TSS's Fanfiction: The Incredibles: Syndrome's Return

Violet Parr: Hmmm, spelling a 7/10 huh? Oh boy, I definetely gotta work on that.

Thakns for your review. I am incredibly glad that you liked it violet parr. Heck, even you yourself might have experienced something like that. :wink: Anyways, for whats next, I am working on something. Maybe I might give some info about it the farther along I am working on it.

Well… your spelling wasn’t all that bad. There were just a bunch of little mistakes here and there. It’s really not that bad. They were mostly typeo’s on small words and could easilly be corrected.

Oh, I almost forgot, I loved that Violet/Tony moment you wrote at the end. <3 That was so like them. :slight_smile: You could really tell how nervous Tony was when he asked Vi- I mean “Invisigirl” for an autograph. :blush: And then she kissed him! Wow, he was having a good day, wasn’t he? :laughing:

Anyway, great story! I can’t wait to hear what you have coming up next! :smiley:

You thought Tony was having a good day, think about Violet? Probably the most memorable of her entire life. :smiley:

Are you gonna publish that? I’d read it! :smiley:

Well done! I wish I had that kind of stamina to write that much. You’re quite the author! Really makes me want to take up the ol’ pen again.
I hope to see more one day :smiley:

pixarfan9099: Thank you very much. I hope you enjoyed reading it here.

Haunt: Thanks for your comments. And don’t worry, you shall read more from me very soon.

Heh, good deal. It’s certainly inspiring.

Thanks Haunt. I hope I get to read some stories from you.

The Star Swordsman wrote:

Oh, really? How soon? :smiley: Um… if I may ask.

vilet parr: I don’t know. I want to finish my story first before I start posting it. :wink:

That’s cool.

I got a question for you. See, I’ve got a fan fiction of my own that I’d like to post here. There’s only one thing holding me back, though-- what’s to keep anybody from reading it and stealing my ideas? Not that I don’t trust you guys, but it is the Internet. Anybody could just come and copy the story. So do I need a copyright first, or what? Can you even get a copyright on a story about someone else’s characters?

^ Well, technically you can’t really copyright a fanfic. It’s already copyrighted by the studio/director. If it’s art you can copyright a concept, but not the character.
Sadly, what’s one the internet is completely up for grabs. But look on the bright side. Chances are someone else has either thought of it, or done it already…Ok, so that’s not exactly what you’d call a ‘bright side’, but you get the gist.
Oh, internet. Why must you be a double-edged sword? =(

I would love to read your fanfics violet parr. And I wouldn’t worry about someone stealing your story. I worry about that al of the time, but no one has copied any of my fanfics yet. however, if someone want so borrow one of my characters, i tell them to notify me first before I decide.

TSS, THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! This is like, one of the best stories I’ve ever read! Really! :smiley:
My review
Storyline:10.00
Romance9:00
Spelling:8.00 Um overall really good! :slight_smile:

Hmm, my romance was better than my spelling huh? :laughing: Thanks for the review annaborjack.

Well, everyone loves it, (expect in real life,heh heh)

What was your favorite part annaborjack?

the part were Britney was being mean to Violet! lol jk

the part with Tony and Violet were swimming.

Good choices. Personally, I LOVED the scene were Bob first finds out that Violet gave up her powers. Very good show of emotions there. I also liked the scene were Violet kicks Britney’s butt in kick ball. :laughing: “Sweet…” (to quote Squirt.)

Thanks you two. :wink: