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Idea for Incredibles fan character

Postby albinotanuki » Mon Jul 15, 2013 6:00 am

I created this character for The Incredibles when I was a teenager and looking back, I find him to be a bit of a Marty Stu and I kinda would like to update him.

Basically, he's sort of a parody of Daredevil (yes, blind) and I had him become a love interest for Violet. What should I do to make him more interesting?
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Re: Idea for Incredibles fan character

Postby The Star Swordsman » Thu May 22, 2014 5:34 pm

Oooh, another fan made character! I like. But my only tip is if you want to make a character more intriguing, you have to make him relatable to the audience. Make him have a conflict, a struggle, something that when we watch, we feel for him and therefore, become attracted and more interested in him
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