Ratatouille 2

It’s about Henri Lingiuni, who doesn’t exist yet due to my writer’s block :unamused:

But do read the parts that are currently up :wink: Find it in my signature

Looks good so far, but I think it would look a whole lot better if not written in script form. :stuck_out_tongue: But that’s just me.

I wrote it in script because that’s how people give actors their lines. But two of my fanfics will NOT be in script form.

I actually like it (which is rare for fan-fics) and I like the script format. Keep it up! :slight_smile:
Oh, and welcome to Pixar Planet!

I like it so far. Can’t wait to see the rest! :smiley:

The plot is very intresting! Keep it up!

dies of flattery JUST KIDDING!

I’ll take that as a thanks. Well, you’re welcome!

Part two is up! Henri makes his debut, but as a 6 year old.

remy_must_save_henri: I read the prologue and beginning chapter and I must say that they’re quite interesting! I like how you incorporated the “Remy-freezing-in-space” moment into your story. Overall, it makes for an entertaining read. :wink:

By the way, I just have to say that this part is absolutely classic:

[spoil]Colette: My grandfather’s name was Remy. But he died of liver failure.[/spoil]

Made me crack up, it did. :laughing:

– Mitch

Thanks! And the thing with [spoil]Remy Tatou dying of liver failure[/spoil] was really something random, but is supposed to be funny.

One minor note: Ratatouille took place in September 2007.

I’m loving this story! I can’t wait to see the rest!

No it didn’t. Ego had a typewriter, not a computer. Also, the clothes that the characters wear are like what it was in th 60s/70s (my father told me that)

Okay. :confused:

I can’t wait to see it when you’re done!

BTW, have any of you people noticed that Lion-King reference in Part Two? Hint: Henri says this line.

I will stick more references throughout the whole story and I won’t tell you about them. The one above is just to make you guys look sharper in the future.