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Postby BorntothePurple » Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:28 pm

Hey! My Cars Fanfic group did a fiction challenge recently. The assignment was to write a 500-2000 word story about the King and his wife after the big crash. My entry is at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3777170/1/Interlude and I would LOOVE feedback! I hope you like it.......it is a little more upbeat than the last one.
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Wed Sep 12, 2007 2:42 am

Well, I read it, and it was really good! NIce work BTTP!
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Postby BorntothePurple » Wed Sep 12, 2007 11:04 am

Thanks so much, Star Swordsman!!
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Postby danwisbey85 » Wed Sep 12, 2007 4:04 pm

I like it! :D

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Postby BorntothePurple » Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:15 pm

Hey Dan. If you and SS and anyone else want to make me ecstatically happy, review me at fanfiction.net .....

but anyway, I'm glad you liked it!!
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:02 am

BTTP: Well, I would, but I only review Incredibles stories on FF.net. Sorry.
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Postby lennonluvr9 » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:06 pm

Cool! I'm in the process of reading it now....*wait for it...wait for it* Done! That was really good! I felt that one too. I was like "aww, poor Mrs Weathers!" and then it was like "aww, king, you're so sweet!" [spoil]I'm glad Mrs Weathers decided to call the police because even though she hated Chick, it was the right thing to do. And that reference to Dale kinda got to me a little too. [/spoil]
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Postby Fairly Odd New Yorker » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:26 pm

I think I reviewed it. It was wonderfully written, and I liked it ^^
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Postby Colette Linguini » Sat Sep 22, 2007 8:01 pm

I've just read it. Really nice! It's obvious you put a lot of thought into it.
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Postby BorntothePurple » Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:58 pm

Aww, Thank you so mucy for your kind words, it makes me very happy to know that people like my stuff, it encourages me to keep writing!

BTW, someone asked for a epilogue to Sic Tranit Hicks so I wrote one and posted it, for anyone that is interested. Just follow the original link to the story, or go to fanfiction.net Cars section, it should be close to the top. Hope you like it!
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Postby danwisbey85 » Tue Oct 02, 2007 7:34 am

I did!

You saw my review on FF.net?

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Postby BorntothePurple » Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:28 am

Yes, I saw the review Dan, thanks. I hope you enjoyed your fic since I pretty much wrote it for you (probably wouldn't have thought of adding an epilogue if you hadn't suggested it!)
Thanks.

And Lennonluvr, the King was really nice, he is a sweetie. I can't see him [spoil]ever really wanting to hurt Chick despite what Chick did to him. He would definitely have called the police like his wife did![/spoil]

I can't wait to get working on my next fic!!
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Postby The Star Swordsman » Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:37 am

We can't wait to read it borntothepurple.
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Postby danwisbey85 » Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:42 pm

BorntothePurple wrote:Yes, I saw the review Dan, thanks. I hope you enjoyed your fic since I pretty much wrote it for you (probably wouldn't have thought of adding an epilogue if you hadn't suggested it!)
Thanks.

And Lennonluvr, the King was really nice, he is a sweetie. I can't see him [spoil]ever really wanting to hurt Chick despite what Chick did to him. He would definitely have called the police like his wife did![/spoil]

I can't wait to get working on my next fic!!


Your welcome :D

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