Triangolo D'Amore

I really liked this chapter too! What’s better than drama is the aftermath of it. :wink:

^^^ That broke my heart :cry: but I love it. :wink: o_0

^^^ I love the “never saw a tomorrow” part. <3

Are the other residents angry at Sally? Since no one talked to her and how Flo acted towards her. :confused:

You liked the first two parts better but I actually liked the last two better! Especially the conversation with Flo. The ending to this chapter was like the ultimate cliff hanger. I keep trying to imagine Sally’s reaction.

And about your author’s note, that just makes me more excited to see what you now have planned. :wink: :smiley:

Poor Sally and Lightning! So she didn’t knew he had followed her to Italy. I want to know what is gonna do Sally now she knows the truth but she doesn’t know Lightning never cheated on her. I can’t wait to read more :smiley: Update soon please! you always let us asking for more!!! 8D

pixarmilan: Yes, I wanted to show the shift in Sally’s feelings so I’m happy that was the impression I gave. Thanks so much!

Paulisha: LOL, oh the angst! :laughing: Yes! That is one of my favourite lines from it too. <3 Yes, the residents who are aware of it are somewhat angry because they know how Lightning went after her and didn’t cheat etc. Really? Good to know! I love keeping the thoughts in your mind even after reading. :sunglasses: Oh! And about the ending…I thought of an epic idea last night so it’ll be all good. OK, maybe not ‘epic’ but it was better than the ideas I had, which I will reveal at the end of the story.

Destiny: Thanks very much! I’ll do my best! :mrgreen:

I refuse to leave a story unfinished!! OK, so I’m sorry for the sudden, unexplained disappearance everybody. Honestly, I was just having a case of what I like to describe as “smalltownitis” and “moodyteen syndrome”. :laughing: Basically I was just having a phase where I felt not necessarily depressed, just very withdrawn. I didn’t feel like talking to anyone at school, at home or even online. Therefore I lost a lot of motivation and nothing I attempted to write felt good enough. I gave up for at least a week, and it was hard picking up the pen to get back it, but I did! Not my best chapter but I’m glad I made my return to this story and hopefully you guys will still be wanting to read. :blush: If you are, we left off at the point where Sally just discovered that Lightning went to Italy to try and find her. One of the biggest questions is about to be answered. :sunglasses:

Chapter Thirteen – “Bloccato” (Locked)

Sally’s heart stopped mid-beat. Her lips fell away limply from the metal fuel can. Flo had left to serve another customer, but her words hung ominously in the air. Lightning had followed her to Italy.

How was that possible? Unless he had arrived after her swift departure… But that left a loophole; he had been home when she got back. Or had he?

Something just wasn’t right, it wasn’t calculating in her mind. There was a missing piece to this rollercoaster of events. It was unfathomable to her where the twist lay hidden but she didn’t mind. All she could think was that there was still a glimmer of hope for Lightning and her.

“Afternoon, Sally.”

Her eyes jerked upwards to find a car gazing at her. “Oh! Sheriff, hello,” she smiled tightly at the elder car.

“Would you be able to help me out at court today?” he asked in a dutiful tone.

“Uh, yes, I suppose. What is it?”

“Just a minor case,” he informed her, “I’d like to run a polygraph though, and we need the presence of a lawyer.”

“You mean… like a lie detector test?”

He answered flatly, “Yes.”

“Oh, I don’t know,” she said nervously, “I’ve never actually worked the machine. I didn’t even know we had one!”

“I think you can handle it. Doc and I used to haul it out on occasion. It’s a two-car job; I’ll need your help.”

She mulled the idea for a moment. “Alright, when do you need me?”

Sheriff smiled appreciatively, “Well, I got some help setting it up already, so half an hour fine with you?”

“Sure, I’ll be there.”

The time flew by, and somehow she managed to be just a tad late as normal. Sally rushed to the courtroom, swinging open the heavy doors in a fluster. She let out a soft gasp as she set sight on the group waiting inside.

The room was empty except for four other cars. Straight ahead she saw Sheriff with the polygraph just behind him. On the right was one of the twins, Tia she guessed based on the neon paintjob. Beside Tia was a delinquent, DJ she thought she’d heard him be called. And over to the left was Lightning, his eyes staring her down like she was the most heartless thing he’d ever seen.

She swallowed hard and made her drive of shame to the front. She already had a good idea where this situation was going; it didn’t take years of law school to figure that much out.

Sally parked over by the polygraph and nodded for Sheriff to begin.

“Tia Myers and Devin Johnson,” he announced clearly, “You two are facing charges from Lightning McQueen for break and enter. He also holds evidence that you were at fault for damage to his stereo and destruction to his living room. Do you accept guilt for these accusations?”

“Hell no! We didn’t do any of that!” DJ spat rudely. Tia shook her hood in agreement with him.

“Then you’ll be OK with taking a quick polygraph test?” Sheriff demanded.

DJ chortled, “A what?”

“Hook them up please, Sally.” Sheriff paused, “Sally?”

She broke from a trance. “Oh, yes!”

She attached wires carefully to the underside of both the suspects. She moved back behind the machine and watched as the needles started moving. Her heart raced with anticipation as she waited for Sheriff to begin questioning.

“Tia, where were you during this time yesterday?” Sheriff pressed.

Tia shifted on her tires and stole a glance at DJ. “I was at work,” she responded quickly.

Sally studied the reeling paper. Tia’s needle began sliding across it while DJ’s remained unchanged. Sheriff looked over at her expectantly.

“No,” Sally said quietly, “She wasn’t.”

He nodded and continued on, “What about you Mr. Johnson?”

“I was out hanging with my crew in Tailfin Pass.”

The other needle took suit and scribbled faster as well.

Sally gulped and told Sheriff, “No.”

He grumbled, “Tia! What time were you working until?”

“F-five.”

Her needle raced quicker. Sally shook her hood and reported hoarsely, “No…”

DJ rolled his eyes but Tia’s oil pressure sent the needle jumping more and more. She tore away from the wire and wailed, “Oh, damn it! Just tell them!”

DJ shot his girlfriend an unimpressed and irritated look. Then he grunted, “OK, fine. Yesterday I beat the gang to a race out in that old, junky racetrack. You know the one, in Ornament Valley? Anyway, I took my girl out to celebrate and turns out, “he gestured to Lightning, “his place was unlocked in the back. We snuck in and fooled around, that’s it. We didn’t take anything!”

“That’s all I needed to know. Hit the power, Sally,” Sheriff ordered.

She cut the electricity to the machine and unwillingly dragged her vision back up. His eyes were already locked on her.

Maybe not the most believable scenario but I think if you can use your imagination and envision a carsified lie detector test then it makes sense.  :smiley: So, that's who was behind the drama in the McQueen household.  :wink: By the way, DJ has always been my favourite DRH, that's why I picked him.  :sunglasses: So, if you don't mind, I would love to see any comments you may have. Thank you for reading.

This must be the first time I’ve read this in a while. It was good! I liked the lie-detector test with Tia and DJ. Can’t wait to read more!

Thanks! I know lie-detectors aren’t allowed in real court cases but since this was just something simple I thought it would serve its purpose. :slight_smile:

I enjoyed this chapter! I liked the lie-detector scene, and thought it was a good way to reveal what really happened.

It’s back! :laughing: Well, I think this was a nice chapter just to get back in the swing of things. The lie detector idea was cool, pretty creative! I wouldn’t of guessed the story to take that turn. I liked it. :sunglasses:

I just wanted to say that that must be one intense look. Dang. :laughing:

I noticed that with every time Sally told Sheriff that Tia and DJ were lying, she had a more tense reaction. I’m guessing because she started piecing it all together. If so, then nice touch. :slight_smile:

Thanks! I’m happy everyone liked the lie detector idea. :smiley: Haha, yes it would be pretty intense. :sunglasses: Yes!! That was done on purpose! Man, you don’t know how awesome it is when readers pick up on little things like that. I’m going to try and get the next chapter out on Monday. :slight_smile:

I’m very excited for the next chapter.

Me too! It’s at the point in the story where I’m just like “WHAT HAPPENS?!” 8D

Haha! Well, you shall find out with my next installment which is ready on time! :smiley: I don’t want to spoil anything so I’ll refrain from comment until after. Please enjoy!

Chapter Fourteen – “Tremare” (Shiver)

“Let’s go!” Sheriff barked at the two unlawful cars. He turned to Sally, ignoring her dumbfounded look he asked, “Would you mind putting the machine away while I take these kids to the impound? It just goes in the storage room down the hall.”

“Uh,” Sally mumbled numbly, “Yeah, no problem, Sh-.”

“And Lightning,” he interrupted, “we’ll get the money sorted out later on, OK?”

Lightning shifted his eyes nonchalantly to Sheriff. “Fine with me.”

“Alright,” Sheriff nodded, “Thanks again for your help, Sally. I’ll see you two later.” He moved towards Tia and DJ, hustling them out of the court without protest.

Sally quickly spun around to face away from McQueen. She began collecting the cords and reeled them back onto the polygraph. The machine was mounted on a low platform with wheels, but even so, she knew it’d be too difficult to push on her own.

“Do you need any help?” Lightning’s voice shattered the silence.

She cringed at the question, but realized there was no mocking tone behind it, not even a drop of resentment. The quietness continued to spawn as her emotions raged against each other. Part of her wanted to cast him off with a cool and biting ‘no’. But a bigger part of her yearned for him to stay.

“Please,” she said, just barely above a whisper.

She heard him drive across the room behind her. He breezed past her side with such ease that she almost shivered at the near graze of his body.

He acted like nothing had happened, simply situated himself and assumed pushing the judicial device. He awaited her instructions patiently.

“It’s down this way,” she muttered, and helped him guide the polygraph out to the hallway.

The storage room was quite easy to locate, and with some careful movements, they were able to fit the machine through the doorway.

“I think it goes over in that corner,” Sally said, pointing to the left part of the room.

She assisted to shove it alongside the wall and then reversed to see him eye-to-eye. He gazed at her with a drowsy look on his windshield. Her heart started to race, she could feel a breathlessness begin to rise as she tried to think of reasons to stall. She didn’t want him to go, especially when he was staring at her like that.

“That’s it?” he prompted gently.

She let herself inch a little closer to him. “Yeah… thank you.”

He didn’t make a move. He let her be the one crawling back. “You’re welcome,” he returned, drawing her closer still.

She couldn’t take it anymore. Suddenly, the storage room seemed to shrink in around her and all she wanted was to steal one touch of him. She just wanted to forget this whole ordeal had ever happened.

“Stickers…,” she whispered slowly. It was delicious to say his name again.

He rolled nearer to her with anticipation. She could feel the warmth of his breath on her lips. Her own air intake gradually grew deeper, her eyes slipped closed and her mouth parted pleadingly.

His words came huskily as he breathed into her, “Say it.”

Her eyes squeezed tight but her mouth quivered longingly as the words poured out in surrender, “I’m sorry.”

He finally caught her lips with hot and ruthless intent. He worked speedily, sucking the life from within her and leaving flickering fire in its place.

She was effortlessly driven into the wall, gasping all the while. She couldn’t recall the last time they’d kissed this passionately. All the pent-up desire was breaking free from her.

“It’s been too long,” she said softly, letting her lips brush his as she enunciated every syllable.

She moved in to kiss him more, but he backed away. Her eyes fluttered open like the wings of an insect.

“Sally,” Lightning started shakily, “I… I don’t think we should do this.”

Her expression was smacked with confusion. “What?”

McQueen struggled to find an explanation. What was he doing? Why didn’t he feel the heat he was delivering? All he knew was that things were moving way too fast and that this wasn’t going to lace the pain of his wounds. If anything, he was only inflicting more damage to himself.

He sighed dejectedly, “With everything that has happened; I just can’t. It’s too soon… and besides, I’m not your boyfriend anymore.”

Sally flinched, unable to counter against any of his reasoning. So she didn’t even try, she just sat there noiselessly and watched him drive away.

OK, so this chapter was purely written out of my own failure to resist doing so.  :laughing:  It was this scene that popped into my head and after writing it I realized it really threw a fork into the road I was planning on taking. However, it refused to be edited out of the story just because of how easily it all fell together. I think I can work with it though so I decided to let it be.  :stuck_out_tongue: Hopefully you can see how the tables have turned emotionally and in the sense of control. And I also hope that it was smart of me [i]not[/i] to take the predictable route of "kiss and make up". But I'll let you guys be the judges if you'd care to leave a comment. Thanks for reading!  :slight_smile:

Very good chapter! I loved the ending and can’t wait to see what transpires in the next chapter. I also like how you put the title of the chapter in Italian. Very creative!

Thanks! I was really winging the ending so I’m glad it worked. :stuck_out_tongue: Oh, and I love putting the titles into Italian, it is fun to pick a cool Italian word! Google translate helps of course. :sunglasses:

Talk about a fork in the road! I should of known you wouldn’t do the ol’ “kiss and make up” thing. It’s too predictable for you. :wink: But I love your little plot twist in this chapter, we think it’s all okay, happy ending, and then bam, Lightning pulls away. Moment gone. Love it. :sunglasses:

^^^ All that was my favorite part, LOL. 8D

Wonderful chapter! I like that you didn’t go the obvious route, alot of great emotional moments in this chapter! I’m very excited for the next chapter.

I love it!!! the best chapter so far, my favourite! thank you a lot for update I missed you :smiley: maybe you’ve been really busy. I love the connection between Lightning and Sally this chapter is awesome I want more!! :smiley:
could you update tomorrow please, please? of course if you are not busy or something, could you? :laughing:

Awesome! I’m happy you guys found the twist exciting!

Paulisha: Was that not one of my hottest kiss scenes? :sunglasses: That part formed before most of the chapter and is about 70% or more of why I couldn’t cut this chapter. :laughing:

Destiny: Your favourite so far? Sweet! Thank you! Well, I have play rehearsal tomorrow, so if I don’t have homework then I will try and write the next chapter in time to be released Thursday possibly. :slight_smile:

Aww! I was expecting another chapter. I can’t wait to check it out once it gets posted.

Haha! I’m sorry, I must kill you guys when I just post with a comment on this thread. 8D