Alright, I’m finished chapter 2. Hope this format is better.
The second chapter begins with the Radiator Springs Crew on the plane. It’s real late at night and Lightning McQueen is looking out the window. Lightning sighs. He wishes that Doc Hudson could be with him and his friends on the trip. He starts to tear up a little bit. Mater wakes up sees that his best friend is feeling upset. He decides to see what is wrong.
“What’s wrong, McQueen?” Mater wanted to know.
Lightning looked at Mater with an upset look on his face. “I don’t know Mater.” Lightning said. “It’s just that this whole trip is not the same without Doc.”
Mater wanted to help his friend out but he knew there was nothing he could of done. Then, a thought came to him. He thought about something that would possibly cheer Lightning up. “Hey, I got an idea.” Mater told Lightning. “Why don’t we go to that pre racing party tomorrow and meet all the racers. That’ll probably cheer you up!”
Lightning thought about it for a second. Then he came up with his decision. “Sure Mater.” Lightning said feeling better.
“Good.” Mater said feeling happy that he cheered his friend up. “Will that Italian racecar be there?” “I want to get my revenge on him for insulting me on that one talk show.”
“Yeah he will but please don’t get him angry.” Lightning warned Mater. “He would just insult you even more in front of all those people. You don’t want that to happen do you?”
Mater looked at Lightning. Would he listen to his best friend here or would he disobey him? Mater then thought real hard about what he wanted to do. “Alright, buddy.” Mater said.
Lightning smiled. “It’s great that you would listen to me.” Lightning told his best friend. “Hey, it’s getting real late. Let’s say we get to bed now.”
Mater agreed.
They both went to sleep as the plane rode off into the midnight sky.
The next morning came and we see these three masterminds know as Professor Zundap, Acer and Grem. They were thinking of a way to eliminate their enemy Finn McMissile for good.
“So, what you think?” Zundap wanted to know from his henchmen. The plan was that they were going to disguise a laser beam as a camera and shoot Finn with it when he isn’t looking.
“I don’t know.” Acer said. He looked as if he was against Zundap‘s plan.
“If you don’t go with the plan, I’ll shoot you with the laser beam myself!” Zundap shouted.
Grem didn’t know what to say. He thought about agreeing with Acer but he knew the same fate would happen with him. He agreed with the plan.
“Alright were in.” Both Acer and Grem told Zundap.
All three laughed. Meanwhile, we see the James Bond car named Finn McMissile who was spying on them the entire time. He was aware of what the situation would be later that night.
Later that day, it was time for the pre race party. We see The Radiator Springs Crew enter the place.
“Look Luigi, tires!” Guido told his friend excitedly.
The both raced on to see them.
Lightning looked at Mater. He was confident in himself that his best friend wouldn’t humiliate them both at the party. “Alright Mater, best behavior here alright?” Lightning asked his friend.
“Alright, buddy!” Mater said. “You can count on me.”
“Hey McQueen!” A mystery car yelled.
It was Francesco Bernoulli. The one car who humiliated Mater and challenged Lightning. Lightning and Mater went over to Francesco.
“Hey, hot stuff.” Lightning told Francesco.
Francesco smirked. “Hey look, it’s that stop sign.” Francesco said.
Lightning laughed. “Well, I guess we got to see who’s better between us two tomorrow.” He said to Francesco.
Mater had no idea what the two cars were talking about so he went off.
Meanwhile, we see Finn McMissile looking for help to foil Zundap’s plan. He bumps into a purple colored car.
“Excuse me Miss, but are you a spy?” He asked curiously.
“I suppose you want my help to foil someone’s plan?” She asked.
Finn looked surprised. He wondered how she knew what he wanted from her. How on earth would she know about Zundap’s plan?
“The name’s Shiftwell. Holley Shiftwell.” She told Finn.
Finn was about to speak but Holley interrupted.
“So you want me to help you foil Zundap’s plan?” Holley said again.
“Why yes Miss Shiftwell but how do you know about this?” Finn wanted to know.
Holley took the time to talk about it.
“Well, Zundap used to hate me all the time but he moved on after a while.” Holley explained. “If you need help then I’m in.”
“Alright Miss Shiftwell let me explain what we’ll do.
We see that Zundap and his lemons were spying on them with the laser. It was about time to fire it.
“Just do what I told you before alright?”
The two lemons agree to it and they pressed the button. The laser was fired.
To be continued.
Wait, let me just say something…FIRST COMMENT. Oh, yeah. 
I can’t really tell you anything about your writing or give you constructive criticism now by just reading this but I definitely will after reading your first chapter tomorrow! I’m excited to see how this story will turn out, being more focused on the racing and not the spy plot. 