Wow, a great way to end the story BBD. One of the best cross-over fanfics I have ever read in my life. You really did a nice job. I am glad they all ended up as great friends. Sweet story too.
Great finish…4.5/5 in my books…an excellent story that would keep any adventure reader glued…
Really cool, BDD! 
Good story line, very good. I’ve read up to part 9. I love the dialogue. It sounds just like the characters. I think that’s been my favorite part so far, especially that first scene between Violet and Carmen. I could so picture that happening! It really sounded like them. It’s an interesting cross-over, I can’t wait to see how it turns out.
Thanks so much, violet parr! 
I’m glad you like it so far.
You really think so? I’ve always worried that they wouldn’t sound like them…
Again, thanks!
Hay, BDD! Don’t worry, I didn’t forget about you fanfic, I’ve just been really busy. I’m up to chapter 21. Awesome so far (and kinda funny too 
) I wonder if there’s something behind the charm bracelets…
Thank you, violet parr. Oh, don’t worry, take your time. I’d rather have someone read it when they want to and when they have time than feel rushed like they have to read it as if it were assigned. 
It’s great to know you’re enjoying it!
Great job on part 27, BDD! It was your best chapter yet! Good for you using “Ultra Violet” as Violet’s hero alias. I absolutely adore that name! As the others have said,It could pose some problems with her secret identity, but I’m sure that could be worked out (I’m trying to come up with something myself). Really cool and intense chapter, BDD. I can’t wait to read more!
P.S. I’m starting to wonder if [spoil]Gradenko has brought all three of them to the island on purpose, that it wasn’t just an accident.[/spoil]
Very good story, BDD! REALLY COOL!!! Wonderful ending. (I like how you fit Tony Rydinger in there in the end ) It was an easy-reader, but not too under-done, very nice balance. Rule of thumb for writing: don’t make your story line so complex that it’s hard to under stand; but also don’t over-simplify it-- and you NAILED IT throughout almost the entire story! The only thing is that some points could have been followed through a little more. But, then the story might have seemed a little overwhelming, so I won’t criticise too much.
Here’s my review–
Story-9/10
Characters-8.7/10
Consistency and follow-through-8.4/10
Creativity and Originality- 9.8/10
Spelling-10/10
Over-all score- 9.2/10
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Thanks so much, violet parr! I’m really glad you liked it, and thanks for the comments and critiques and final review! It means a lot to me that you were willing to read it and tell me what you think, including constructive criticism. I know there are some things I need to work on in storywriting (which is why I write fanfiction to practice for writing real novels sometime in the future) and the opinions of readers like you are very helpful. Again, thank you!
BTW, The Star Swordsman and Al-Bob: Thanks again to you guys, too.
You’re welcome BDD.
Your welcome…it was fun reading the story more then it ever was reviewing the story.