Well, it got a polite chuckle out of me, but you’re gonna have to do better than that, I’m afraid. 
Duh da dun…
Guys, I was 10 when I wrote this. I sucked at writing. Now almost 3 years later, I like the idea I had for it. The idea was where the world of Pixar came to life and how people reacted to it and how Pixar characters got into society. I’m thinking about continuing it, or restarting it. Should I?
I think whatever works for you the best would be fine with me.