything worse!”

“Brandon,” came Eve’s tired, quiet voice. McCrea looked down at her and saw the calm, peaceful look that played in her eyes, despite how exhausted she was. “It’s okay. Alex isn’t going to hurt anything. I wanted him here, anyway.”

Upon hearing that, WALL•E let out an angry blip. He never wanted Alex there!

Some of the nurses began to head out of the room with the baby in their hands, and told Alex and Eve that they’d be back shortly with him after they did some testing to make sure he was okay. Eve reached over to take Alex’s hand at the words, and she let out a small smile.

“So it really is a boy, then?” she timidly asked. The nurse holding the baby grinned broadly before disappearing out the door.

“It sure is,” she replied, then disappeared moments later with a few of the others. Alex and Eve looked at each other in excitement, and Alex even leaned down to place a kiss on her cheek. Mo looked away and rolled his eyes, mumbling something under his breath about keeping their mouths to themselves, but McCrea happened to overhear him and quietly reprimanded him for it.

WALL•E, on the other hand, felt himself being torn to pieces by the simple gesture.

For the first time in his existence, he saw someone else displaying blatant romantic affection for Eve.

His Eve.

And he thought he’d come to terms with all this, too. She was a human, he was a robot. He knew that. He knew things were different now, and that she could only be loved in that way by another human.

But to actually see it… it broke his heart; or, whatever sort of malfunctioned partition of his programming that caused him to feel emotion. He didn’t have a heart, realistically.

Hypothetically though, he did. And it shattered to pieces just like any human, fleshly heart would.


After the nurses had cleaned off the baby and made sure all of his vital signs looked good, they dressed him and prepared him to be taken back in the other room to meet his parents. One nurse who’d been clothing him suddenly noticed that his eyes were wide open and searching the ceiling.

She was surprised when she realized that his left eye was brown… but his other eye was blue.

Those things happen, I suppose, she thought as she reached for a small, soft hat to slip over his head rich with dark hair; but she noticed as she moved her hand past his right side that he didn’t even seem to notice.

She paused, then moved her hand in front of the baby’s right eye and wiggled her fingers. She waved her hand back and forth, and though the baby’s eyes were open wide and he was fully alert, he didn’t appear to be responding to the movement.

That’s… odd, she thought to herself, reaching for the hat again, which she’d placed to the right of him. As her hand brushed his shoulder, however, he suddenly started to wail.

The other nurses turned to look when they heard the baby start crying, and asked what had happened. When the one dressing the baby explained she’d only simply touched his shoulder, they all exchanged confused glances.

“It’s almost like he can’t… he can’t see out of his right eye,” she managed. Another nurse did the same gestures with her hand over the baby’s face and got the same results. She shook her head and lifted the baby into her hands.

“Let’s have the doctor look at him,” she suggested. “He’ll probably be able to tell us what’s going on here.”


:frowning: :frowning: :frowning: :frowning: Poor Wall-E. I guess that is why I like this story so much. I feel sad for my favorite Pixar Character.

I’m going out on a limb, but I am going to guess this is how it ends:

Eve will become a robot again and live happily ever after with Wall-E

Yay! Psyche OS X has finally returned!!! fireworks fly

I gotta say, this was an awesome chapter. Great finish to it, and now I want to know what’s wrong with the baby.

At least you’re finally bringing it to a close with only one more chapter. As for me, I’ve got a whopping four chapters to go (three if I consider to merge in some details).

Omigosh IT’S BACK! celebrates I’m really glad you got to updating it.
Poor WALL-E…I really like those lines you wrote about how his “heart” broke. I really feel for him. Hopefully he’ll realize that Eve still loves him and needs him, just in a different way, and that just because she doesn’t love him romantically doesn’t mean she’ll love him any less as a best friend (I am reminded from a long time ago when Eve told WALL-E it’s a different kind of love, and WALL-E responded that he hates Alex…those just came to me as I was reading this chapter as if I’m in WALL-E’s mind with that flashback.) But of course, I can understand it still is hard for him to let her go a little bit.

And earlier when Alex breathed out, “That’s…that’s my baby.”…Wow. Just…wow. I can feel the emotion through that simple line. This story feels so believably real!
Hahaha, I like how Mo muttered something about keeping their mouths to themselves…

Oh, man I hope nothing’s too wrong with the baby…

Keep it up! This is a great update and well worth the wait!

Pizza Planet Truck: Well, if you’re not already familiar with my style of writing by now, you should have come to expect the unexpected from me and my writing. :wink: I’ll let you guys speculate all you want, that’s completely cool with me! But what will actually end up happening is the real mystery to all of you! :stuck_out_tongue:

JSWeC: I knew you’d be excited to see this updated! I’m really excited, too! :smiley: I’ve got a lot of stuff to explain in one chapter, and hopefully I’ll be able to wrap everything up nicely with it. :slight_smile:

Well, at least you know how many chapters you still have left to work on! For a while I kept wondering if this stupid thing was ever going to end! :laughing:

BDD: It’s so good to see you back, hun! I always look forward to your reviews, especially since you’ve been one of those who’ve followed this right from the get-go!

The whole ‘heart-breaking’ thing with WALL-E is quite hard to explain. It’s almost like… I can feel it while I’m writing it, and I can see it in different parts of the film, but to actually put that into words is so difficult. I’m glad to see I’ve brought it across, though; not just here but in other parts of the story, as well.

Believability is definitely something I strive for. :slight_smile: And as I said to JSWeC, I’ve got a lot of things to explain and make clear, especially concerning the baby, and hopefully will be able to cover it all in the next chapter.


I’ve been working on Ch. 13 for the past hour or so, and I’m not sure if I’ll have enough written to post tonight (it’s already 1:10 AM xDDD), but hopefully having that head-start will help me write more tomorrow. I really just want to get this thing completed as fast as possible, so I’ll feel better about it and so will you. :stuck_out_tongue: Keep an eye out for updates, because I can assure you, they’re coming! :wink:

little chef

I had restlessly encountered all the chapters in your novel, and it was AMAZING! Wow, i mean, seriously, this could end up being a sequel, a much more dramatic, emotional sequel. You really went in with flying colors on this one!

At last… the epic saga of little_chef is now coming to a close! :smiley:

I really can’t believe it’s been two years since you’ve started the fanfic and all of us have been following it… it has literally been a journey which is now going to be concluded in your next and final chapter. :`-(

But first, this penultimate one… (I just realised Eve has ‘been’ in the maternity ward for months! :stuck_out_tongue:)

I liked how Mo is so defensive of Eve, and how Auto has changed from his cold, heartless character as a robot to a warm and loving human father. I can see Brandon is mistrustful of him, and Wall-E…

My word, he must be utterly devastated. I felt so sorry for the poor guy when I read the bit about his heart being broken in half as if he were a human. Personally, I’m quite upset that he is now replaced by Auto as the love of Eve’s life (are you an Auto x Eve shipper by the way?). I wonder how you are going to wrap this up while leaving Wall-E off on a good note. Will he come to accept his new place in Eve’s world now? Will they ever return to their former selves, or will they be humans for the rest of their lives? What will happen to the baby (who curiously, is one-eyed like his father)? Will Mo ever stop throwing trantums?

:neutral_face:

All will be revealed (and hopefully, satisfyingly completed) in the next chapter!

Very nicely done little_chef! I (and I’m sure quite a few other members here) have been eagerly waiting for the dramatic conclusion to this fan fic, and this chapter definitely continues your writing style and all the suspense that comes with it :wink: Great job, can’t wait to read the last chapter! :smiley:

Oy, I didn’t realize there were several “new” reviews on this that I never commented on. Whoops. xD Thanks for the awesome comments, guys!

…So um, how would you guys feel if I told you that I might have a new update (or the entire final chapter) posted soon? :slight_smile:

little chef

Fireworks fly :smiley: .