Update-Sunday-Monday
i lost yesterday to friends and football so the update will arrive tonight or tommorow.
Well, okay. I’ll wait for it.
here it is…i forgot that i worked on it partly last night so it was almost complete.
Chapter 9
Flex soon recovered from his free fall as the party floated on their ice berg. As soon as he was sturdy upon his feet, he took off towards the island. He returned to report his findings.
“There is a small inlet close to the eastward side. There we can put in and find some shade inside a forest.”
“Good job Flex.”
“Thanks.”
Soon the party reached the inlet. Flex and Dash soon were scouring the countryside for any sign of refuge. They both returned soon…
Dash was the first to speak. “There is a small cave about five miles away. Its big enough to keep us dry and start a fire.”
Flex swooped in. “I just saw a dense forest. We can prop up branches and make a small tent to live in.”
Frozone decided that Dash’s cave would be the best choice but not after much discussion and argument from Flex.
“Flex no! The cave will provide us immediate shelter whereas your clearing might leak. We need shelter soon because that storm is close. We will go to the cave.”
While the men were, debating Electragirl had been searching around the inlet for anything. She came across something that was shining in the sun. “Hey! Guys come look at this. It’s a dog tag. Must belong to someone on the island. It’s named Van Estaban. Hmm…V…E…!!! This is the V.E.”
“Your right Electragirl. This is part of our mysterious person. Well, let us all go to the cave a short distance off. Once we get settled we can figure out this mystery.”
Soon the little group had arrived.
Flex was the first to complain about it.
“Doesn’t that curve in the rocks look odd?”
Dash who was working on gathering wood looked up in blank anger.
“What about that hole leading back into the cave?”
Dash was utterly upset. “You know you could go over to your forest if you want too.”
Frozone butted in. “Dash! Don‘t make a mountain out of a hill. Flex try not to be upsetting about what I chose. This is the driest, safest place I know of. Lets just make the best of it. Please!”
“Okay.”
That afternoon as Dash, Electragirl, and Frozone were discussing about their mysterious V.E. person Flex started to search around the cave. He was looking intentely at a small crack that ran directly through a small boulder at the end of the cave. He went over to investigate it. As he was just about to check it out a hand gripped his shoulder!
“Flex what are you doing?”
“I…I was just checking out this rock. It has a really funny crack in it.”
He pointed out to Fro the jagged edge of the crack going all the way up the rock.
“Hey, that is bizarre!”
Soon Dash aware of the small conversation stood beside them.
“What’s bizarre?”
(Upon seeing the crack)….
“Wow! What is that?”
“A crack I found.”
“What is it from?”
“I don‘t know?”
“Can you open it to see if anything is inside?”
“I haven’t tried.”
Flex started to grapple at the crack but didn’t make any progress.
“Ugh…maybe Electragirl could get it?”
“Good idea Flex…Hey Electragirl. Come here please.”
Soon the whole group stood and watched as Electragirl slowly opened the boulder. Just as the rock split in half a loud shifting was heard. The end of the cave shifted backwards sending loose rocks down upon the group. The walls of the cave split in half revolving in opposite directions until they were completely parrellel to each other. As the group watched a small path outlines by a red mixture appeared. The path was small and ran downwards into the mountainside like a stairway. The path did in fact have steps but these were made of metal instead of rock. Along the sides of the path were red liquids bubbling upwards. The liquid seemed to go right outside of the path.
“Is that lava?” Flex asked as soon as the grinding of the rocks had stopped.
“Yah…how does the path not get swallowed up in it?” Dash asked as he turned towards Fro.
“There must be a overhanging from the top.”
“Should we go inside of it or should we stay out here where it is safe?” Electragirl was already contemplating what was on all of the group’s minds.
“Better to go in and explore then leave it unexplored.”
Soon the group was heading into the mountainside edging their way through the trail. The lava created a mist that sometimes rose into the path creating a sort of hazard because of the loss of sight. Thankfully, Frozone easily made these into ice which in turn fell to the floor clearing the path for a couple seconds. This allowed the group to make good time as they traveled farther and farther into the mountain.
Invisiforce had just woken up from a long nap and had finished her lunch meal when her door opened up and Van Estaban walked in.
“I hope you have slept well.”
“I have slept very well thank you.”
“Would you mind if I took you on a walk?”
“Not at all. I would like to see what I’m in.”
“Excellent.”
Estaban took Invisiforce first to the main command room where he showed her all the plans that Syndrome had schemed about. He then showed her the facility, which was full of robot parts and computers fully working on building as he said it…“Multiple Personalities of Robots.” He also took her to the facility that kept all of the inventions that he had made while coming to power. He showed here his collection of gadgets, guns, and of course his baseball cards. Once they reached a hallway, his attitude changed.
“So…have you enjoyed our little expedition?”
“Yes…I found it very amusing how you expect to overcome the world with a bunch of robots.”
Estaban got red in the face.
“For your information that is not all I have planned. If you remember the letter I gave you, I also am planning to destroy the world by Germ X, which is currently completed. I also said that I wanted to create a superpower-house, which would refill the world with supers. Did you forget about that?”
“No not at all. I can say that I’m not the one to make that house for you. I can also say that the power supply required for the gun is not available.”
For your further information you are powerhouse and you will supply that house once you see that your predicament in useless. I must show you one more little detail that I have created. Estaban turned to his right and threw open the doors! Electragirl starred in awe as the room lit up by automatic lights revealing cables and cylinder containers. As her eyes grew accustomed to the light she notices bright specks emitting from the cylinders and computers at the far end of the containers.
“This is your parent’s new home.”
Just as a side note…for you readers of this story.
I have started a new story which is my life fiction story.
Ansonia is the title and it is currently under the Non-Pixar Art section.
i hope you will find it as captivating as this one.
Uhh, I am a little confused with this chapter. Could you please explain it to me? I really don’t get it. I have read it over and over, but I don’t understand it.
okay lets see if i can update it.
Nice work Al-Bob! I found it very fun to read, actually!
There all updated and revised.
TSS-you can attempt to reread it…i hope it is much better. I indeed did find a few items that were misleading and rather below my standard of writting.
TS2-Yes a third reader…TSS and BDD are loyal Fan Fiction readers but new people are a rarity. Thank you for reading…
Oh I get it now. So Dash and the others are now venturing into the mountain, but what confuses me is the little segment with VIolet. V.E. explains his plans already, but I don’t understand the housing part. Can you please explain?
Superpower-house means a family of supers that posses a absolutely unbeatable characteristic.
He wants to make a family gene that is all super. If he marries her they will have the most powers from their children. Like how Violet has 2 super powers while her parents only really have one. Their children would have 2-4 powers making them unstoppable. He wants to do survival of the fittest by creating the fittest.
here is the dict. definition of powerhouse just to clarify even more-
a person, group, team, or the like, having great energy, strength, or potential for success.
Okay I understand now. He wants to create a Super Hero army using Violet to reproduce super babies, hoping that most of them, if not all, have the Super Gene in them.
But what happened to the parents?
That will be in the next Chapter 
that was great…you ask what happened perfect
that tells me that you are inticed into my story hahahaha…
I just read it right now, and it’s interesting where it’s going. However (call me slow, but) I don’t get is whetherV.E. the good guy or the bad guy. The Omnidroid is the real mastermind behind the evil plan, right?
I hope to see an update really soon.
The face part is a real hint to who is controlling the evil scheme. Think in the mind of the droid…what would he do to Estaban to make Violet like him more, If she likes him becuase of his sorrow she might be persuaded more easily.
The droid is very smart in what he is doing with V.E.
Who’s BDD?
Bright-Dot-Dasher
its a nickname to save time writting.
Update soon everybody!!!
This is ending up so sweet!!
Here we go again
…Van Estaban never moved as Invisiforce started to sway a little.
This is where your parents now reside in. This room is my control room. It has all the devices currently in use and close to use. Over there I have my invention table. Here, this is my latest gadget that was originally Syndrome’s. It’s that zero gravity err…thing…
Invisiforce started to recover herself but became aware that Estaban was only looking at the cylinders near the corner of the room. He beckoned her to come over to the corner with him. She walked over.
What is this? She asked. Afraid of what she might find.
Estaban didn’t respond but continued to stare into the cylinder.
Invisiforce looked into the cylinder. A faint light was emitted from the center. The light didn’t seem to come from anything but as Invisiforce kept starring she started to see some shapes begin to take place.
“Good!! We arrived just in time to see this device in action.” Estaban said turning to Invisiforce with a wide grin on his metallic face.
The shapes started to twist and turn until they formed two figures. Invisiforce starred in awe as her mom and dad appeared where once there had been just light!
“MOM!! DAD!!”
“They can’t hear you. Your parents have been turned into what every super is on the inside…pure Energy. Your parents run my germx machine. They are the ones that supply me with the power to run the machine and they even run the factory for the droids. Whenever a super looses his ability to change into their old self their power starts to break through revealing pure energy where their powers once where. It’s rather complicated.”
“Why do you have me here?”
“Because you need to see that your problem is in resisting my commands.”
“If you still think I’m going to be your wife you’d better get lost. I will never marry you. NEVER!”
Estaban now took over…
“Okay then you leaves me no option.” with that he picked the super up by the waist, and with droid strength carried her on his shoulder back to her chamber.
Flex and Dash had just got to the end of the path when Frozone and Electragirl called out for them to stop.
Flex looked over at Dash and said. “I’m going on you coming?”
“You bet I am.”
As the two stepped out of the path, the walls opened into a large room full of screens and computers. Dash looked around for any clues of live forms nearby.
“Nobody is here?”
“What is this place?” Flex asked as he edged towards the screens.
“Hey come look at this! The initials V.E. are put on this chair. This must be our mysterious person’s hideaway.”
“Why doesn’t he guard this place?”
Suddenly Dash let out a scream as a droid leaped out of the shadows towards them!
“Maybe he does.” Flex said as he dodged the droid as it came rushing towards them.
The droid missing his target and started to look around for Dash. Dash had run back into the path and was soon racing towards the droid. It never saw him coming. Soon a bashed droid lay upon the floor just as Dash reappeared next to Flex.
“Whew…that was close.”
“What happened to Frozone and Electragirl?”
“We shot past them remember? In the path.”
“Oh yah, should we wait for them?”
“Nah, lets keep going. We can defeat many of these bots and if we get outnumbered we can always come back here to meet up with them.”
“Well okay.”
“Race ya.”
Electragirl kicked and squirmed but only hurt herself because Estaban really had a tight grip. As soon as he reached her chamber, he threw her onto the bed.
“Now you listen to me!”
As she turned, her eyes to his he started to look different. His eyes started to glow blue and yellow. They started to grow larger and smaller as well. She started to feel negative thought rush into her brain.
NO!! She screamed in her mind…NO!!
Let it go…your helpless and in peril. Join my side and help my cause. Join Me. Join Me!! Forget about them they can’t help you!! Join Me…Join…Joi…
NOOOOOO!!!
Stop right there!!!
Estaban swung around to see what he least expected!
Oh boy, a very exciting chapter there Al-Bob. You really had me glued to the screen. Pretty nicely written. I love it.
Update soon.
Wow, you mastered making V.E. show his ruthless side in this chapter, and the scheme is brilliantly twisting. Extremely exciting where it cuts off.